× 15 × - The Plot Thickens

A Star, but a Touchable Star

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kBIv71kUsEI

 

It's so me to get a beast song and put it on a beast chapter. LOL.

Well, starting here, the plot and the story begins to get confusing, guys!

Goodluck! ^_^

 

((A/N: This part has happened in a different POV, not Chae Ri's.).......or has it?)

 

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× 15 × - The Plot Thickens

 

The slamming of a door awoke you. You sat up, your wrists tied up to a metal pole at the side of the wall. You looked up only to see darkness as someone had blindfolded you.

"The princess is awake, at last?"

You jumped. "W-what am I doing here?"

A throaty laugh. "Don't worry, dear."

Laughs surrounded you from all sides. Your face burned from the amount of mockery in their voices, making you feel humiliated. Somewhere in the cold room you were in, someone was whistling loudly, a tune. A creepy one, in fact. 

"Uncle won't hurt you."

You backed away, hitting the wall with a loud thud. The laughs stopped.

"What are you doing?" The man's voice asked harshly.

You scrambled away from the rough hands grabbing your legs. You let out a scream.

"Stop! I don't have an uncle! Stop it!" You cried, thrashing around. 

You heard footsteps rushing in, and the hands disappeared.

"Boss, we don't want you to touch this filth." A familiar voice said coldly.

You knew that voice. The sweetness in it, the warmth, yet, it was covered by an icy coldness.

"Your right." The man's deep voice boomed.

"Knock her out and take her out of here."

"Yes sir."

The blindfold fell away from your eyes, and your eyes surveyed the room. It was filled with men in dark clothes, chains, tattoos all over their arms. But there was one tattoo you noticed on every single person. 

A snake wrapped in vines.

Then you saw the glint of light flash off their teeth, and your eyes furrowed. Then they widened as you caught a glimpse of their teeth.

Fangs.

Then, your mouth and nose was covered by a cloth. You let out a muffled yell, struggling in the mans grip. You took a whiff of the smell on the rag,  before you knocked out. It smelt like lavender with....

Chlorofoam.

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SingingMassacre
#1
Chapter 25: JAY. WHY YOU NO DO SOMETHING. YOUUU DDD; -throws spoons-
Toriclt
#2
update soon!
lolmarian
#3
Chapter 24: So, I've read this far and chapter 24 unites with me saying you lost interest? Author, you don't understand how many people adore and are inspired by your writing like you're branching out to different stories. We enjoy reading this fanfic just like every other great fanfics. But in order for YOU, to be a great author, neverless, a great story with a fantastic story line, you have to finish this! I know I sound hella pressurizing, it's just I love this story so much - and that's something I haven't grown attached to in awhile. So, thank you for inspiring and letting other readers like me, enjoy reading stories like yours. Please, try. Haha

Hope to hear from this story soon. Try your best, I and many other believe in you and see potential to finish this story. :)

xo
PuffyBunnyIsLazy
#4
Chapter 26: OMG Jay! What are you doing?! Thanks for the update! ;)
BigBang_VIP #5
Chapter 25: Omggg what an awesome update!!
xbabieveex #6
Chapter 24: Omfg I love your story. I love how Jay and Chae are hella close and chill with each other. I hope you continue to write awesome stories. Subscribed~
ohshytsitzmarina #7
Chapter 24: Noo I read this in two days, get to this chapter. And you say you're not feeling it anymore?! I'm gonna cry... I love it. );
Nyaikou
#8
Chapter 2: It's a bit weird that you switched from third person to first at the end of chapter 1/beginning of chapter 2! Enjoyed the beginning of the story though :)
b2utiful_jwalker #9
Chapter 23: Ohh i get it now...
Pleasee put jay scenes in im dying :ccc
Update soon!
kelly-elly
#10
Chapter 23: Yayyy! So glad you updated! WOO! So she was in a gang... 0.0 Gosh whats their problem w/ Jay? /: Hope you write more Jay scenes soon haha~! (: