9

The Choice

Narrator

 

Junhee watched as the other girl washed her face and stared at herself at the mirror.

“Are you okay?” She asked. Hyemi looked at her, Junhee was quite shocked to see the emotion in her eyes.

Normally, girls would cry when that type of thing just happened to them,but Hyemi looked beyond angry.

Junhee hid her smile, she was talking to the girl who had kicked her cousin the other day. She wanted to hug Hyemi for doing that.

“You know, the F4 will come after you too.” Hyemi said flatly. Junhe shrugged.

“I dont really care about them.” She commented, assessing her loose green top and skinny jeans on the mirror. Hyemi noticed her no-uniform state.

“Do you?” Junhee asked her.

“I dont. I’m sick of the rich kids in this school.”

Junhee smiled and looked at her reflection.

“But...are you a student here?” Hyemi asked.

“You could say that, I just started this semester.”

Hyemi smiled.

“Well, me too. I’m Shin Hyemi by the way and....thanks..back there.”

“No problem, and..I really admire you for standing up against those four idiots, Hyemi. I hope you continue to do so.” Junhee smiled at her before stepping out from the restroom.

 

 

“Are you crazy?!” Himchan bellowed.

His three friends looked away as he glared at the two sophomores.

“I told you just to scare her not to take her clothes off!”

The students flinched as Himchan kicked the coffee table and caused it to shake.

“I’m...sorry, sunbae.”

“But, one girl came in and~”

“Beat you, you should be proud of that.” Himchan said his voice full of sarcasm.

Kai’s ear perked up and turned to look at the damage on the students, there was a huge bruise on the shorter one’s cheek and the taller student couldn’t stand properly.

“A girl did that to you?” Kai stood up and looked at them, they both nodded. Kai turned to Daehyun with raised brows.

“How did she look?”

“Even though she kicked us, she..was really pretty. Long hair and~”

“Stop it!” Himchan hissed.

“She knew we were doing it for you sunbae, but she ignored us~”

“Get out.” Himchan said.

“Sunbae~”

“Get out of my sight!”

 

Himchan plopped back on his seat and drank the glass of water beside him.

“A girl that can beat two guys single handedly.” Kai said.

“Reminds me of someone.” Daehyun finished. Chunji looked up from his cellphone.

“What are you talking about, Kim Jongin?” Himchan asked.

“It’s sad how this Hyemi seems to be getting the upper hand, but it’s a good thing. We still have that bet.” Kai nodded.

“She will lo~”

The doors to their lounge suddenly burst open. Shin Hyemi strode in.

Himchan stood up, surprised by her sudden appearance.

“Here to apologize?” He asked. But Hyemi just smirked at him.

Then he felt a fist connecting to his jaw, Himchan staggered back and cursed.

“What are you doing?!”

Then he felt Hyemi stick something on his forehead.

Daehyun bit back his laugh and looked away. Chunji looked at Shin Hyemi with a smile.

“I warned you, Kim Himchan.” Hyemi said with finality before leaving the place.

Kai leaned over and plucked out the card from Himchan’s foreahed.

“A red card.” He grinned as he flipped it over his fingers. Himchan stood up and blinked.

“That girl...she’s something.” Chunji said as he patted his shoulder.

Himchan frowned and nodded.

 

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as soon as i finish my other ff i'll be focusing on this one :>

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zangsia1 #1
Chapter 49: Great story authornim, would have wanted an epilogue with this or another long chapter but love it anyway.
Thanks!
nsksyu77
#2
Chapter 49: Nice one
-2Mirae-
14 streak #3
Chapter 49: The first thing I thought when I read the foreword was that it reminded me of boys over flowers. It's been so long since I watched that drama and this story brings back memories ♡ I totally ship chunji and junhee. One of the many things I liked about this story is that the mother/parents is different from BOF
Snandunggina #4
Chapter 9: Hhhhhaaaaa red card for himchan. Even buddy even
nabi_88
#5
Chapter 49: Read it in one go!! Lovely story,, wish there would be more Himchan and Hyemi fluff moment!!
xoxosenshine #6
Chapter 49: Wow kim himchan . Its good . I expect it to be like bof but it turns out not exactly . Kkkk good job btw
Imaginator123 #7
Chapter 39: The story was great, and i really liked the characters, but i couldn't help but feel like each description of the characters weren't expressed enough. Junhee was expressed the best so good job, she even gave out her own aura. Though, The relationship of Himchan and Hyemi felt so dull, it wasn't written as well as it was expected it to be. The friendship of F4 also felt lacking, it seemed like there was no feeling or warmth between the four of them. Lastly, the and ending wasn't expressed clearly, sometimes i felt like i didn't understand what was going on. I think it would have been better if there were more memories being written between them, or smiles and laughters between the friends.
Though, i love what you've done with Junhee and Chunji. Now this relationship was written well and there were feelings and twists in them but things went well, though i was a bit unsatisfied with (again) the relationship between Himchan and Hyemi. Since it became more like Junhee's story.
Overall, good job for making the fanfic and i hope my constructive comment could help you do better next time! I know you can do it :D
dalamjwi07 #8
Chapter 49: Omaigad, your story is beautiful. Am i weird if I need kai and a young girl dress in a pair of jeans and loose shirt sequel >///< ?
xoxolove522
#9
Chapter 49: Beautiful story! And I like junhee character here! What should I say? Straight but caring? Haha
guiltyNaNa #10
Chapter 49: i wish their was a sequel between Hyemi and Himchan...^^^