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* im siwan - ZE:A *

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"Hyeonrin-ah, you're home?" The warm voice of Seungah unnie greeted the opening door.

Unfortunately, she might have jumped in shock to see it wasn't me at the door. Well, I was just right behind but still, Seungah unnie isn't the most strong hearted. 


"Uhh, hello."

"Ommo, who are you?"

"My name is Kim Dongjun."

"Okay. But...that doesn't explain who you are."

"Relax, unnie. I'm here." I appeared from behind him.

But as I expected, far from relax, she freaked out even more. I thought so. That was why I asked Dongjun to be more quiet to not get caught. Alas, it's too late to regret.

"Hyeonrin-ah, what happened to you? Why are you bleeding? Who did that to you?!" hung open wide, and it took just a moment for her to shift her shocked-turned-angry glare towards Dongjun, the poor guy.

"Actually...I..."

"Unnie, I fell down just now and Dongjun helped me."

"Oh...thank you Dongjun ssi." She scratched the back of her head. I guess from the way her voice shook a little, she must've felt guilty towards Dongjun. Aish, I'm sorry, Seungah unnie.

"I..." He shrugged.

"Unnie, Dongjun is going home now."

"Oh, wait. Let me pack you some cakes to thank you for helping our Hyeonrin."

"But I..."

I elbowed him slightly to shut him up as Seungah unnie disappeared into the kitchen.

 

"Don't tell her. It's just a small thing."

"But...okay, thanks. And sorry for almost running you down just now. I didn't notice you're crossing..."

"Nah, it's nothing big...just don't mention it to..."

We were stopped by the ever beaming Seungah unnie who's still in her apron and had appeared with a paperbag and handed it to Dongjun who looked like he would confessed what really happened at any second but thankfully, didn't. Seungah unnie would chase after him with a broom, or...knife?... if he had done that. For some reason, even though she wasn't my real sister nor even stepsister, and was adopted before I was brought into this world, I felt like she love and care about me the most. Which is an even stronger reason I couldn't let her know the truth.

 

"Hyeonrin-ah, let me bandage your...Hyeonrin?"

"Unnie, I'll do it on my own! I'll be back down in awhile."

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Mahwiii
#1
Chapter 35: is what surprised him when she said that he didn't kill them but was an accident? was he actually good but pretending to be evil..?
uhh is it like that some other devil do the killing? o.O or what D: i mean it seems that they die because of her is connected and because of him too.. maybe its cuz he accepted his fate so he accepted that he "killed" them but actually he didn't? :D now idk i seem like i'm confusing myself aswell T.T

but really somehow this chapter makes me happy.. even it's title! "one beat stolen" to make him have a heart beat after so long.. am kinda proud of her ;^; feels like heyonrinnie grew up xD
and its kinda nice.. for Romeo.. to have heart.. maybe now he can be less creepy u.u
Mahwiii
#2
Chapter 34: uh uhh who is maeng? o.o i googled him but its some 91er? :o is that him?
but owww <3
a cute Romeo.. why can't this Romeo be cute too >.> just so evil...
but when i imagine him laugh or say that he isn't that cruel.. its kinda cute.. if i imagine jungmin say it.. with a smirk somehow..
but how to get him to have a heart.. being surprised once they need to be there o,o
am really curious how they would they do it *-*
Mahwiii
#3
Chapter 33: wah i'm glad...
it seems she would really do it.. am glad.. she didn't.. even if ik its cliche for mains to be good and all but am glad she didn't do it T^T thank you savor thank youuu for not making Hyeonrin a murderer ..
thank you authornim too <3

^i'm using the spoiler tag but idk if it will work xD hope it does
Mahwiii
#4
Chapter 32: wah am back to the site and this story is updated <3 welcome back~
i was gonna comment after reading the whole three chap updates /or were they four? @.@/ /bird brain/
but uhh i noticed something
under the [2]
the 6th line..
"so have you think of a way to..."
using "thought" is better :o
and under it a few lines
"it just that i didn't thought there would be.."
and here.."think" would be better?
well maybe...
but idk again am not sure ;^;
sorry and hi again~~

btw i really hope she made the right choice... I kinda liked Romeo /even tho he was so evil and demonish and so/ but i can't forgive him for killing Siwan.. how dare he...
sometimes its hard to accept that a char in a story is dead.. it feels strange.. i remember this is also how i felt when her brother died too.. no matter what still.. it feels strange ;^;
but i should have expected this when i started this story /was gonna write drama xD/ :<
but i hope she won't be a murderer D: cuz there won't be a turning back...
*off to next chap*
Yutasm #5
What a story
iloveya #6
Chapter 35: Just finished & now I shall play the waiting game! /sighs/ Playing this game is so boring... But worth it in the end! Author nim fighting!! Also.... Why did Siwan have to die!?! /sobs like a seal/
iloveya #7
Chapter 28: I ship Seungjae w/ Hyeonrin 'cause why can't the main character be happy, am I right??? (Sarcasm sprinkled in there 'cause I'm out of hope at this point for that poor child. My goodness.../shaking my head/)
iloveya #8
Chapter 28: Hyungjun is going to die, isn't he? -_-...
iloveya #9
Chapter 25: I lied. Barely on this chapter. It's 11:45pm.... I KNEW IT WAS GOING TO BE ANOTHER 501 MEMBER AS ROMEO'S LOVER!!! HAHAHA! Love all the characters & why!?! Why the sad backstory of Romeo!?! He didn't deserve any of that heartache, he was just an innocent kid in a blind love.... /sigh/ I guess the world can be the cruelest to the most innocent people... (BTW: Still love Romeo(the real one), but at first I was cursing at him at the first few chapters, but now I regret what I said, especially calling him, let's say, (insert malicious word here).)
JiHoosgirl #10
Chapter 31: Whats this new plan to defeat Romeo? O.o Please update soon Author-nim!!