Chapter 14

Who Should I choose?

 

JR’s POV

 

What’s wrong with me? I don’t understand why Sparrow chose L.Joe over me… it doesn’t make any sense. I guess the problem lies within me… I mean who am I kidding? I may look really good on the outside, but I’m crushed on the inside.

I am not who I seem to be. I’ve experienced many things, and it always involve with people leaving me in the end. All my ex-girlfriends left me, my best friends left me, heck even my real parents left me. Its all my fault, I’m not good enough for her.

 

I am starting to regret what I said to Sparrow, she was a really kind girl and it just broke my heart to know that someone is going to leave me again. I guess I was too harsh and I swore I saw a tear leaking from her eye…

 

 

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L.Joe’s POV

 

She accepted!!! Sparrow accepted my confession, though not I think back, it was a little embarrassing. “Beep… beep” I took out my phone and saw Sparrow’s message

 

From: My Little Bird

To:L.Joe

 

Hey, byunghyun. Are you free? Can you pick me up from the little café down our school? I wanna go home and I don’t have a ride

 

From: Byunghyun

To: Sparrow

 

Sure!! Anything for my girl :P <3

 

 

So I rode my motorbike over to that little café, and the first thing I saw was a crying sparrow. “Sparrow! Are you alright? Why are you crying? Are you hurt anywhere?” “L.Joe!!! JR... JR… he told me that we couldn’t be friend anymore!! And to think that I though he was different, and he was my first real friend.”

So that’s what’s bothering her… I’m going to kill him.

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franny's note:

ok, so Chloe and I decided that we would write the chapter alternately, which means that since i wrote this chapter, the next one would be her and after that me again and so forth. Basically, that also means that there is not really a proper storyline. And we would just write based on that chapter. So if the transition is a little weird, forgive us >.< i hope you guys actually undertsnad what i just wrote.... 

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caramelboba
#1
Chapter 30: Oh my, I'm crying ;__; I'm glad there's nobody sitting near me since I'm sitting on the bus :D
Funny though I kinda liked this ending too, a lot, even though I'm usually not that fond of sadness. (hmm.. Lately it seem to have changed o_o)
Thank you for updating and thank you for this story~!! >_< I enjoyed reading it and sorry for being a silent reader for so long. *bows*
caramelboba
#2
Chapter 29: Omo. This ending was lovely! >_<
I loved the way everything was cleared up. Just oh my gosh, my feels!<3 And it wasn't rushed or anything. :33
I'd like to read the other ending too~
caramelboba
#3
Chapter 28: You just made her less hateful for me. o_o I mean, I feel sorry for her turning to someone like that. Gosh, feels really odd to think that maybe she's not that bad... BUT A CLIFFHANGER!?!? Omo, how can I deal with this now? Have to calm down. Ok. I'll wait. *repeats the word 'patience' for herself*
And I really wouldn't say that about the chapter. It kinda got me feeling that I saw a bit deeper into her character.
caramelboba
#4
Chapter 27: Oh, I have been really busy for a long while and hadn't have time to read this story. I just want to say that I really like the story even though I'm one of the silent ones. And omo, wae JR?? That's so evil o_o
Oh and I love the fact that you want to keep writing , because I love reading. >_<
I'll try keeping some noice as a reader from now on. Pinky swear!! (I don't know if this comment makes any sense cause I'm so tired. I should be sleeping already)
Bacon1994
#5
Chapter 26: 1Q84... and wow i did not think JR would do something like that. I mean I know he loves her but do you really do that to somebody you love. Oh. Np with the whole subscribing thing I love your story can't wait till the next update :)
Bacon1994
#6
Chapter 8: ummm... tHat is soo sweet L.Joe still loves her but it is still bad what he did to her ... I am a big L.Joe fan (L.Joe Oppa FTW) but I hope she goes for JR he is soo sweet to sticking up for her
santika_adita
#7
Chapter 14: Sorry if I'd filled up your comment too many. I just can't hold this feeling inside me...k k k :p what I wanted to say is...I'm starting to hate Sparrow/myself!!! don't blame me...the way you describe JR's feeling is making my heart ache badly. :'( I love JR...I don't want him to be hurt, but...I hope L.Joe will love Sparrow truly too...What should I do???? I love you Chloe and Franny XD <3
*sorry, I was too excited and dramatic
santika_adita
#8
Chapter 13: I really love these updates...thank you for updating :D <3
I got confused somehow...Because I biased both of them..L.joe is FREAKIN' enchanting, and JR?? He's more than INCREDIBLE XD