16

The Choice

 

Narrator

 

“I heard you got hurt.”

Junhee looked up, she was talking with her cousin and the F4 at the school’s gardens.

“You heard?”

Lay nodded and grinned at her.

“Dance practice?” Junhee asked.

“In ten minutes.” He replied before giving Himchan a nod. Junhee smiled and gathered her things.

“You have practice?” Chunji asked.

“Yeah.”

“But you just got hurt.” Chunji’s brows furrowed.

Himchan grinned.

“Oppa, it’s just a bruise. Not a fracture.” Junhee rolled her eyes at him and followed Lay.

The four guys watched as Junhee walk with her best friend, Zhang Yixing.

 

“Which delusional fool had the guts to hurt you?”

Junhee chuckled and playfully wrapped one arm around his neck.

“A stupid one. Oppa was so mad.” She shook her head. Lay chuckled and flicked her forehead.

“Wae?”

“Dont use that bruise of yours as an excuse today, arasso?”

Junhee chuckled.

“Arasso, Mister Zhang.”

 

Chunji winced and looked away.

“You know those two are really close.” Kai commented. Daehyun nodded.

“It’s funny how they’re not seeing each other. You know, dating and stuff.” Kai shrugged.

Himchan looked at his other friend.

“I’ll...have to leave first. I’m needed at the company.” Chunji said as he stood up.

 

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Filler chapter :>

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as soon as i finish my other ff i'll be focusing on this one :>

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zangsia1 #1
Chapter 49: Great story authornim, would have wanted an epilogue with this or another long chapter but love it anyway.
Thanks!
nsksyu77
#2
Chapter 49: Nice one
-2Mirae-
14 streak #3
Chapter 49: The first thing I thought when I read the foreword was that it reminded me of boys over flowers. It's been so long since I watched that drama and this story brings back memories ♡ I totally ship chunji and junhee. One of the many things I liked about this story is that the mother/parents is different from BOF
Snandunggina #4
Chapter 9: Hhhhhaaaaa red card for himchan. Even buddy even
nabi_88
#5
Chapter 49: Read it in one go!! Lovely story,, wish there would be more Himchan and Hyemi fluff moment!!
xoxosenshine #6
Chapter 49: Wow kim himchan . Its good . I expect it to be like bof but it turns out not exactly . Kkkk good job btw
Imaginator123 #7
Chapter 39: The story was great, and i really liked the characters, but i couldn't help but feel like each description of the characters weren't expressed enough. Junhee was expressed the best so good job, she even gave out her own aura. Though, The relationship of Himchan and Hyemi felt so dull, it wasn't written as well as it was expected it to be. The friendship of F4 also felt lacking, it seemed like there was no feeling or warmth between the four of them. Lastly, the and ending wasn't expressed clearly, sometimes i felt like i didn't understand what was going on. I think it would have been better if there were more memories being written between them, or smiles and laughters between the friends.
Though, i love what you've done with Junhee and Chunji. Now this relationship was written well and there were feelings and twists in them but things went well, though i was a bit unsatisfied with (again) the relationship between Himchan and Hyemi. Since it became more like Junhee's story.
Overall, good job for making the fanfic and i hope my constructive comment could help you do better next time! I know you can do it :D
dalamjwi07 #8
Chapter 49: Omaigad, your story is beautiful. Am i weird if I need kai and a young girl dress in a pair of jeans and loose shirt sequel >///< ?
xoxolove522
#9
Chapter 49: Beautiful story! And I like junhee character here! What should I say? Straight but caring? Haha
guiltyNaNa #10
Chapter 49: i wish their was a sequel between Hyemi and Himchan...^^^