Love Replacement

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Love Replacement

By: karmachameleon

Reviewer: imyeonieyeonie

★ ★ ★ ★ ★

1. Title - 9/10 -

The title wasn’t that catchy for me but I can say that it’s connection with the story itself is good. Because Nayoung was literally made as the love replacement for Yixing.
 

2. Description/Forward - 8/10 -

Your description and foreword was classy. I actually prefer these kind of formats to be very honest. But it still lacks something, like a bit more of the character introduction and glimpse of the story like conversations. Since this will intrigue more people to read your story since they have pre-knowledge about the whole thing going on. .
 

3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 10/10 -

I’ll give you a perfect score with this because I love how good you showcased the characters specially Nayoung. She started with being clumsy and such but she became so mature by the end of the story. It’s