Report Card for Yo Ho, Yo Ho! A Pirates Life For Me - Kakurine039
Time For Your Fanfic Report Card!Report Card - Yo Ho, Yo Ho! A Pirates Life For Me - Kakurine039. Chapters 1-4
Title : (2/2) Was it eye-catching? Does it fit the fic?
Eye-catching since there's not many fics involving pirates here on AFF and of course it fits the fic.
Description & Foreword : (2/2) did it get me curious/interested? Did it give too much information or totally off topic?
I was interested. It gave a 'moderate' amount of information. Not too much and not too little. Just enough to get a reader interested.
Originality: (5/5) Was it different from other fics out there?
As said above, there's not many fics involving pirates. In fact after checking the pirates tag, there's only three including yours.
Overall Appearance/Neatness: (5/5) How were things like your background, poster, and font? Did I have trouble reading due to any font ?
Very Neat and organized. No trouble reading it due to the font or anything like that and the usage of the enter button wasn't as much as your other fic lol. Background wasn't distracting , in fact i thought it was only a solid black background for a while.
Word Choice & Descriptiveness: (5/6) Did you have a wide range in variety with words? Was I able to visualize things in my head easily with your words?
Pirate vocabulary is quite impressive. I'm guessing you did a good amount of research. I wasn't all that able to visualize things and I was curious about how some things looked. Example like the ship, and I'm still question how Kiseop looks lol.
Story Flow: (9/10) Were things going by smoothly or was it confusing and jerky?
Same with the other fic. The one sentence recap helps the story flow. Smooth sailing so far.
Grammar, Sentence Fluency, and etc : (18/20) I’m a semi-grammar freak so grammar is a big thing for me. Grammar, spelling, and all the good stuff in this section. Except this part of the grading to be stricter.
There's only four chapters so there's not much to grade. I've only spotted two grammar mistakes as of now. There's one right at the beginning,
".... Jaeseop death ... " should be " ....Jaeseop's death....
Another not long after that one,
"..... Kibum yell .... " should be " ... Kibum yelled..."
Small mistakes but since there's so little to grade, I'm taking one point off each.
Plot: (20/20): Very important. Was it interesting? Was it well written?
Interesting. I'm not bored of it and I've never been interested in pirates. So far, it's well written.
Writing Style and Format : (20/20) How was the layout/formatting? Was your style easy to figure out and read? How does it look? Was it professional looking? Etc.
A bit bit better than the other fic, less white blanks. Still just as neat as easy to read as the other.
Overall Enjoyment: (10/10) How much I liked your fic overall.
I never knew I could find myself liking a pirate fic lol. Lots of smiles from reading. You can thank Jonghyun lol.
Total: 96/100
EXTRA CREDIT~! A CHANCE for more points and also a possibility that more points will get taken off…
Characters: (0/3) Were your characters well developed? Did they have a voice to them?
Not as much voice in them as I thought they would have. Maybe a little work in developing them too. Then again, you only have 4 chapters as of now. Not much for me to grade lol.
Chapter Titles: (0/2) Did you even have them? Did they go with the chapter? Were they creative?
You did have chapter titles but I don't really see how they go with the chapter. That's just me though.
My Feels: (1.5/5) What were my reactions to events? Did you get me to laugh, or crack a smile, resist the urge to throw something at the computer screen, cry, etc? All that good stuff. *Note- Points will be taken off if I ever had any “ What the hell did I just read” moments.
Lots of smiles at Jonghyun's ways and a small laugh from Kevin's reactions.
Twists & Turns + Cliffhangers: (0/2) Did you have them? If you did, were they creative or gasp worthy?
Nothing yet. Though the Captain wasn't who I was guessing it was.
Anything Else: (1/3) Anything else praise worthy or points off?
Praise worthy would be how you're able to think outside of the box. Pirates are rarely, pretty much never used on here. I find it intriguing how you even came up with the idea.
Notes/ Comments from Me (no points):
With only four chapters, there wasn't much to grade for me. As of now though, you're off to a good start. Maybe giving a little more voice to some characters and developing them more. Everything else is looking fine ^^ Hope I get to see how far this fic goes. Keep up the good work : ]
Final Total: 98.5 /100
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