You Made Me Crash and Burn~

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Ello ello chaps *waves*

Well this has been on my to-do list for far too long.. finally i've plucked up the courage to start writing this B.A.P fanfiction ಥ_ಥ

I hope you all like it, creative writing is definately not my forte. I'm still experimenting and learning with writing styles. 

I hope you don't find it too difficult/boring/detailed to read ;u;

Please feel free to give me feedback or constructive critisism or whatever you want to call it, it'll be very much appreciated.

Warning: I'm still level noob so it may be a little bit .

Also I've called it No Mercy only because I can't make my mind up on what it should be called, so it's only a temporary title.

I bid you good day/night~~ ^^

 


Plot (sort of):

What happens when the leader of the fiercest kingka group at school has the biggest schoolboy crush on you?

He's denied, and tried to hide his feelings ever since the day you and him met.

He acts the way he does now to fight off the feelings he felt before.

You left him just when he needed you, you had no intentions of coming back.

But due to your parents divorce, and after a good four years in England, you had to return to Seoul.

You and him end up in the same high school together.

He treats you as if you're a nobody now, but what if his previous feelings start melt through the ice cold barrier he's been building for the past few years. (wow, that was cheesy)

However you don't feel the same, you have a loving boyfriend, you don't need Yongguk.

Do you?

Foreword

Characters:

Kim Yura [You]:
 

17 rock music.studs.rebellious.party animal.dropdead gorgeous.love fashion.and all things artsy.

You are not the type of girl to wear pink and call everyone 'oppa'. You hate aegyo, hate. You come across as cold and emotionless to everyone at you school, including the school kingkas B.A.P. You live with your mother in a nice small house, you're pretty well off since your parents divorced and your mum got half of the money they earned together and your dad was the owner of a world famous car company. However, eversince the divorce, your mother has turned into a reckless alcoholic. You love her to pieces, so you try your best to get rid of her newly found addiction by yourself. You would uncaringly kick anyones who's hurt you or anyone close to you. Any guy would fall to your feet instantly because of your flawless looks, but most tend to stay away because of your arrogant and bitter attitude. You are currently dating Ahn Jaehyo, you've been with him for about 3 years now.

Bang Yongguk [Leader of B.A.P]:

[I know he's like waaayy way older but since this is fiction imagine that he's 18 kay?]

18 rap music.gangster-like.leather jackets.muscular.deep voice.badass all over.war films fo' lyf.

Yongguk is the guy that you met when you were about 10 and he was 11, he protected you in little school. Bullies used to pick on you for being kooky and wierd and you were too young and scared at the time to fight back, so Yongguk did it for you. You and Yongguk could be weird together, he always told you, you were never alone. However this all changed when you left for England. He's loud and demanding. He can be mature and responsible  when he wants. He can easily become aggressive and get into a fight, petty things wind him up. Yongguk loves to make himself look cool infront of other people. He hates fangirls and he's not afraid to show it. He also works in a bar as a stripper [hehe i wish] bartender. Also lives in a flat with Himchan.

Kim Himchan [Visual Mother of B.A.P] :

 

[Same as Yongguk with the whole age thing, and I used an old picture of him because I had a hard time finding one where he wasn't wearing his y stage outfits huu~]

18 diva-like.flawless.designer everything.rapper.player.germaphobe.party animal.filthy rich.I am the best.

Himchan is pretty much just a big ball of grease. He loves skinship and all things cringey. Cheesy pick-up lines are his forte. However he has a brain made of sponge and he's a little slow. He loves flirting with and teasing his fangirls or just anything that has a pulse. He loves to mither people, until he gets what he wants. Usually doesn't think before he does things. Loves himself unconditionally. Also works in the same bar as Yongguk, and also a stripper bartender. 

Yoo Youngjae [Brains of B.A.P] :

17 expensive gadgets.singing.clever.i'm right you're all wrong.cocky brat attitude.

