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It is a known truth, that kindness can thwart evil,
yet many overlook the fact that likewise,
evil can perish kindness,
because one will inevitably have to choose one, over the other.
So, which one will you choose?
Which one will you choose, Shin Hyun Rin?

 

Shin Hyeon Rin is your average girl whose life revolves around her four siblings, and her best friend (and maybe, her crush). No, she's not even average, but below average. No pretty face, no flawless skin and height, no great body, no impressive intelligence(the opposite in fact), no reputation, no status, nothing. Though she does have wishes and desires for the better. The only strength she owns that is above many people, would be her 'kind' heart. And the greatest weakness of hers, you guessed it - her heart. How far will she have to go in order to protect her loved ones and herself from evil that preys on hearts like hers? Will she be able to be more than just average and stupid to save people around her and her once perfect heavenly world that has begun  crumbling down into dusts of hell?

 

Romeo is a devil on his quest, the one he deems the most crucial. The one that will lead him to his destination. A few deeds need to be settled in order to make way for his journey. Some humans to be manipulated would be useful. Or maybe one stupid, weak-hearted young girl would be enough. But what if she resisted? What if she challenged his beliefs? Would it make him angry? Or would it make him smile? Would it surprise him? Or a part of his plan?

 

"Will good or evil prevail?"

In the end, that's all that matters, at least to others; those who never experience, only observe, only judge.

 

 

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Unlock the Devil Fourever Soundtrack

1. Act I (The Awakening) - ROMEO - intro

2. 있잖아요(Tender) - Park Jungmin (with Zuwan) - ch6

3. Action - Nine Muses - ch7

4. Devil - ROMEO - ch8

5. Close Your Eyes - Rainbow - ch9

6. Sin - ROMEO - ch10

7. Chaos - Shinhwa - ch12

8. Unlock - SS501 - ch13

9. Hoi Hoi - Rainbow Pixie - ch14

10. Ping - Nine Muses - ch15

11. No.1 - ZE:A - ch16

12. Crash - Battle - ch17

13. Gloomy Rain - Shin Hyesung - ch18

14. Broken Heart - Battle - ch19

15. Taste The Fever - ROMEO - ch20

16. ARCADIA - 3Peace☆Lovers - ch21

17. I Won't Be a Coward - SS501 - ch22

18. Tell Me - Shinhwa's Junjin & Andy - ch23

19. We Can Fly - SS501 - ch24

20. Love That Can't Be Erased - SS501 - ch25

21. Angel - Kim Hyungjun (feat E-Tribe) - ch26

22. Wobble - ZE:A - ch27

23. 해결사 (The Solver/Resolver) - Shinhwa - ch28

24. Thank You - Shinhwa - ch29

25. Love Is Gone - ZE:A - ch30

26. Act II (The Heart) - ROMEO - ch30

27. Innocent Love - ROMEO - ch31

28. All Your Dreams - Shinhwa - ch32

29. Black Swan - Rainbow - ch33

30. Ticket - Nine Muses - ch34

31. -to be added later-

 

Foreword

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"Which one will you choose, Hyunrin?"

 

"Kindness, of course. Who would choose evil? That's just wrong."

 

 

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"But you seem to forget, in every right, there is wrong. In every good there's evil."

 

"And you seem to forget too, that in every evil, there's goodness."

 

"We will see about that."

 

"Yes, we will."

 

 

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"Please, please let her go. I'll give you anything you want. Just...don't..."

 

"Let's see...bring to me, that kindness you're so proud of. Hand it to me."

 

"But...how...where...where will I find that...kindness? How will I be able to hand it to you?"

 

"Where do you think will you find it?"

 

 

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Character Image Guide

(for those who don't know the idols in this fic)

Chapter 2: Im Siwan (ZE:A) + chapter 19

Chapter 3: Shin Hyesung (Shinhwa)

Chapter 4: Oh Seungah (Rainbow)

Chapter 5: Shin Kihyun (Battle)

Chapter 6: Moon Hyuna (Nine Muses)

Chapter 7: Won Seungjae (Battle) + chapter 19

Chapter 8(+front page): Romeo

Chapter 9: Kim Hyungjun (SS501)

Chapter 11: Park Eunji (Nine Muses)

Chapter 12: Andy Lee (Shinhwa)

Chapter 13: Park Jungmin (SS501) + chapter 19

Chapter 15: Kim Jisook (Rainbow)

Chapter 21: Ha Minwoo (ZE:A)

Chapter 25: SS501

Chapter 33: Ha Jooyeon (Jewelry)

and their characteristics are purely fictional and has no relation to their real selves. like, it's not like i even know their real, real selves. lol.

