Seoul Song

by: hazel_marie13

Genre: Romance

Main Character(s): Super Junior/SNSD (Super Generation) 

Contains: Straight

Chapter(s): Nine one-shots (Complete)

Summary:   Seoul is one of the beautiful cities that you can find in Korea. And in this city, you will find the famous university called SM University. It is the home of the students who dream of their own love stories. Join the Super Generation in finding their love inside and outside of their homeland.

Title ★★★★★ 

I like it! I get the whole point about the story being called Seoul Song since you are basing it on the song Super Junior sang along Girls Generation and the one-shots involve them and all the romance it's in Seoul, no one on aff has it besides you and ya-da ya-da...so yeah! It's good enough for me! :)  

Plot ★★★★★

The fluffyness in here is to die for! Each one shot is cute and though I don't like idol x idol fics, I really liked yours! However to me the whole picture thingy and you explaining them was a downside :( I like my readers to use their imagination and this cuts it off for me. I like how you connect all the characters especialy Siwon and Yoona being siblings, that was nice! Good job! ^^

Grammar ★★★★★

Your grammar was not the baddest I've seen but I did saw a few errors. The one that bothered me the most was you using the "&"  in exchange of the word "and". Please REFRAIN yourself from doing this, as the use of that symbol it's out of context and not appropiate when writing a story; unless, you are talking about a company or something along the lines. Apart for that, the errors along the story were very simple and can be easily fixed with a good beta. Still, your english was pretty good.

  Originality ★★★★★

Well, we've all have seen these high school/college life stories with our idols, so we can't say they are original cause they're not. There are over 1,000+ fics with that theme on AFF. However you gave them your own spice and you make them work for me somehow. Also, I liked that you based each one shot on a SUJU/SNSD song and put the song at the end.