Goodbye, forever
By: shootingroses
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/111087

Title: (1.5/5)

It seems like a common title. A bit to cliche in a way. I think it can be more creative.

Appearance: (4/5)

I love the poster but I don't get why the title are two different things.

Description/Foreword: (14/15)

Short and Simple. It made me curious and read on though I totally hate HyunA. A good description and foreword can make a slight difference.

Plot/Originality: (10/10)

To me, it seems very original. I love how you developed it as it went on. 

Characters: (5/5)

Very well described. 

Flow: (10/10)

The flow was great! It was very detailed. 

Grammar and Spelling: (16/20)

There wasn't any noticable grammatical errors. Never end a sentence with "..." You need to add commas where it is necessary. Other than that, I can't really spot it. I think you made a typo in chapter eight with the flashback, one is suppose to be end flashback. Every dialogue should be in a new paragraph.

Overall Enjoyment: (20/20)

Yes, I enjoyed it. Amazing how I think of HyunA differently now, but I still don't change my pov about her. 

Total: (80.5/90) 89%

Comments: I think you should re-check your work before you post it. Keep up and never stop writing.