❀Unicorn's Rose❀ |Review Shop™| Closed
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WELCOME
hello my beautiful people! milayka, najaeri and junseol in da haus! welcome to ❀unicorn's rose❀, our review shop! feel free to request reviews for your lovely stories. but before you do, please make sure to read the rules so we can provide a better service for all of you! ^^ thank you so much and thank you for choosing us!
STATUS
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RULES
{PLease follow the rules. if you don't, your request will automatically be rejected.}
❀susbcribe.
❀comment after request and after reviewed.
❀the password is rose.
❀you are able to cancel if not in progress.
❀be patient. we will try our best to be quick.
❀the real password is unicorn.
❀comment after request and after reviewed.
❀the password is rose.
❀you are able to cancel if not in progress.
❀be patient. we will try our best to be quick.
❀the real password is unicorn.
❀important note: once we have reviewed your story, the stories are re-reviewable. meaning, if you have re-edited/added more chapters to your story. you can send a pm to the same reviewer that reviewed your story asking her to re-review the fic.
PENDING LIST
{BE PATIENT PLEASE}
❀ NAJAERI.OCEAN.[COMPLETED]♥MILAYKA
❀TAQUITOSNOMNOM.WE WERE IN LOVE.[COMPLETED]♥MILAYKA
❀BANGZIEUN.CAN YOU NOT?.[COMPLETED]♥MILAYKA
❀NAJAERI.WRAPPED.[COMPLETED]♥MILAYKA
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❀ KATAKATICA.NOT A WORD.[COMPLETED]♥NAJAERI
❀FLAMZFOX.HUMANITY'S CODE.[COMPLETED]♥MILAYKA
❀DELUFORSELU.ORIGAMI BUTTERFLY.[COMPLETED]♥MILAYKA
❀LOVEX2254.WHEN I FIRST SAW YOU.[COMPLETED]♥junseol
❀NICTAENY9.DaRK TIES.[COMPLETED]♥NAJAERI
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❀ LOVEX2254.COUP'D ETAT.[COMPLETED]♥MILAYKA
❀XODARKMISTXO.AN ICE PRINCESS' REBEL.[COMPLETED]♥- NAJAERI
❀ELFRUNAWAY.SILEnCED.[COMPLETED] ♥-nAJAERI
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❀ ANONoMOUS96.STRAWBERRY GIRL.[completed]♥MILAYKA
❀_TINKERBELL_.SECRET CODE.[completed]♥MILAYKA
❀EXOTIC_BABIES.SLEEPING BEAUTY.[completed]♥MILAYKA
❀hazel_marie13.seoul song.[COMPLETED]♥milayka
❀soroue.shadow moses.[completed]♥milayka
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❀ kangsangmun.substitute heiress.[rejected]
❀ misaki-sEnsei.lOvElieSt confusion.[completed]♥MILAYKA
❀ Exotic_babies.I, kim hana, flew back in time to kidnap a very y man named kim jongin.[completed]♥MILAYKA
❀ Ambizzbo.thE butterfly's guidance.[COMPLETED]♥NAJAERI
❀ lissamary.pEek inside.[rejected]
❀ vixxtn.THE CRIME: REVENGE.[rejected]
❀-tigress-.It's all coming back to me now.[completed]♥MILAYKA
❀ lovejunsu.Mirage.[rEjected]♥MILAYKA
LE FORM
{PLEASE FILL IN ALL THE INFORMATION! but before you do, please make sure to read about our staff just below so you'll be able to choose the right reviewer for your story. thank you!}
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Foreword
STAFF
❀available = taking requests
❀busy = still can take requests but maybe it'll take longer to review because the reviewer is busy
❀non-available = the reviewer won't take any requests and will be on hiatus, if you choose the reviewer who is non-available, we will change the reviewer to who is available
❀busy = still can take requests but maybe it'll take longer to review because the reviewer is busy
❀non-available = the reviewer won't take any requests and will be on hiatus, if you choose the reviewer who is non-available, we will change the reviewer to who is available
