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Need an honest review? 

well you have come to the right place ;) I, _saranghaekyuti, also known as R.K, will provide you honest reviews/feedbacks. Warning! I am straight-forward, so the review might be harsh. I might make your day or might ruin your day but hey, it helps you improve your writing skills! Now that I finished my little rant, let's head to the foreword ^^

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Foreword

Target Lock!

Obviously there will be simply rules to follow.

1. Please subscribe before and comment after you requested. If you unsubscribe after I finished, I will haunt you down. Plus I am too lazy to nofity everyone so yea XD

2. Once received, please remember to credit phennl@milkywave request shop. You don't have to repost the review; just post the credit in the foreword.   

3. Warning, as I said above, "I might make your day or ruin your day," I don't intentionally hurt your feelings. I did say I am going to give you an honest review.

3. Be patients! I have a life outside of AFF and fanfics to take care of. I am not a robot! It also depends on the length of your story. 

4. I do not and I will say it again, I do not review rated fanfics. Why? Because I am still a minor. I am fine with or yuri as long as it isn't rated.

5. Please post the application form in the comment box. 

6. If any of these rules are not follow, it will be rejected.

7. I will add more if I can think of any.  


Review Criteria:

Title: (-/5)

Does it catch the readers' attention? Does it make the reader want to know more about the story? Is the title too clichè? Is it properly capitalized?

Appearance: (-/5)

Does it have a poster/background? Does it make the reader attract to it or the "OMG what is this? -face-palm-"? For me, I really care about the poster since it's the center of attention.

Description/Foreword: (-/15)

Does it make the readers want to read more?

Plot/Originality: (-/10)

Is the plot original or is it too common? Is it realistic? 

Characters: (-/5)

Are the characters well described? Are they realistic?

Flow: (-/10)

Is it too fast or too slow? Does it make the story make sense? 

Grammar and Spelling: (-/20)

Whether or not English is your first language, I am not going to go easy on you. I did say I am straight-forward and giving an honest review.

Overall Enjoyment: (-/20)

Did you actually enjoy the story, or were you bored to death? Did you feel like reading more and more? Would you recommend it to others? Warning! When I review fanfics, I am not going to be biased.

Total: (-/90) --%

Comments: Any advices or general comments 


Application Form:

AFF user: 

Story Title:

Story Link:

Status: ongoing/complete

How many chapters would you like me to read?:


Special Thanks to Milky-chan from ▬ sweetmallows blog ▬ GRAPHIC SITE❤ for the awesome poster and background (:

Comments

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Akashi_Seijuuro
#1
AFF user: eagle_tamer

Title: 200 Lives, 1 Love

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/371093

Status: ongoing

How many chapters: It currently has 12 so, yeah, 12
one_in_a_million
#2
AFF user: one_in_a_million

Story Title: The Thin Line Between You and Him

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/106736/the-thin-line-between-you-and-him-jonghyun-key-nichkhun-schoollife-shinee-victoria-you

Status: ongoing

How many chapters would you like me to read?: when ever you feel like stopping
Triple-Key
#3
woo! 92% xD
I wish I can get that much for English at school LOL (at most would be in the 80's)
Thanks for the review :)
jaimiesleepybug #4
Thank you for the review ^^
CrystalxDoLL
#5
Thank you for the review :)~!
_saranghaekyuti #6
@Triple-Key: It's okay. I am gunna add you to the pending list now (:<br />
Triple-Key
#7
woops, I almost forgot to subscribe, sorry for that ><"
Triple-Key
#8
AFF user: Triple-Key<br />
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Story Title: Not Only Audacious<br />
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Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/123962/not-only-audacious-os-highschool-jonghyun-oneshot-onew-romance<;br />
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Status: complete <br />
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How many chapters would you like me to read?: It's a one-shot, so all :D
SheeLa_ELF
#9
AFF user: SheeLa_ELF<br />
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Story Title: Donghae-ah, I'm Sorry...<br />
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Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/28988/donghae-ah-i-m-sorry-oneshot-donghae-korean-oneshot-sad-donghwa<;br />
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Status: Complete<br />
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How many chapters would you like me to read?: All
GreenGardenPop
#10
thx so much for review and the link and sorry for make you confuse...