White Winter Hymnale

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White Winter Hymnal

By: juliyah

Reviewer: lynnlaura

★ ★ ★ ★ ★

1. Title - 10/10 -

The title was splendid. I love it, it totally relates to your plot. And, your story was very well written as well.
 

2. Description/Forward - 10/10 -

I was so excited to start reading this story basically because of your title and the way you have written the description. Although, I was a little disappointed that it was a one-shot story.
 

3. Character Develpment/ Showcasting - 8/10 -

Way to go to describe your characters and indicate their thoughts. But I think you could have done better if you could write down which POV is which. That would clear all confusion to be honest.
 

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