one thing you need to know about us(well, two of us at least) is that we are no anonymous full of ourselves thinking we are all that and good enough to review your story only cause we can. i don't want you guys getting the wrong idea of us. i believe we do have a reason to be fit for the job (well, kinda. lol! xd). both me (milayka) and najaeri are writers as in we got years of writing. najaeri has always written in spanish and she has many original stories which she has based on her fandom and they have won awards back in her college's literature/writing competitions. she studies forensic psycology which allows her to extend her vocabulary and her stories tend to be with a rather "metaphorical prose" that not everyone may understand. she has just started writing in english and is putting all her best to get better and better at it (so please encourage her!). me (milayka) on the other hand, have being writing since age 13 (i'm 26 so that's 13 years). i started writing songs and short stories then at age 15 was the first time i started writing my first novel and also found the world of fanfics. i finished my first novel at age 16 and now i am the happy writer/editor/publisher of eight novels for young adults. right now, i am re-editing each one of them before self-publishing myself under my freelance company purple butterfly. if you are interested you can check out my work HERE. you will be able to even get a glimpse of the drafts of some of my work! so check it out and support me! ^.^ and as for my friend zitaosbeauty; i believe she is a great writer (on my standards) especially at such a young age of 14. so when she asked me to become a reviewer, i had to let her in with us :) please support her also and check out her stuff!
❀busy
❀milayka❀
❀position: creator, owner, reviewer
❀groups: exo, super junior, shinee, infinite, aFTER sCHOOL, tvxq, JYJ, bap, beast, teen top, btob
❀preference: any genre that includes , yuri and . i also like you/idol fics.
❀groups: exo, super junior, shinee, infinite, aFTER sCHOOL, tvxq, JYJ, bap, beast, teen top, btob
❀preference: any genre that includes , yuri and . i also like you/idol fics.
❀won't review: idolxidol fics. unless is krisna. that's the only one i actually ship if it ever happens in real life xd lol!
❀notes: i must warn you that i'm a wee bit of a demanding girl, but do not get discourage. if i ever say something, it will be an advice for you to become a better writer, so i hope no one go hating on me (cause i am actually a sweetheart, lol!).
❀story criteria: my criteria will be focused on five different points:
❀notes: i must warn you that i'm a wee bit of a demanding girl, but do not get discourage. if i ever say something, it will be an advice for you to become a better writer, so i hope no one go hating on me (cause i am actually a sweetheart, lol!).
❀story criteria: my criteria will be focused on five different points:
title, plot, grammar, originality & flow.
title: is it catchy? is it original? does it tell what the story is about too fast?
plot: is it interesting? character development?
grammar: errors? mistakes? are tenses used correctly? punctuation? prose?
originality: has it being used too often? does it have twists and turns? cliffhangers?
flow: is it understanding and not confusing? is the story developing too fast or too slow?
{MY stories will be rated with stars ★ five stars being the highest and one star being the lowest.}
❀busy
❀najaeri❀
❀POSITION: Owner, moderatoR, REVIEWER
❀GROUPS: TVXQ, JYJ, EXO(ONLY A FEW), FT ISLAND, GIRL'S DAY, girl's generation, INFINITE, AFTER SCHOOL
❀PREFERENCE: any genre, especially ! gimme lots of them! ^_^
❀GROUPS: TVXQ, JYJ, EXO(ONLY A FEW), FT ISLAND, GIRL'S DAY, girl's generation, INFINITE, AFTER SCHOOL
❀PREFERENCE: any genre, especially ! gimme lots of them! ^_^
❀WON'T REVIEW: IDOLxTVXQ, BoA FICS
❀NOTES: i'M MORE SOFT ON GRAMMAR, SINCE I'M NOT GOOD ON IT MYSELF (I HAVE A BETA FOR THAT EXACT REASON)SO I WON'T BE REVIEWING ON THAT. HOWEVER, KEEP IN MIND THAT IF YOUR ENGLISH IS HORRIBLE, I WILL TAKE OUT POINTS ON THAT. TO ME, A GOOD ENGLISH IS THE BASE OF A GOOD STORY. ALTHOUGH I DON'T KNOW MUCH ABOUT VERBS, ADJETIVES, ETC. I KNOW THE BASICS. BALANCING MY LACK ON ORTOGRAPHY, I'M KINDA 'HARSH' TOWARDS ORIGINALITY OF PLOT AND CHARACTERIZATION. THE REASON WHY I WILL ONLY TAKE A FEW EXO MEMBERS IS BECAUSE I AM ACTUALLY NOT AN EXOTIC SO I'LL BE LEAVING THOSE TO MILAYKA AND BANGZIEUN. HOWEVER, I DO TAKE ONE-SHOT/CHAPTERED FICS THAT HAVE SEHUN, LUHAN, KAI, XIUMIN AND/OR SUHO.
