RP-1

Rejected.

SungMin POV.

 

My heart is beating like crazy.I don't know what to do anymore.Geez.

Right now.I'm infront of my love's locker.I supposed to leave my love letter for him in thing freaking locker.

I sounds like a girl.

I open my bag and pulled the letter.I found myself looking around.Someone might caught me,they will think i'm a robber or something.

I stopped looking around and let out a big sigh.I can do this.FIGHTING!~.

I slowly open his locker and..and..

''YAH''

''What are you doing?'' someone shouted.Argggh.

HE'S HERE.

What should i do?!!!

I slowly looked at him.I'm dead.

''Uhmmm i'm just checking every locker cause my biology book is missing.''i said while looking at the floor.Which i think is the most interesting thing in my situation right now.Urghh i lied.How can i keep this letter.He might sees it.He walk closer to me and lean his body in the locker next to his.

''Is that so?But what are you hiding in your back?''

''M-my.....it's nothing.''i said while having a uneasy smile.I can slowly drown in his eyes.Not now.

''Can i see it?'' He said while trying to see my back.

''No you can't see it.''i said while trying to hide it properly.He keep trying to look.

''Ok!Go now!''

''Y-yes thanks.''i said and slowly turning around from him.I let out a sigh.That so close.WRONG MOVE!

He grab the letter from me.HOW ?!! i looked at my right hand and it's just the envelope.TT.TT NO!

I nervously looked at him.

He's glaring!!!

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maidencho
#1
Chapter 4: I'm just reading this^^. Well, allow me to correct some things for you^^

If you put dot(.), please put space before you start another words.

Example : Kyuhyun hate Sungmin. But Sungmin love him.

Instead,

Kyuhyun hate Sungmin.but Sungmin love him.


And i also want to ask. You wrote in the part 4:
''Is that your final conclusion? If yes.I no We will make your life living hell..."

Isn't that "if yes. I am not." instead of "if yes.I no"?

Well maybe that just typos. But I hope you receive all of my opinions about this :D

Anyway this kind of idea already so many but I really loved yours. Beside of all the typos, you wrote really well because honestly, I can't even wrote anything kkkk~~

Great job author!!
AmyPark101 #2
Chapter 29: Its so cute >·<...!!
Yeahh happy ending!!!
Minniebaby
#3
Chapter 29: i love the happy endings! : )
this fic is so good I'm gonna miss it <3
kyuhyunmyheart
#4
Chapter 29: The ending is so lovely~~~ My Kyumin Feeeeels~~~ Thank u for writing this story~! ^^ Keep it up~^^
kyuhyunmyheart
#5
Chapter 28: A.S.D.F.G.H.J.K.L CHO KYUHYUN JUST CONFESSED ASDFGHJKLASDFGHKL BUTTERFLIES IN MY STOMACH>///////<
HeeApprentice
#6
Chapter 27: Odg this is hilarious.. imaging Wookie's reaction if he'll find out that the "girl" Kyu's going to confess to is Sungmin ㅋㅋㅋ
kyumin99 #7
Chapter 26: can't wait for min jealousy next chapter ~ thanks for the update !
Iluvmin #8
Chapter 25: Hhheee.. magic word: my love.....
kyumin99 #9
Chapter 25: i love this chapter ~ so excited!!!!

pls update soon