Flower Shop
By: RusseeLa1015
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/107787/

Title: (2.5/5)

It doesn’t attract the reader. I would just scroll the page but the title is simple and short.

Appearance: (2/5)

It’s colourful but it can be a blinding to ones’ eye.

Description/Foreword: (5/15)

It was too short. You can expand more but you still add credit which is good.

Plot/Originality: (9/10)

Not the most original plot but the way you describe things makes it different from others.

Characters: (5/5)

It is very well portrayed.

Flow: (10/10)

The pace is just right. It was detailed and descriptive. 

Grammar and Spelling: (15/20)

There are a few grammatical errors. As I read it, it was quite confusing. Other than that, it was great.

Overall Enjoyment: (20/20)

It was great. It gave me different types of feeling as I read it.

Total: (68.5/90) 76%

Comments: It is great. I think that you should try to expand the description and foreword to improve more in the future. Keep up the good work!