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"Oh...Hyeonrin-ah, what...what are you doing here?"

"Oh...Siwan-ah? I'm...just...helping Unnie to send orders here."

"Really? Have you send it?"

I nodded, and as he always does, he pestered me to accompany him for lunch because he's so bored nobody wanted to eat with him. The intention was nice but come on, we all know how illogical that lie was. Siwan-ah, you're too nice to do such a thing like lying. It doesn't suit you. It doesn't suit anyone actually.

 

"Yah...you know I can't let Seungah unnie do all the cleaning at home right? She almost died of fatigue completing all those orders. I have to help her."

"You're always so nice and cute." He gave his infamous half-frown-half-smile and pinched my cheek, as my eyes narrowed in response.

"Stop, treating, me, like, your, five, year, old, sister."

"But I don't even have a five year old sister. Hey, maybe you can be that. You sure can look the part."

I pushed his hand away with a swipe before he could repeat the same action. Really, I've had enough brothers and sisters to treat me like a baby. But it didn't take me more than a second to get back to my senses and start to look around for any of his campus fangirls that might think I'm attacking their oppar and chase after me, like what happened last time. I mean, it's not like we always get into fights, just as long as he doesn't pinch my cheeks, I wouldn't retaliate. Just because I'm short and a little chubby, doesn't mean I want to be pinched all the time. In fact, I don't want it at all. I've had enough.

 

"Just stop it. You know I hate that."

"Wait...there's a thing that Shin Hyeonrin actually hate? That's new! Thought she's that kind of girl who's so nice to just let everyone push her around and even sacrifice her..."

"Oh...just shut up. I'm going back now. Take care."

"Wait. I'll come to your house tonight. Haven't been there for so long."

"To stalk my sisters?"

"Well, without the plural would sound better."

"Huh...which one?"

"Uhm, the fierce one." He chuckled.

"Yeah, she'll kick you out even before you could step one foot inside. She's not staying with us anymore, anyway."

"Wait. You're saying, Hyuna noona is not staying at home anymore?"

"Kihyun oppa too." I sighed, recalling things I'd rather not remember.

"Yah, what else have I been missing? I'm definitely going there tonight. You have to update me on everything."

"Yah, there's no need to. Just concentrate on your studies and your

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Mahwiii
#1
Chapter 35: is what surprised him when she said that he didn't kill them but was an accident? was he actually good but pretending to be evil..?
uhh is it like that some other devil do the killing? o.O or what D: i mean it seems that they die because of her is connected and because of him too.. maybe its cuz he accepted his fate so he accepted that he "killed" them but actually he didn't? :D now idk i seem like i'm confusing myself aswell T.T

but really somehow this chapter makes me happy.. even it's title! "one beat stolen" to make him have a heart beat after so long.. am kinda proud of her ;^; feels like heyonrinnie grew up xD
and its kinda nice.. for Romeo.. to have heart.. maybe now he can be less creepy u.u
Mahwiii
#2
Chapter 34: uh uhh who is maeng? o.o i googled him but its some 91er? :o is that him?
but owww <3
a cute Romeo.. why can't this Romeo be cute too >.> just so evil...
but when i imagine him laugh or say that he isn't that cruel.. its kinda cute.. if i imagine jungmin say it.. with a smirk somehow..
but how to get him to have a heart.. being surprised once they need to be there o,o
am really curious how they would they do it *-*
Mahwiii
#3
Chapter 33: wah i'm glad...
it seems she would really do it.. am glad.. she didn't.. even if ik its cliche for mains to be good and all but am glad she didn't do it T^T thank you savor thank youuu for not making Hyeonrin a murderer ..
thank you authornim too <3

^i'm using the spoiler tag but idk if it will work xD hope it does
Mahwiii
#4
Chapter 32: wah am back to the site and this story is updated <3 welcome back~
i was gonna comment after reading the whole three chap updates /or were they four? @.@/ /bird brain/
but uhh i noticed something
under the [2]
the 6th line..
"so have you think of a way to..."
using "thought" is better :o
and under it a few lines
"it just that i didn't thought there would be.."
and here.."think" would be better?
well maybe...
but idk again am not sure ;^;
sorry and hi again~~

btw i really hope she made the right choice... I kinda liked Romeo /even tho he was so evil and demonish and so/ but i can't forgive him for killing Siwan.. how dare he...
sometimes its hard to accept that a char in a story is dead.. it feels strange.. i remember this is also how i felt when her brother died too.. no matter what still.. it feels strange ;^;
but i should have expected this when i started this story /was gonna write drama xD/ :<
but i hope she won't be a murderer D: cuz there won't be a turning back...
*off to next chap*
Yutasm #5
What a story
iloveya #6
Chapter 35: Just finished & now I shall play the waiting game! /sighs/ Playing this game is so boring... But worth it in the end! Author nim fighting!! Also.... Why did Siwan have to die!?! /sobs like a seal/
iloveya #7
Chapter 28: I ship Seungjae w/ Hyeonrin 'cause why can't the main character be happy, am I right??? (Sarcasm sprinkled in there 'cause I'm out of hope at this point for that poor child. My goodness.../shaking my head/)
iloveya #8
Chapter 28: Hyungjun is going to die, isn't he? -_-...
iloveya #9
Chapter 25: I lied. Barely on this chapter. It's 11:45pm.... I KNEW IT WAS GOING TO BE ANOTHER 501 MEMBER AS ROMEO'S LOVER!!! HAHAHA! Love all the characters & why!?! Why the sad backstory of Romeo!?! He didn't deserve any of that heartache, he was just an innocent kid in a blind love.... /sigh/ I guess the world can be the cruelest to the most innocent people... (BTW: Still love Romeo(the real one), but at first I was cursing at him at the first few chapters, but now I regret what I said, especially calling him, let's say, (insert malicious word here).)
JiHoosgirl #10
Chapter 31: Whats this new plan to defeat Romeo? O.o Please update soon Author-nim!!