The Dating Subject

by: dubumints

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/75796/the-dating-subject-comedy-onew-romance-shinee-you

Title: (5/5)

I got to say it is one of the rare titles you can find on AFF. It really attracts the reader to read more into it. It leaves an impression in their mind as well as a sense of questioning.

Appearance: (3.5/5)

I love how the gif on the poster was done. You hardly find any graphic designers that can make gif posters but then again, Maki –if it is her- doesn’t really seem to fit since her personality is different.

Description/Foreword: (15/15)

Short and well explained. It generalized what the story was going to be about.

Plot/Originality: (9.5/10)

It was amazingly done. It was very original. I hardly see any fanfic that was similar to this. I would like to see more interactions between the main characters with others.  

Characters: (4.5/5)

The characters are well-described. I like how you use different colors for different characters but it can be blinding and confusing.

Flow: (10/10)

The flow is great. In each and every chapter, I can absorb and understand what was going on. It was very descriptive and detailed.  

Grammar and Spelling: (18.5/20)

There were grammatical errors here and there. Almost every single line was separated as it was a new paragraph and that is not really right. Never use conjunction words like and, but etc. unless you are making a compound sentences.

Overall Enjoyment: (20/20)

I really enjoy reading this fanfic. I would want to know what happen next. The only thing that made you lose mark is how different characters got a different color. Some were the same, which made it seems confusing.

Total: (86/90) 96%

Comments: I loved this fanfic. It is interesting and oh how I wish dating was a subject so I won’t be single for once...jks. Keep up the good work!