Report Card- Angels and Demons: Those with Wings by 8symmetrical8. Chapters 1-10

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Title : (1/2) Was it eye-catching? Does it fit the fic?

It fits the fic but it's not all that eye catching.

Description & Foreword : (1/2) did it get me curious/interested? Did it give too much information or totally off topic?

I got curious, too little information but i think that's what got me curious.

Originality: (4/5) Was it different from other fics out there?

I don't read a lot but i think the whole angel thing might be used a lot. However the 'demons' part and how you have this all set up is different.

Overall Appearance/Neatness: (5/5) How were things like your background, poster, and font? Did I have trouble reading due to any font?

No trouble reading it due to the font or anything like that. The poster, I found it very creative. I like the background too, not distracting.

Word Choice & Descriptiveness: (5/6) Did you have a wide range in variety with words? Was I able to visualize things in my head easily with your words?

Beautiful range of words you have. Props to you on the Latin too, I'm guessing you did your research. Visualizing things was pretty easy too.

Story Flow: (9/10) Were things going by smoothly or was it confusing and jerky?

A chop here and there but overall good flow.

Grammar, Sentence Fluency, and etc : (16/20) I’m a semi-grammar freak so grammar is a big thing for me. Grammar, spelling, and all the good stuff in this section. Except this part of the grading to be stricter.

I spotted quite a few grammar mistakes. Like right at the beginning of the plot, the sentence was

"... Kyoungjae me and you ...." when it SHOULD have been "..... Kyoungjae, you and I .... "

Two of them in the Kevin! chapter.

1. " ... my is the 5th one down .... " Should have been ( also I think the sentence should be revised to) " Maybe mine is the 5th one down..."

2. " ... they bodies ..." should be " ...their bodies..."

There was also one a little later. The sentence was, " Save for angels." and I was really confused. I'm guessing it should have been," Same for angels."

Plot: (20/20): Very important. Was it interesting? Was it well written?

It was actually really interesting. The plot and how I was actually pretty into it - since I'm usually not one for 'supernatural' fics. Well written.

Writing Style and Format : (20/20) How was the layout/formatting? Was your style easy to figure out and read? How does it look? Was it professional looking? Etc.

Neat and all that good stuff.

Overall Enjoyment: (9.510) How much I liked your fic overall.

I really  enjoyed it. I can't wait for you to review again! Only half a point off because there were a few moments where i was confused.

Total: 90.5/100

EXTRA CREDIT~! A CHANCE for more points and also a possibility that more points will get taken off…

Characters: (0/3) Were your characters well developed? Did they have a voice to them?

Maybe some more development needed but I think you should add some more voice to your characters.

Chapter Titles: (.5/2) Did you even have them? Did they go with the chapter? Were they creative?

You did have them but they weren't all the creative. HOWEVER some of them did get me all nervous for what was going to happen in that particular chapter so good job ^__^

My Feels: (1/5) What were my reactions to events? Did you get me to laugh, or crack a smile, resist the urge to throw something at the computer screen, cry, etc? All that good stuff. *Note- Points will be taken off if I ever had any “ What the hell did I just read” moments.

I cracked a smile here and there. Stupid Angel jokes lol .

Twists & Turns + Cliffhangers: (1/2) Did you have them? If you did, were they creative or gasp worthy?

Twists and turns! I had a few small ' OMG' moments.

Anything Else: (1/3) Anything else praise worthy or points off?

I never thought I could like a fic like this. Good job on getting me to like it haha ^__^

Notes/ Comments from Me (no points):

I honestly really like this fic. I hope you request soon so I can continue reading ^^ Keep up the amazing work!

Final Total: 94/100