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The Choice

 

Narrator

 

It was another day at Daehan. Everything seemed to be going well, except for one student. Hyemi had been bullied ever since her first class. She could not believe that bullying still existed within students her age. They were university students, for Pete’s sake.

Last night, her parents asked her where her bike was, she couldn’t answer them. She could not tell them the truth. She could not tell them how much Daehan University, the school which her parents wanted her to attend, actually in educating its students.

“I heard you’re the only student here who doesn’t have a car.” Park Soojin chuckled as she passed by Hyemi’s desk. The classroom was empty, it was already lunch break. But Hyemin chose to eat in the classroom alone.

“It’s none of your business.” Hyemi replied to her as she proceeded eating, Sekyung, one of Soojin’s friends looked at her bowl of rice and different dishes. Then she pulled the place mat on the table causing Hyemi’s food to spill on the floor.

 

It was around noon when a black Murcielago pulled over in front of Daehan’s main building. Heads turned as the driver of the car stepped out and headed to the entrance.

She was a tall girl, with shoulder length hair. She was wearing a leather jacket and skin tight jeans as she marched towards the admissions area.

“Yes, can I help you?”

“Good morning, I was the returnee who called yesterday; I’m here to enrol again.”

 

Hyemi bit her lip as she stood up and pushed Sekyung.

“Ya!” Soojin reacted and pushed her back. Hyemi grunted and looked at the two girls.

“I was just eating here peacefully. If you don’t want your pretty little noses rubbed on the whiteboard, I suggest you two go to the cafeteria and enjoy your lunch with your posse.” Hyemi hissed as she stepped towards them. She was beyond mad. She was sick of everything regarding Daehan, from its students and the F4.

Hyemi knelt beside the food and gently picked it up again and placed it on her plastic containers. Her mother had prepared it for her earlier and now it was all dirty and messed up. She felt tears line her eyes.

She was so getting back at the great Kim Himchan and his friends.

Then she heard the doors open, she braced herself for another round of insults.

“Why is the room empty?” A feminine voice asked.

Hyemi stood up and blinked. The girl standing by the door was very beautiful.

“Uhm, yes. It’s our lunch break as of now.”

The girl blinked at her, and then her eyes landed on her uniform. There was a stain on her skirt, someone had smeared paint on her seat earlier.

Then the girl saw the food on the floor.

She blinked and looked at Hyemi, she saw her ID and read her name.

“Let me guess,” She started as she reached for purse to get a pack of tissues.

Hyemi just looked at her.

The girl smiled and handed her the pack of tissues.

“It’s that stupid red card again, huh?”

 

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as soon as i finish my other ff i'll be focusing on this one :>

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zangsia1 #1
Chapter 49: Great story authornim, would have wanted an epilogue with this or another long chapter but love it anyway.
Thanks!
nsksyu77
#2
Chapter 49: Nice one
-2Mirae-
14 streak #3
Chapter 49: The first thing I thought when I read the foreword was that it reminded me of boys over flowers. It's been so long since I watched that drama and this story brings back memories ♡ I totally ship chunji and junhee. One of the many things I liked about this story is that the mother/parents is different from BOF
Snandunggina #4
Chapter 9: Hhhhhaaaaa red card for himchan. Even buddy even
nabi_88
#5
Chapter 49: Read it in one go!! Lovely story,, wish there would be more Himchan and Hyemi fluff moment!!
xoxosenshine #6
Chapter 49: Wow kim himchan . Its good . I expect it to be like bof but it turns out not exactly . Kkkk good job btw
Imaginator123 #7
Chapter 39: The story was great, and i really liked the characters, but i couldn't help but feel like each description of the characters weren't expressed enough. Junhee was expressed the best so good job, she even gave out her own aura. Though, The relationship of Himchan and Hyemi felt so dull, it wasn't written as well as it was expected it to be. The friendship of F4 also felt lacking, it seemed like there was no feeling or warmth between the four of them. Lastly, the and ending wasn't expressed clearly, sometimes i felt like i didn't understand what was going on. I think it would have been better if there were more memories being written between them, or smiles and laughters between the friends.
Though, i love what you've done with Junhee and Chunji. Now this relationship was written well and there were feelings and twists in them but things went well, though i was a bit unsatisfied with (again) the relationship between Himchan and Hyemi. Since it became more like Junhee's story.
Overall, good job for making the fanfic and i hope my constructive comment could help you do better next time! I know you can do it :D
dalamjwi07 #8
Chapter 49: Omaigad, your story is beautiful. Am i weird if I need kai and a young girl dress in a pair of jeans and loose shirt sequel >///< ?
xoxolove522
#9
Chapter 49: Beautiful story! And I like junhee character here! What should I say? Straight but caring? Haha
guiltyNaNa #10
Chapter 49: i wish their was a sequel between Hyemi and Himchan...^^^