Chapter 18

Who Should I choose?

 

Chapter 17

 

Sparrow’s POV

 

Who is that girl seriously? Why is she so close to L.Joe and with that squishing? She looks like she got implants or some sort. They look too big to be real. If she loses balance, I wonder if her s will burst… that’s… not nice to see…

Oh girl, you are so gross. Just imagine a balloon bursting and air doesn’t come up but blood and fats and meat… that’s equally gross. OK, this discussion is over.

Yes, very over

That girl, don’t bother about her. Unless things happen, she’s nothing. Concentrate on your date!

Thanks, conscience.

 

L.Joe was really a sweety during the date. That’s why I love him, he’s a gentleman when he wants to be. He got us cute couple hairbands and won me a teddy bear, see what I mean by ‘he’s a sweety’. You should, I hope you get a boyfriend like that. (That’s my own note)

 

Narrator’s POV

 

L.Joe sent Sparrow back to her house and before she stepped on the first step to the door, L.Joe pulled her back by the hand, turning her around like doing a ballroom dance turn. He wrapped his hands round her petite waist and brought her closer, closing the very small distance between them, bodies touching. (I think of Warm Bodies)  “L.Joe,” Sparrow squealed, “what are you doing?” Not in the tone of being offended but in the tone of love, happiness and pure bliss. L.Joe smiled a charismatic smile, “Kissing my little Sparrow goodbye and wishing her sweet dreams about our life together forever.” Sparrow blushed violently and looked away, embarrassed. L.Joe took one hand and tilted her face towards him and closed up the tiniest distance, softly planting his lips on hers. They lost themselves in their paradise together, kissing ever so passionately. Love flowing through every touch, it was like every touch was molten lava, burning their skins in passion. L.Joe felt Sparrow losing her breath and was getting weak, he let her go, put some distance between them only to hear Sparrow whimper in dismay that it wasn’t long enough. “Is my girl actually wanting more?” L.Joe cheekily asked. “No!” Sparrow turned around, caught red handed.

“Go home L.Joe, it’s late already,” Sparrow walked towards her house and turned around to see L.Joe right in front of her. She got shocked and almost fell backwards when L.Joe caught her just in time and brought her into a romantic catch position, you know the one you see when the male swirls the girl around and they momentarily stare into each other’s eyes. Yeah that kind of swing.

“Good night Sparrow,” L.Joe sweetly whispered, before kissing Sparrow one last time before letting her go, facing the door. So happens, her mom opened the door on cue and Sparrow walked in, not forgetting to wish L.Joe a goodnight.

She closed the door and smiled dreamily to herself, staring into space. Her mom just could not help but laugh at her in-love daughter.  

“I see things are going really well huh?”

“Yeah,”

“So JR’s okay with it?”

“Yeah,”

“You happy?”

“Yeah,”

“Go to sleep darling,”

“Yeah,”

A happy night for everyone but things are about to change or will they not?

 

 

Chloe’s note

 

How was it?? I hope you like because I liked it and was typing it listening to PENTATONIX. A really good American acappella group, I think I spelt it wrongly but you know what I mean right? Check them out!

I hope the last will keep you in suspense till the next chapter comes up:D I’m just as evil as Frances(frannnny), MuahahahahahJ

I hope she gets what I mean by the last sentence, if not then too bad since we came up with this quirky way of sharing the story:D

 

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caramelboba
#1
Chapter 30: Oh my, I'm crying ;__; I'm glad there's nobody sitting near me since I'm sitting on the bus :D
Funny though I kinda liked this ending too, a lot, even though I'm usually not that fond of sadness. (hmm.. Lately it seem to have changed o_o)
Thank you for updating and thank you for this story~!! >_< I enjoyed reading it and sorry for being a silent reader for so long. *bows*
caramelboba
#2
Chapter 29: Omo. This ending was lovely! >_<
I loved the way everything was cleared up. Just oh my gosh, my feels!<3 And it wasn't rushed or anything. :33
I'd like to read the other ending too~
caramelboba
#3
Chapter 28: You just made her less hateful for me. o_o I mean, I feel sorry for her turning to someone like that. Gosh, feels really odd to think that maybe she's not that bad... BUT A CLIFFHANGER!?!? Omo, how can I deal with this now? Have to calm down. Ok. I'll wait. *repeats the word 'patience' for herself*
And I really wouldn't say that about the chapter. It kinda got me feeling that I saw a bit deeper into her character.
caramelboba
#4
Chapter 27: Oh, I have been really busy for a long while and hadn't have time to read this story. I just want to say that I really like the story even though I'm one of the silent ones. And omo, wae JR?? That's so evil o_o
Oh and I love the fact that you want to keep writing , because I love reading. >_<
I'll try keeping some noice as a reader from now on. Pinky swear!! (I don't know if this comment makes any sense cause I'm so tired. I should be sleeping already)
Bacon1994
#5
Chapter 26: 1Q84... and wow i did not think JR would do something like that. I mean I know he loves her but do you really do that to somebody you love. Oh. Np with the whole subscribing thing I love your story can't wait till the next update :)
Bacon1994
#6
Chapter 8: ummm... tHat is soo sweet L.Joe still loves her but it is still bad what he did to her ... I am a big L.Joe fan (L.Joe Oppa FTW) but I hope she goes for JR he is soo sweet to sticking up for her
santika_adita
#7
Chapter 14: Sorry if I'd filled up your comment too many. I just can't hold this feeling inside me...k k k :p what I wanted to say is...I'm starting to hate Sparrow/myself!!! don't blame me...the way you describe JR's feeling is making my heart ache badly. :'( I love JR...I don't want him to be hurt, but...I hope L.Joe will love Sparrow truly too...What should I do???? I love you Chloe and Franny XD <3
*sorry, I was too excited and dramatic
santika_adita
#8
Chapter 13: I really love these updates...thank you for updating :D <3
I got confused somehow...Because I biased both of them..L.joe is FREAKIN' enchanting, and JR?? He's more than INCREDIBLE XD