❀STORY CRITERIA: MY CRITERIA WILL BE FOCUSED ON FIVE DIFFERENT POINTS:
❀NOTES: i'M MORE SOFT ON GRAMMAR, SINCE I'M NOT GOOD ON IT MYSELF (I HAVE A BETA FOR THAT EXACT REASON)SO I WON'T BE REVIEWING ON THAT. HOWEVER, KEEP IN MIND THAT IF YOUR ENGLISH IS HORRIBLE, I WILL TAKE OUT POINTS ON THAT. TO ME, A GOOD ENGLISH IS THE BASE OF A GOOD STORY. ALTHOUGH I DON'T KNOW MUCH ABOUT VERBS, ADJETIVES, ETC. I KNOW THE BASICS. BALANCING MY LACK ON ORTOGRAPHY, I'M KINDA 'HARSH' TOWARDS ORIGINALITY OF PLOT AND CHARACTERIZATION. THE REASON WHY I WILL ONLY TAKE A FEW EXO MEMBERS IS BECAUSE I AM ACTUALLY NOT AN EXOTIC SO I'LL BE LEAVING THOSE TO MILAYKA AND BANGZIEUN. HOWEVER, I DO TAKE ONE-SHOT/CHAPTERED FICS THAT HAVE SEHUN, LUHAN, KAI, XIUMIN AND/OR SUHO.
❀STORY CRITERIA: MY CRITERIA WILL BE FOCUSED ON FIVE DIFFERENT POINTS:
TITLE,DESCRIPTION/FOREWORD,CHARACTERIZATION, ORIGINALITY OF THE PLOT & FLOW.
TITLE: DOES IT FIT WITH THE STORY? IS IT GOOD ENOUGH TO ATTRACT READERS?
DESCRIPTION/FOREWORD: WHAT IS IT ABOUT? DOES IT TELL THE READER WHAT IS GOING TO BE ABOUT OR NOT?
CHARACTERIZATION: DOES THE CHARACTERS PERSONALITIES FIT THE PLOT? DOES IT LOOK REAL OR TOO BLAND?
ORIGINALITY OF THE PLOT: HAS IT BEING USED TOO OFTEN? DOES IT HAVE TWISTS AND TURNS?
FLOW: IS IT UNDERSTANDING? NOT CONFUSING? DOES IT GOES WELL WITH THE STORY IN GENERAL?
{MY STORIES WILL BE RATED WITH roseS ❀ FIVE roseS BEING THE HIGHEST AND ONE Rose BEING THE LOWEST.}
{MY STORIES WILL BE RATED WITH roseS ❀ FIVE roseS BEING THE HIGHEST AND ONE Rose BEING THE LOWEST.}
❀non-available
❀junseol❀
❀POSITION: REVIEWER
❀GROUPS: EXO, BAP, SHINEE, BANGTAN BOYS, U-KISS, NU'EST, AFTER SCHOOL, T-ARA, F(X), SNSD, SECRET
❀PREFERENCE: ANY GENRE THAT HAS , STRAIGHT & . SEND ANY IDOLXIDOL PWEEASE!
