My Best Friend is A Crossdresser
By: CrystalxDoLL
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/81697/my-best-friend-is-a-crossdresser-comedy-fluff-hoya-infinite-myungsoo-sungjong-sungyeol

Title: (5/5)

WOW! Pretty Interesting title. Caught my attention right away but I think that "a" should be lower case.

Appearance: (2.5/5)

Need some more spark into it. I feel that there is something missing to make your poster attractive.

Description/Foreword: (6/15)

Hmm, you need to be more creative here. It reveals a bit too much of a story but it is better than an essay plot. You could've added a character chart.

Plot/Originality: (7.5/10)

A bit of an over-rated plot but it is written well.

Characters: (5/5)

It was well introduced and explained.

Flow: (5/10)

It was a bit too fast. I couldn't really take in all the things that was happening.

Grammar and Spelling: (17/20)

Not much that could be seen but you might want to check out this site. Don't use "..." too much.

Overall Enjoyment: (10/20)

I didn't really like it cause I don't get the feel when I read this. I do think it is well-written.

Total: (58/90) 64%

Comments: I think you shouldn't really use over-rated plots and slow down a bit in my opinion.