Ocean(海) by Najaeri
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by: Najaeri
Genre: Romance/Angst/Fantasy
Main Character(s): Suho/OC
Contains: Straight
Chapter(s): Four (Completed)
Summary: This is something neither you and I can afford. I wish it would have been easier, but this is destiny and we can't change it no matter how much we want. Accept it, embrace it and go on with your life. Because unfortunately, if you want me to be yours, you have to become one with the ocean, so I can love you more.
Title ★★★★★
As soon as you know it's a EXO fic, the title inmediately tells you of whom it is about. If you are a huge fan of the guardia, you won't think twice as to click that title and read about the lovely leader of EXO-K. However when it comes to originality, I looked up for other aff fics with the same title and I didn't see one with just "Ocean" yet I did saw "My Ocean", "Ocean Park", "Ocean Eyes", "Ocean of Dreams" so I'm afraid the title might lack a little on the originality. Sorry! >.< It also yet again inmediately tells you what's the story might be about. It's about Suho and him being the 'ocean' or somewhere between those lines.
Plot ★★★★★
As soon as you start reading the story, you give the reader a quick description about the main girl. Her personality as she likes living in solitude and her adoration for the ocean. Through out the whole first chapter you completely get it: the girl can't get enough of the blue. Then comes the mysterious boy sitting and staring at the ocean that caughts her by surprise as she had a sort of "magnetism" toward him and the boy tells her 'you want to talk to me' in a matter-of-fact voice. Now you know who that boy is but even though you do, you can't help wonder how he is like and what will they talk about. Then in the second chapter you see their friendship develop. We learn the name of the female character is Mizu and confirmed that the boy is indeed Suho. We learn about Suho's personality: quiet south korean rich boy. Then we have a surprising discovery almost at the end of the chapter: Mizu can see people's auras and she had seen Suho's and she can tell that he is pure and he has a different aura than any human. And then comes her realization that she isn't worthy of him even though she has tried to tell herself that what she felt for him isn't love. But I guess she finally comes to a break down and eventually admits to herself in the end that she indeed loves him but cannot have him. Then the third chapter comes along with a full blast! Mizu's confession and then what do we got? Suho has a secret? And you can't help wonder what it was yet you might know what it is and you won't really know until the very end of the chapter where it hits you fully in the head. The final chapter comes and finally Suho tells her everything and you find out everything there is to know about him and about his real relationship with Mizu. And you can't help but feel awestruck and sad about it....by now if you are a softie like me, you will be crying your eyes out. You continue reading and you will cry this time it will be happy tears. And you will definetely want Suho to be your ocean. Enough said.
Grammar ★★★★★
Reader's POV
You asked me to answer you a few questions and they will be answer not from the review's pov but from a reader's. You asked about the plot: I thought it was very well written and well thought of. I loved that it was about one of my biases. I really love any story that invloves Suho and this was so lovely I just can't. My feels were all over the place! (But you know that very well! >.<) I still remember the day I first read it and it was like 2am; I called you crying my eyes out telling you how much I hated you! x'D lol! Good times! You asked what do I think about the title: Well, it was well used since the story is about that and even though it might be over-used, it was still a perfect title cause it fitted the plot like a ring to a finger. You asked wether the story was good: Is it good? More like AWESOME! A masterpiece! But then again, you know that and a few people too, you even won first place with it in a short story competition! What else is there to say?! You asked what do I think about the pairing: MiHo was great. Out of all the OCs I've written paired up with Suho, she is my #1 on the list. Then again none can compare to a girl that has her dreams some true and gives it all just to be with her love. You asked how's your grammar: You might say that it isn't the best and it might not be but BELIEVE ME, for someone whose english isn't their first language it is wayyy better than stories I have read and I find out that english is indeed their first language. It is a shame sometimes. But anyways, your story is awesome and even though you already knew most of my thoughts about it and hate you a lil bit for making me yet again re-read this story....I don't need to tell you that my ocean feels came back once again! ;A; Oh~ Bimirira maresseo~
I give this story overall!
★★★★★
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