❀GROUPS: EXO, BAP, SHINEE, BANGTAN BOYS, U-KISS, NU'EST, AFTER SCHOOL, T-ARA, F(X), SNSD, SECRET
❀PREFERENCE: ANY GENRE THAT HAS , STRAIGHT & . SEND ANY IDOLXIDOL PWEEASE!
❀WON'T REVIEW: YURI FICS, NO KAISTAL. ABSOLUTELY NO KAISTAL! NO KAISTAL AT ALL!!! SORRY TO ALL THOSE KAISTAL SHIPPERS. ONCE AGAIN, NO KAISTAL OR I'LL WUSHU YOUR ! I THINK I MADE MYSELF CLEAR! XD
❀NOTES: wHEN IT COMES TO GRAMMAR, I'M A BIT STRICT ON IT. BUT, I UNDERSTAND THAT IF ENGLISH ISN'T YOUr FIRST LANGUAGE I WON'T GET MAD (SERIOUSLY, I WON'T!). BUT, IF ENGLISH IS YOUR FIRST LANGUAGE; I'LL PROBABLY EVOLVE INTO MODE (YEAH, I'M REALLY SORRY ABOUT THAT). THE PLOTS ARE WHAT I'LL LOOK FORWARD TO THE MOST, BECAUSE IT DEPENDS ON MY MOOD WETHER I'LL LIKE IT OR NOT. (NOTE: I'M QUITE A ERT AND I ENJOY READING EVEN THOUGH IT'S DETAILED. SO SEND IN A VERY DETAILED STORY IF YA GOT ONE! XD) FLOW IS SOMETHING THAT WON'T BOTHER ME AS MUCH, BUT IF I NOTICE THINGS ARE BEING TOO RUSHED, I WILL POINT IT OUT. CHARACTERIZATION IS...OKAY, I GUESS. JUST MAKE SURE YOUR CHARACTERS DON'T JUST CHANGE SO SUDDENLY AFTER FIVE CHAPTERS (IF YOUR STORY IS CHAPTERED). IF YOU STATE HOW YOUR CHARACTER IS IN THE dESCRIPTION, I EXPECT TO SEE YOUR CHARACTER LIKE THAT.
❀STORY CRITERIA: MY CRITERIA WILL BE FOCUSED ON FIVE DIFFERENT POINTS:
❀NOTES: wHEN IT COMES TO GRAMMAR, I'M A BIT STRICT ON IT. BUT, I UNDERSTAND THAT IF ENGLISH ISN'T YOUr FIRST LANGUAGE I WON'T GET MAD (SERIOUSLY, I WON'T!). BUT, IF ENGLISH IS YOUR FIRST LANGUAGE; I'LL PROBABLY EVOLVE INTO MODE (YEAH, I'M REALLY SORRY ABOUT THAT). THE PLOTS ARE WHAT I'LL LOOK FORWARD TO THE MOST, BECAUSE IT DEPENDS ON MY MOOD WETHER I'LL LIKE IT OR NOT. (NOTE: I'M QUITE A ERT AND I ENJOY READING EVEN THOUGH IT'S DETAILED. SO SEND IN A VERY DETAILED STORY IF YA GOT ONE! XD) FLOW IS SOMETHING THAT WON'T BOTHER ME AS MUCH, BUT IF I NOTICE THINGS ARE BEING TOO RUSHED, I WILL POINT IT OUT. CHARACTERIZATION IS...OKAY, I GUESS. JUST MAKE SURE YOUR CHARACTERS DON'T JUST CHANGE SO SUDDENLY AFTER FIVE CHAPTERS (IF YOUR STORY IS CHAPTERED). IF YOU STATE HOW YOUR CHARACTER IS IN THE dESCRIPTION, I EXPECT TO SEE YOUR CHARACTER LIKE THAT.
❀STORY CRITERIA: MY CRITERIA WILL BE FOCUSED ON FIVE DIFFERENT POINTS:
TITLE, PLOT, GRAMMAR, CHATACTERIZATION & FLOW.
