Why You Got To Be So Mean?! 
By: fireworkrainbow
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/108313/why-you-got-to-be-so-mean-angst-oneshot-woohyun-you

Title: (3/5)

I kinda got my attention in a way but it's a very common phrase. It summarized the idea of what it will be about.

Appearance: (5/5)

I love it. The blending is splendid. High-Five to the maker x)

Description/Foreword: (9/15)

It didn't take me into the story. I felt like pressing the back button and continue scrolling down. No offense though. 

Plot/Originality: (6/10)

I feel it is really common. The story itself is suppose to be angst, but i didn't feel it in your story. It wasn't very well-developed. 

Characters: (2.5/5)

The characters seem realistic but it wasn't well-introduced nor described. I think you need to add more details

Flow: (8/10)

The pace was alright expect it didnt have a lot of detail like I thought it would have since it's a one-shot.

Grammar and Spelling: (4/20)

There was lots of grammaticall errors. I will give you a summarize of it. You need to reread before you post to see if you add anything extra such as an apostrophe. Never start a sentence with any conjunction words (and, but etc.). Also after the "..." you don't need to captialized the letter unless it is after a period. You need to add commas in the right places, it seem that you don't really have a pause in your story. Something you use the period in the incorrect places as well. 

Overall Enjoyment: (9/20)

For me, I thought it was an angst type of story due to the poster and tags. When I actually read it, I don't get that feel. It was rather short as well. 

Total: (46.5/90) 52%

Comments: I might seem a bit harsh but don't feel discouraged. I think you need to add more details in the story and need someone to revise it before you post it up. I know everyone is not perfect. Don't feel discouraged and give up. Just continuing writing and I am sure you will improve.