Title ❀❀½❀❀

I wasn't bothered by it at first, but as I read your story it doesn't make justice to this fan fic. I mean, this is so well-written, so well-explained that this title just fails to give off the necessary vibe, the angst vibe it needs. I felt you could have come with a better title, one that can pull off the theme you are trying to portray. Sure, it does goes well with the fan fic, but I expected more. I expected so much more, that it dissapointed me after I re-read the title after reading your story. 

Description/Foreword ❀❀❀❀❀

This is brilliant! It's short, but intriguing. It makes the reader wonder what's going to happen with their relationship; will they maintain it, or become enemies? Both of them captivate easily, and there's nothing else I can say apart from good job. I can't mark you down because it's well executed, and you have done whatever was in your hands to make a well-written description and foreword. 

Characterization ❀❀❀❀❀

I rarely give full marks for characterization, but this was simply excellent. It's perfectly portrayed; this is how a teenager behaves most of the time. Confused, with too many emotions; betrayed, happy, mad, rebel, etc. I mean, what else can I say? I can write a full-lenght essay about how good Tiffany's characterization is, and it wouldn't be enough. As a student who is taking lots of psychology classes (I know I put this a lot, but hey, I have to memorize and know behaviours/minds), I can say that you nailed it to perfection, and I'm sure that most of people will identify themselves with ther character. Seriously, this was brilliant and I regret not reading this before, you can blame my University though, but that's another story. The important thing here is that I was blow away with your characterization, done. No more words.

Originality ❀❀❀❀½

Well, it's actually very cliché. It has been used lots of times, so that's why I'm taking half a rose. However, I have read plots like this, and there has been only a few like yours who have explained it this amazingly. I don't know what else to say, really. I mean, it's perfect. What else is left to say?

Oh, yeah... That personally, I must tell you that I loved this the most: