Chapter 3

Who Should I choose?

 

  • Thank goodness that day L.Joe dumped me was on a Friday. I didn’t have to face the school immediately. My close friends facetimed me, comforting me, saying it’s okay, that L.Joe’s a jerk and all that jazz but hey, would you think if it was true when you’re talking about popular guys in school? Not so likely right? 

    During lunch, I got a text from JR. 
    -Hey pretty, did you dream about me?
    HAHA!

    I was blushing slightly at the ‘pretty’ and this fluttery feeling came back. Anyhow, I still replied him and the conversation flowed. 

    -Hey JR, no I didn’t. So full of yourself! HAHA
    -Whatever, I’m full of myself! I’m proud of it :D
    -Are you free now? Wanna tour me round the neighbourhood? 
    -Hmmm, what if I don’t want to? :P
    -Then I’m going to get lost in this world, and you’d never have me ever again… Ain’t that saddening?

    His last reply actually stood out. I took a while to type the answer, considering answers. Yes or No? 

    -Maybe I would be sad but at least there isn’t going to be any tease teasing me. HAHA
    -Are you calling me a tease? /wiggly eyebrows emoticon/ 
    I’ll take it as a compliment. Haha! So are you going to tour me?
    -OMG.. So full of yourself! I didn’t say you were the tease:P 
    Yeah sure. I’ll tour you round the neighbourhood. When?
    -Lemme see, now? Meet you in half and hours’ time?
    -Okkie! See ya!
    I quickly gobbled up my lunch and went to change to something nicer. Shorts and a tee. I was actually excited! If it was one of my friends from school, I wouldn’t be so hyped about it. I was actually anticipating the tour. I checked myself in the mirror and fixed my hair up with pins. I looked at the clock and I still had 5 minutes left. I wrote a note to my papa saying I went out with my friend. Papa had gone out with my brother to do some man things. Man things=golf…
    I checked myself in the mirror for the umpteenth time. Why am I bothering about how I look in front of him? I didn’t even bother about going out with friends much less, looking good in front of them. What has JR done to me? 
    The door bell ran and I ran. OMG! I ran, I don’t run. I walk like a sloth. Even if it’s the police. What in the world?

 

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caramelboba
#1
Chapter 30: Oh my, I'm crying ;__; I'm glad there's nobody sitting near me since I'm sitting on the bus :D
Funny though I kinda liked this ending too, a lot, even though I'm usually not that fond of sadness. (hmm.. Lately it seem to have changed o_o)
Thank you for updating and thank you for this story~!! >_< I enjoyed reading it and sorry for being a silent reader for so long. *bows*
caramelboba
#2
Chapter 29: Omo. This ending was lovely! >_<
I loved the way everything was cleared up. Just oh my gosh, my feels!<3 And it wasn't rushed or anything. :33
I'd like to read the other ending too~
caramelboba
#3
Chapter 28: You just made her less hateful for me. o_o I mean, I feel sorry for her turning to someone like that. Gosh, feels really odd to think that maybe she's not that bad... BUT A CLIFFHANGER!?!? Omo, how can I deal with this now? Have to calm down. Ok. I'll wait. *repeats the word 'patience' for herself*
And I really wouldn't say that about the chapter. It kinda got me feeling that I saw a bit deeper into her character.
caramelboba
#4
Chapter 27: Oh, I have been really busy for a long while and hadn't have time to read this story. I just want to say that I really like the story even though I'm one of the silent ones. And omo, wae JR?? That's so evil o_o
Oh and I love the fact that you want to keep writing , because I love reading. >_<
I'll try keeping some noice as a reader from now on. Pinky swear!! (I don't know if this comment makes any sense cause I'm so tired. I should be sleeping already)
Bacon1994
#5
Chapter 26: 1Q84... and wow i did not think JR would do something like that. I mean I know he loves her but do you really do that to somebody you love. Oh. Np with the whole subscribing thing I love your story can't wait till the next update :)
Bacon1994
#6
Chapter 8: ummm... tHat is soo sweet L.Joe still loves her but it is still bad what he did to her ... I am a big L.Joe fan (L.Joe Oppa FTW) but I hope she goes for JR he is soo sweet to sticking up for her
santika_adita
#7
Chapter 14: Sorry if I'd filled up your comment too many. I just can't hold this feeling inside me...k k k :p what I wanted to say is...I'm starting to hate Sparrow/myself!!! don't blame me...the way you describe JR's feeling is making my heart ache badly. :'( I love JR...I don't want him to be hurt, but...I hope L.Joe will love Sparrow truly too...What should I do???? I love you Chloe and Franny XD <3
*sorry, I was too excited and dramatic
santika_adita
#8
Chapter 13: I really love these updates...thank you for updating :D <3
I got confused somehow...Because I biased both of them..L.joe is FREAKIN' enchanting, and JR?? He's more than INCREDIBLE XD