Youngjae is the type to not really care about what he looks like, but more about how comfortable and easy going his everyday life is. He's lazy and likes to listen to music all the time. He's the smartest of the group and doesn't he know it. He's super cocky and arrogant, his stuck up attitude allows him to think that he can get any girl he wants. He likes to pick out peoples flaws, and make fun of them. Youngjae is also not afraid to correct people and loves to prove people wrong. Lives with his very rich parents.

Jung Daehyun [Ninja of B.A.P] :

17 singing is my passion.laid back.just chill.food.food.fight me after i eat.i don't care attitude.don't touch me or my things.

Daehyun is extremely cool and laid back. He usually doesn't care about most things. But when someone ticks him off he will go all sorts of ninja on that guys . Most of the time he looks scary and his glare could burn through to someones soul. He hates unreasonable people. Can be quiet at times, and usually keeps things to himself. He can also be arrogant and stubborn when he needs to. Likes to wear a mask occasionally. Can sing really well. He's just badass. He may aswell be a ninja. He lives with his father, his mother left him when he was young.

Moon Jongup [Joker of B.A.P] :

16 dance.look at my cheetos.check out my honey abs.i bet i can make you laugh.dance.my body is a temple.dance.

Jongup likes to make people laugh and he feels a little uncomfortable in serious situations. However that doesn't stop him from being a badass fighter. He loves to dance. He's actually really sweet and innocent looking, compared to the others especially. He likes to keep to himself. Doesn't mind making a fool out of himself. Jongup can be a little weird at times, and he likes to have inside jokes with other members. Loves working out, girls just fall for him cause of his well built body. Lives with his mother, his father left her as soon as he found out she was pregnant. 

Choi Junhong AKA Zelo  [Maknae of B.A.P] :

15 skateboards.food.rap music.aegyo.play with me or die.blink blink.innocent.talk to me.*puffs up cheeks* bbuing bbuing.

Zelo is the adorable maknae of B.A.P. His natural aegyo gets noonas head over heels for him. He's cute and innocent but could switch to an arrogant gangster within a second. He hates having nothing to do. He's very playful and forever hyper. Just like Daehyun they share a love for food. He's a brilliant rapper for a kid his age. He only listens to Yongguk, he rarely ever listens to his other hyungs. Loves skinship and doesn't like upsetting people unless they've upset him. Lives with his parents, pretty well off.

Ahn Jaehyo [The Boyfriend & visual of Block B ] :

18 famous ulzzang.loves artsy stuff.photography.charming.sports.typical perfect guy.

You met Jaehyo when you moved to England, his father and your father both joined companies. You both spent a year getting to know each other, then he asked you out. You and him where dating for 3 years. You both are really loved up with each other. When he heard about your parents divorce and you going back to Korea, he was always by your side and comforted you when your parents upset you. He even decided to come back to Korea with you, he now lives with a group of friends (Block B) in a nice flat Jaehyo's dad bought. The only drawback was that he had to attend an all boys school. That didn't stop you both from seeing each other though, he would always drop by your apartment to see you or pick you up from school.

Ex0tic-unnie
{YMMCAB} Ermagerrd guys, have you saw One Shot yet?! No??! Then get to it soldier, pip pip!! It's seriously so good,

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glotterjongup #1
Chapter 21: YAH! AHN JAEHYO! I WILL KILL YOU! And poor Jonguppie who has no clue what's going on:(
glotterjongup #2
Chapter 20: Zico you a-hole
Ellelove
#3
Chapter 19: Ohhhhhhh jeahyo hehe update soon <3
exosenpai
#4
Chapter 14: Finally you update <3
leejaesun
#5
Chapter 12: Update soon juseyo, cuz ba da ba ba baaaaaaaa I'm loving it ;D
tatsuharuvipp #6
Awww this is lovely ! Great work :3 one of my fav fics !<3
Raina-ssi #7
Ayyy, you updated!! :D So cuuute. Oh YongGuk.<3