Bad Things Come in Small Packages
By: LittlePetalBracelet
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/97384/the-package-trilogy-bad-things-come-in-small-packages-bbomb-blockb-taeil-ukwon-zico-parkkyung-pyojihoon

Title: (4/5)

It’s good but it’s too long.

Appearance: (3/5)

It is simple and cute but it’s too dull.

Description/Foreword: (14/15)

It was different from others. The questionnaire caught my attention; a very clever way to catch readers’ attention.

Plot/Originality: (7/10)

It wasn’t the most original fanfic I see, but the way you developed it and the character’s portrayal was great.

Characters: (5/5)

A lot of details were put into the characters. They seem realistic.

Flow: (8/10)

The pace was good but the switch of different POV’s are quite hard to follow at times.

Grammar and Spelling: (15/20)

I haven’t seen any grammatical errors so far. Never end or start a sentence with “...”

A typo at the’ end call’

“The person, who poked me, was a boy.” not “The person who poke me was a boy.”

Overall Enjoyment: (20/20)

It is very captivate and entertaining.

Total: (76/90) 84%

Comments: It is well-written. The colors can be a bit blinding and also you should change the POV. It is hard to follow sometimes. Keep up the good work!