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Title: (5/5)
It caught my attention due to the word "Audacious." I learnt a new word xD
Appearance: (5/5)
Beyond my imagination of the work! Hi-five to the designer of the poster.
Description/Foreword: (10/15)
It could be a bit better.
Plot/Originality: (9/10)
Seems really realistic and nice inspirations .
Characters: (5/5)
It is very well-done and descriptive.
Flow: (10/10)
Perfect in my eyes.
Grammar and Spelling: (19/20)
I prefer you not to write "..." at the beginning or the end of the sentence.
Overall Enjoyment: (20/20)
Amazing (:
Total: (83/90) 92%
Comments: It's amazing. I love how you incorporated the flashbacks in between. Keep up the good work (:
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