[RV] The Beginning of the End
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The beginning of the end
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The Beginning of the end
By: syamimiyana
Reviewer: xXxmani923xXx
★ ★ ★
1. Title - 9/10 - The title sort of fits well with the story; it doesn't really sound original though.
2. Description/Forward - 10/10 - You have a sufficient amount of information in your foreword and description.
3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 9/10 - Character development was pretty decent, though I felt like the oc and Taehyung's feelings for each other grew faster than what it should have considering this is a story about arranged marriages.
4. Plot/Originality - 24/25- You did make your story as original as possible but it still felt cliched throughout. Even so, your plot was still a little interesting to read and even funny
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