TITLE: DOES IT BRING ANY ATTENTION? WILL IT BRING OTHER'S ATTENTION?
PLOT: IS IT ORIGINAL? IS IT SOMETHING I'VE SEEN BEFORE BUT WITH A TWIST?
GRAMMAR: IS IT PERFECT? IS IT A BIT FRUSTRATING? IS THERE TOO MANY MISTAKES?
CHARACTERIZATION: ARE YOUR CHARACTERS ACTING HOW THEY'RE SUPPOSED TO BE?
FLOW: ARE YOU RUSHING EXCITING EVENTS? ARE YOU MAKING THE PAST A BIT TOO FAST?
{MY STORIES WILL BE RATED WITH HEARTS ♥ FIVE HEARTS BEING THE HIGHEST AND ONE HEART BEING THE LOWEST.}
NOTICES
{june 27TH,2014.}
so, after eight months,we are finally back! (well just me, milayka) i'm gonna be at least finishing those reviews that were requested and then it'll be goodby for good i guess -.- i am joining the national guard and will soon have to go on basic training. najaeri is a busy girl too and has other things in her mind right now and so is junseol, so yeah. thank you to all the people who send us requests and i hope you keep on making all those beautiful fics ^.^ ♥
so, after eight months,we are finally back! (well just me, milayka) i'm gonna be at least finishing those reviews that were requested and then it'll be goodby for good i guess -.- i am joining the national guard and will soon have to go on basic training. najaeri is a busy girl too and has other things in her mind right now and so is junseol, so yeah. thank you to all the people who send us requests and i hope you keep on making all those beautiful fics ^.^ ♥
{OCTOBER 24TH,2013.}
WE ARE SORRY TO THOSE WHO HAVE LONG REQUESTED AND WE HAVEN'T BEING ABLE TO MAKE THE REVIEWS OF THEIR STORIES. junseol IS STILL UN-AVAILABLE AS FOR ME AND NAJAERI WE ARE REALLY BUSY SINCE IS THE END OF THIS SCHOOL'S YEAR SEMESTER AND WE ARE FULL WITH SCHOOL WORK AND EXAMS. WE WILL TRY TO MAKE THE REVIEWS AS SOON AS WE ARE FREE FROM ALL THIS MESS! XD LOL! THANK YOU AND HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND. THE REVIEW SHOP WILL BE CLOSED 'TIL FURTHER NOTICE SO THAT OTHERS DON'T HAVE TO WAIT. AGAIN, WE ARE TRULY SORRY!
WE ARE SORRY TO THOSE WHO HAVE LONG REQUESTED AND WE HAVEN'T BEING ABLE TO MAKE THE REVIEWS OF THEIR STORIES. junseol IS STILL UN-AVAILABLE AS FOR ME AND NAJAERI WE ARE REALLY BUSY SINCE IS THE END OF THIS SCHOOL'S YEAR SEMESTER AND WE ARE FULL WITH SCHOOL WORK AND EXAMS. WE WILL TRY TO MAKE THE REVIEWS AS SOON AS WE ARE FREE FROM ALL THIS MESS! XD LOL! THANK YOU AND HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND. THE REVIEW SHOP WILL BE CLOSED 'TIL FURTHER NOTICE SO THAT OTHERS DON'T HAVE TO WAIT. AGAIN, WE ARE TRULY SORRY!
★HALL OF FAME
AFTER YOU'VE BEING REVIEWED BY US (MILAYKA, NAJAERI OR JUNSEOL). PLEASE GIVE US CREDIT BY ADDING THIS BANNER TO YOUR FOREWORD ALONG WITH THE LINK TO OUR REVIEW SHOP. THANK YOU! ^^ ♥
NAJAERI IS NOW AVAILABLE. SHE STILL HAS SOME COLLEGE WORK, BUT IT'S SOMETHING SHE CAN BEAR FOR NOW, SO SHE WILL BE TAKING REQUESTS AT A FAST PEACE AGAIN. TY
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