New One-shot

Black Pearl

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/970733/a-curve-in-the-road-baekhyun-chanyeol-baekyeol-chanbaek

 

Oh my God I can't believe I'm actually doing this. I'm going to be killing myself with anxiety and I haven't even posted the actual story yet.

This is the Baekyeol one-shot that I asked if anyone would read. I took a break from this story for the past few days and spent way too much time writing it.

A few of you said that you'd read it and I'd love it if you actually did, because I don't know how to write one-shots and I like advice and criticism.

Yeah. If you could check it out as my second piece then I'd love that. That's all.

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IsabelleShion
I'm halfway done with editing Black Pearl! I really love my Kaisoo in this story and I can't wait to begin writing it again! This story is more smooth now!
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ninrose #1
Chapter 5: I can’t believe I havent found this sooner.. o__o
Ewcwhydromarine #2
Chapter 44: I'm happy for you :) you're very humble :) you really got a skill in writing... or typing... or basically arranging words well :)
Ewcwhydromarine #3
Chapter 43: Woah, embrace Pokemon girl! Pokemon for life! !! The story is nice by the way. I like the series of events :)
Ewcwhydromarine #4
Chapter 41: The way you arrange the story line is nice. A little mystery. A little suspense. A little humour. It's a joy to read :)
Ewcwhydromarine #5
Chapter 40: Liked it? No. Loved it!! XD
Ewcwhydromarine #6
Chapter 39: Runningman reference? Nice :) hehe... What a cliffhanger o.o
Punkjazz #7
Chapter 45: chapter 37: Wow! I've just finished this story and I can't begin to tell you how
much I enjoyed it. I feel like your insecurities as an author that you harboured in the first half were completely erased in the second half and not only did I get to see the story develop, but also your confidence and ability as a writer! Things will only improve the more you write so don't ever give up! I love the end of this story and it's not easy to write a story like this, but you've really done it justice in the end!
Ewcwhydromarine #8
Chapter 37: Hmmm... commenting on this chapter might bring out some bad memories for you but nevertheless, life can be unpredictable at times. You will go thru many ups and downs. Maybe this is just one of those down moments in your life. A lesson to learn. An experience to gain. A skill to achieve. And an opportunity to be stronger :)
Ewcwhydromarine #9
Chapter 36: The fluff was just nice. The humour also just right :)
Ewcwhydromarine #10
Chapter 33: I've been reading and enjoying it so far. I didn't think I should leave any comments because ... well, since it's completed and all. .. But I'll just conmment anyway. This is really good. The idea and genre of fantasy including superhuman abilities really attracted me. I get lost in this marvellous world. Well, gonna continue reading :)
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