My Possessive Best Friend
By: jaimiesleepybug
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/118149/my-possessive-best-friend-donghae-minho-romance-shinee-you

Title: (3/5)

It was unoriginal but it made me think what it is about.

Appearance: (4/5)

The blending is amazing. Love it! The character chart is well done too ! High five to those people but the thing is that the theme doesn't match well together. It has two different feelings. It is best to have one graphic designer to do it for you. 

Description/Foreword: (10/15)

Seems original but when I read it finished, I feel that there is something in there that makes me don't want to continue. It kinda reveals a bit too much of the story. Love how you have a charcter chart in your foreword.

Plot/Originality: (10/10)

I love how you started the story, it leaves the reader to think "what just happened?" The development is great and itès really original in my eyes.

Characters: (5/5)

It was very well explained. I can imagine how the characters acted. 

Flow: (10/10)

From what I read so far, it's good. It doesn't have a lot of details but I can absorb it in. 

Grammar and Spelling: (18.5/20)

There wasn't a lot spotted. Never use conjunction words to start a sentence unless you will combine with another sentence. 

Overall Enjoyment: (18/20)

Comparing to it from the foreword with the chapters. It is totally different. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. 

Total: (78.5/90) 87%

Comments: Keep up the good work :D