The beginning of the end

review pick - up

The Beginning of the end

By: syamimiyana

Reviewer: xXxmani923xXx

★ ★ ★ 

1. Title - 9/10 - The title sort of fits well with the story; it doesn't really sound  original though.

2. Description/Forward - 10/10 - You have a sufficient amount of information in your foreword and description. 

3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 9/10 - Character development was pretty decent, though I felt like the oc and Taehyung's feelings for each other grew faster than what it should have considering this is a story about arranged marriages.

4. Plot/Originality - 24/25- You did make your story as original as possible but it still felt cliched throughout. Even so, your plot was still a little  interesting to read and even funny