Coup D'état

by: Lovex2254

Genre: Romance/Drama/Fantasy

Main Character(s): Luhan/OC

Contains: Straight/Character's Death

Chapter(s): Four (On-Going)

Summary:   Faceless: an underground society of citizens willing to risk it all for change. I've grown up in the shadows of Faceless with their ideals as the only life I know. No one in Faceless knows my secret. No one knows that I was born like one of Them. I was born like a member of the Dictator's special militia. Faceless cannot know my secret. If they find out, I will be cast away. If I am cast away, I will have nothing.

Title ★★★★★

I loved it so much and it goes so well with the story itself! So I give you kudos for thinking on this one! :D Kudos, my friend!

Plot ★★★★★

So far so good. There's still a few missing loopholes on the plot, still a tad bit lost to what's going on but the story is barely starting so yeah...I'll be waiting for the updates. I subscribe! :) 

Grammar ★★★★★

I didn't see any errors, your grammar is quite neat and easy to follow. That's a huge plus for a story with such a complicated topic that might make the reader get easily lost in the plot. 

Originality ★★★★★

Even though it is indeed original (I've never read a story with such plot), the whole thing about using Exo's original powers from their MAMA era are too cliché and overrated. Now, if you maybe had play with them a bit, like changing the powers between members (Chanyeol is water while Suho fire) or using new powers that might be attached to the plotline, it would've being wayyy better! ;)