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* oh seungah - Rainbow *

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"Oh...that's so nice of you. I didn't know she's interested to continue studying."

Seungah unnie's voice, talking to someone that must be unfamiliar since she's using formal language, made my sleepy eyes opened a little easier than usual, and helped my brain started working a little earlier. Usually, early mornings like this, Seungah unnie would already be busy mixing her cake and muffin doughs before start baking a few hours later. Nobody would accompany her mornings. That is one reason I need to wake up early everyday. Seungah unnie would be bored without me.

But who was she talking about? Who's continuing studies? Hyuna unnie? But Hyuna unnie already completed hers and is working as office worker now. She's the most successful among us anyway. Even when we're only an embarrassment for her, she really did made us proud. Then, if it's not her, is it Seungah unnie's friend? But...she's always alone. I wouldn't know if she had any.

 

"It's nothing. Besides, Hyesung hyung had been a great senior at school. It'd be an honour to help his sister now." A deep, somewhat high, clear male voice responded. So, that definitely wasn't Hyesung oppa or Kihyun oppa.

"Really? Wait. I'll call her now."

Then I heard Seungah unnie calling for me. But why? Where did I fit in this picture? The voice speaking with her was one I've never heard. Surely they weren't talking about me. I didn't even know Hyesung oppa's juniors at school. When he was schooling, I was too young to even know or remember his friends.

"Yes, unnie." I came out of my hiding, pretending that I've just came down from our room.

And then I saw him. Someone I had never seen and had no clue of. He's tall, and he wore glasses with white shirt and white pants and white trench coat. So much white, he was almost shining from the bright clothing that I almost squinted, even if I really like the colour white.

 

"Hyunrin-ah, you've grown up so much. I didn't notice you. You were so small the last time we met."

Have we even met before? One thing I was very sure of, is that I don't know him. Of course I know whoever I know and whoever i don't know, right? Or am I supposed to know him?

But another thing that bothered me even more, was the way he called my name. He mispronounced my name. 

"It's Hyeonrin." I corrected him.

"That's what I said." He bent down before me, struggling to match my height, clutching to his own knees, and smiled before reachi

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Mahwiii
#1
Chapter 35: is what surprised him when she said that he didn't kill them but was an accident? was he actually good but pretending to be evil..?
uhh is it like that some other devil do the killing? o.O or what D: i mean it seems that they die because of her is connected and because of him too.. maybe its cuz he accepted his fate so he accepted that he "killed" them but actually he didn't? :D now idk i seem like i'm confusing myself aswell T.T

but really somehow this chapter makes me happy.. even it's title! "one beat stolen" to make him have a heart beat after so long.. am kinda proud of her ;^; feels like heyonrinnie grew up xD
and its kinda nice.. for Romeo.. to have heart.. maybe now he can be less creepy u.u
Mahwiii
#2
Chapter 34: uh uhh who is maeng? o.o i googled him but its some 91er? :o is that him?
but owww <3
a cute Romeo.. why can't this Romeo be cute too >.> just so evil...
but when i imagine him laugh or say that he isn't that cruel.. its kinda cute.. if i imagine jungmin say it.. with a smirk somehow..
but how to get him to have a heart.. being surprised once they need to be there o,o
am really curious how they would they do it *-*
Mahwiii
#3
Chapter 33: wah i'm glad...
it seems she would really do it.. am glad.. she didn't.. even if ik its cliche for mains to be good and all but am glad she didn't do it T^T thank you savor thank youuu for not making Hyeonrin a murderer ..
thank you authornim too <3

^i'm using the spoiler tag but idk if it will work xD hope it does
Mahwiii
#4
Chapter 32: wah am back to the site and this story is updated <3 welcome back~
i was gonna comment after reading the whole three chap updates /or were they four? @.@/ /bird brain/
but uhh i noticed something
under the [2]
the 6th line..
"so have you think of a way to..."
using "thought" is better :o
and under it a few lines
"it just that i didn't thought there would be.."
and here.."think" would be better?
well maybe...
but idk again am not sure ;^;
sorry and hi again~~

btw i really hope she made the right choice... I kinda liked Romeo /even tho he was so evil and demonish and so/ but i can't forgive him for killing Siwan.. how dare he...
sometimes its hard to accept that a char in a story is dead.. it feels strange.. i remember this is also how i felt when her brother died too.. no matter what still.. it feels strange ;^;
but i should have expected this when i started this story /was gonna write drama xD/ :<
but i hope she won't be a murderer D: cuz there won't be a turning back...
*off to next chap*
Yutasm #5
What a story
iloveya #6
Chapter 35: Just finished & now I shall play the waiting game! /sighs/ Playing this game is so boring... But worth it in the end! Author nim fighting!! Also.... Why did Siwan have to die!?! /sobs like a seal/
iloveya #7
Chapter 28: I ship Seungjae w/ Hyeonrin 'cause why can't the main character be happy, am I right??? (Sarcasm sprinkled in there 'cause I'm out of hope at this point for that poor child. My goodness.../shaking my head/)
iloveya #8
Chapter 28: Hyungjun is going to die, isn't he? -_-...
iloveya #9
Chapter 25: I lied. Barely on this chapter. It's 11:45pm.... I KNEW IT WAS GOING TO BE ANOTHER 501 MEMBER AS ROMEO'S LOVER!!! HAHAHA! Love all the characters & why!?! Why the sad backstory of Romeo!?! He didn't deserve any of that heartache, he was just an innocent kid in a blind love.... /sigh/ I guess the world can be the cruelest to the most innocent people... (BTW: Still love Romeo(the real one), but at first I was cursing at him at the first few chapters, but now I regret what I said, especially calling him, let's say, (insert malicious word here).)
JiHoosgirl #10
Chapter 31: Whats this new plan to defeat Romeo? O.o Please update soon Author-nim!!