Young & Beautiful

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Young and Beautiful

By: juliyah

Reviewer: nadahishamazzamXO

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1. Title - 7/10 -

This title is okay. However, It's not hooking, I think another title would fit better. 
 

2. Description/Forward - 6/10 -

The video helped in showing how the story is going, but the forward was just too plain. Also, Is it like a prologue? Because a forward, mostly, contains a hooking part from the story itself.
 

3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 8/10 -

I liked how you expressed sehun's character with time, but I honestly didn't see any