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WARNING: Character death, evil/dark contents n mildly sensitive pertaining religious contents(very mild n doesn't mess up too much-just to be safe) but still, tread in carefully. and umm, just like my other fics, happy ending isn't guaranteed, so yeah.

 

DO NOT TAKE OUT, TRANSLATE, PLAGIARIZE OR POST MY FIC ANYWHERE!

 

and this is JUST a Fiction, this is in NO way reflect my beliefs. didn't think i need to clarify that but oh well, just in case. and no, Romeo(the real one, out of this fic) is not a devil nor is he a kpop boygroup. he's just a rock-ish singer in Japan with weird/cool/unusual permanent concept. lol. he's the main character but a vilainous one, so be warned before you decide to subscribe.  

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- will i take down this fic later on? maybe...if i lose inspiration or willpower to go on...we'll see. enjoy it while you can~ leave comment if you want to read this fic to the end. do you know how unfair n cruel silent readers are?

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Mahwiii
#1
Chapter 35: is what surprised him when she said that he didn't kill them but was an accident? was he actually good but pretending to be evil..?
uhh is it like that some other devil do the killing? o.O or what D: i mean it seems that they die because of her is connected and because of him too.. maybe its cuz he accepted his fate so he accepted that he "killed" them but actually he didn't? :D now idk i seem like i'm confusing myself aswell T.T

but really somehow this chapter makes me happy.. even it's title! "one beat stolen" to make him have a heart beat after so long.. am kinda proud of her ;^; feels like heyonrinnie grew up xD
and its kinda nice.. for Romeo.. to have heart.. maybe now he can be less creepy u.u
Mahwiii
#2
Chapter 34: uh uhh who is maeng? o.o i googled him but its some 91er? :o is that him?
but owww <3
a cute Romeo.. why can't this Romeo be cute too >.> just so evil...
but when i imagine him laugh or say that he isn't that cruel.. its kinda cute.. if i imagine jungmin say it.. with a smirk somehow..
but how to get him to have a heart.. being surprised once they need to be there o,o
am really curious how they would they do it *-*
Mahwiii
#3
Chapter 33: wah i'm glad...
it seems she would really do it.. am glad.. she didn't.. even if ik its cliche for mains to be good and all but am glad she didn't do it T^T thank you savor thank youuu for not making Hyeonrin a murderer ..
thank you authornim too <3

^i'm using the spoiler tag but idk if it will work xD hope it does
Mahwiii
#4
Chapter 32: wah am back to the site and this story is updated <3 welcome back~
i was gonna comment after reading the whole three chap updates /or were they four? @.@/ /bird brain/
but uhh i noticed something
under the [2]
the 6th line..
"so have you think of a way to..."
using "thought" is better :o
and under it a few lines
"it just that i didn't thought there would be.."
and here.."think" would be better?
well maybe...
but idk again am not sure ;^;
sorry and hi again~~

btw i really hope she made the right choice... I kinda liked Romeo /even tho he was so evil and demonish and so/ but i can't forgive him for killing Siwan.. how dare he...
sometimes its hard to accept that a char in a story is dead.. it feels strange.. i remember this is also how i felt when her brother died too.. no matter what still.. it feels strange ;^;
but i should have expected this when i started this story /was gonna write drama xD/ :<
but i hope she won't be a murderer D: cuz there won't be a turning back...
*off to next chap*
Yutasm #5
What a story
iloveya #6
Chapter 35: Just finished & now I shall play the waiting game! /sighs/ Playing this game is so boring... But worth it in the end! Author nim fighting!! Also.... Why did Siwan have to die!?! /sobs like a seal/
iloveya #7
Chapter 28: I ship Seungjae w/ Hyeonrin 'cause why can't the main character be happy, am I right??? (Sarcasm sprinkled in there 'cause I'm out of hope at this point for that poor child. My goodness.../shaking my head/)
iloveya #8
Chapter 28: Hyungjun is going to die, isn't he? -_-...
iloveya #9
Chapter 25: I lied. Barely on this chapter. It's 11:45pm.... I KNEW IT WAS GOING TO BE ANOTHER 501 MEMBER AS ROMEO'S LOVER!!! HAHAHA! Love all the characters & why!?! Why the sad backstory of Romeo!?! He didn't deserve any of that heartache, he was just an innocent kid in a blind love.... /sigh/ I guess the world can be the cruelest to the most innocent people... (BTW: Still love Romeo(the real one), but at first I was cursing at him at the first few chapters, but now I regret what I said, especially calling him, let's say, (insert malicious word here).)
JiHoosgirl #10
Chapter 31: Whats this new plan to defeat Romeo? O.o Please update soon Author-nim!!