no longer the same

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no longer the same

By: cocoisme

Reviewer: comebackhomeXOXO

★ ★ ★ 

1. Title - 6/10 -

Regarding the title, I presumed i was about to view a romace fiction. However, the title had very little linkage to the story within, hence  that would've degraded the stakes.
 

2. Description/Forward - 7/10 -

It was almost flawless, but something din't quite 'click'. The last few lines weren't that much of a suspense. 

(Is SM a person or a company of people?
 

3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 6/10 -

Nah, the charecters existed. Not much was mentioned and I b