Report Card for From "Pauperess" to Princess - ilove2smile
Time For Your Fanfic Report Card!Report Card- From "Pauperess" to Princess by ilove2smile. Chapters 1-21
Title : (1/2) Was it eye-catching? Does it fit the fic?
It fits the fic but it's not all that eye catching.
Description & Foreword : (0/2) did it get me curious/interested? Did it give too much information or totally off topic?
I honestly wasn't interested at all when i read the description and foreword. Decent amount of information but then again, maybe a bit too much. I'm a little iffy on my decision on that.
Originality: (3/5) Was it different from other fics out there?
The slight forced marriage idea is often used, adopted kid, etc.
Overall Appearance/Neatness: (4.5/5) How were things like your background, poster, and font? Did I have trouble reading due to any font?
No trouble reading it due to the font or anything like that. The posters were nice. Maybe ( and it probably is.) it's just my eyes but after awhile the background got a little blinding.
Word Choice & Descriptiveness: (4/6) Did you have a wide range in variety with words? Was I able to visualize things in my head easily with your words?
Nice range of words. However picturing things was a little difficult. Lik eI know what SHINee and IU look like and etc, but you didn't really describe them. Unless I missed something, I wasn't sure how to see this all in my head.
Story Flow: (8/10) Were things going by smoothly or was it confusing and jerky?
The flow was pretty good. A chop here and there but after a while it was smooth.
Grammar, Sentence Fluency, and etc : (17/20) I’m a semi-grammar freak so grammar is a big thing for me. Grammar, spelling, and all the good stuff in this section. Except this part of the grading to be stricter.
I didn't spot any type of mistake until near what you had so far. The only mistake I foudn was how you used the wrong word in one of the sentences. I don't remember what chapter it was in but the word was suppose to be 'lot' and you put Loy. Three points off because one, it was the wrong word. Two, thus it's automatically wrong grammar lol. Third, because the L was capitialized when it didn't need to be.
Plot: (18/20): Very important. Was it interesting? Was it well written?
It's well written but I didn't get into it until I got like ... maybe 13 or 15 chapters in.
Writing Style and Format : (20/20) How was the layout/formatting? Was your style easy to figure out and read? How does it look? Was it professional looking? Etc.
Your style wasn't hard to figure out or read. Looks neat.
Overall Enjoyment: (7.5/10) How much I liked your fic overall.
I didn't really start to enjoy it until like I said before, like 13 or so chapters in. Overall though, I enjoyed it.
Total: 61/100
EXTRA CREDIT~! A CHANCE for more points and also a possibility that more points will get taken off…
Characters: (.5/3) Were your characters well developed? Did they have a voice to them?
Maybe some more development needed but loads of voice you have in your characters.
Chapter Titles: (0/2) Did you even have them? Did they go with the chapter? Were they creative?
You did have them but they weren't all the creative.
My Feels: (1/5) What were my reactions to events? Did you get me to laugh, or crack a smile, resist the urge to throw something at the computer screen, cry, etc? All that good stuff. *Note- Points will be taken off if I ever had any “ What the hell did I just read” moments.
I cracked a smile here and there. Actually got a smile and a small laugh near the 'end'. I felt kind of uncomfortable/awkward when I was reading it. I don't know why.
Twists & Turns + Cliffhangers: (.5/2) Did you have them? If you did, were they creative or gasp worthy?
Cliffhanger at the end ;D
Anything Else: (0/3) Anything else praise worthy or points off?
N/A
Notes/ Comments from Me (no points):
I think you could make your chapters longer and not chop up some things but other than that, it's looking good. Keep up the good work. ^__^
Final Total: 85/100
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