Report Card - Learning to Trust by kpopluvr18. Oneshot

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Title : (1.5/2) Was it eye-catching? Does it fit the fic?

Totally fits the fic. It wasn't very eye-catching, since I think i could have just scrolled past it, but it did get me curious.

Description & Foreword : (1/2) did it get me curious/interested? Did it give too much information or totally off topic?

It gave very little information but I think that's what got me interested. Only one point because the foreword was just a little note from you.

Originality: (5/5) Was it different from other fics out there?

Sure there' been fics about like, ' the girl who doesn't know how to love' or ' the girl who is quiet and ignored' but I feel this was different then those fics.

Overall Appearance/Neatness: (5/5) How were things like your background, poster, and font? Did I have trouble reading due to any font ?

There was no poster -no points off- but there was a background that wasn't distracting. No trouble reading due to the font.

Word Choice & Descriptiveness: (6/6) Did you have a wide range in variety with words? Was I able to visualize things in my head easily with your words?

Nice range of words. I felt like I was seeing a movie in my head *__*

Story Flow: (10/10) Were things going by smoothly or was it confusing and jerky?

Smooth. So smooth.

Grammar, Sentence Fluency, and etc : (19.5/20) I’m a semi-grammar freak so grammar is a big thing for me. Grammar, spelling, and all the good stuff in this section. Except this part of the grading to be stricter.

One grammar mistake. ONLY one grammar mistake was spotted.

"But the walls I were currently rebuilding was not complete"

If I'm right - because looking back on it, I think it could have worked this way- , it could have been fixed to:

"But the walls i were currently were not complete."

Other than that, flawless.

Plot: (20/20): Very important. Was it interesting? Was it well written?

Very well written and I found myself hooked to this oneshot.

Writing Style and Format : (20/20) How was the layout/formatting? Was your style easy to figure out and read? How does it look? Was it professional looking? Etc.

Very professional looking. Neat layout, easy to read.

Overall Enjoyment: (10/10) How much I liked your fic overall.

I found it very.. what's the word I should use? Hm.. like the drama 49 Days lol. I can't think of a word to describe how I enjoyed this fic but I enjoyed it like how I enjoyed 49 Days lol.

Total: 98/100

EXTRA CREDIT~! A CHANCE for more points and also a possibility that more points will get taken off…

Characters: (1/3) Were your characters well developed? Did they have a voice to them?

Reading it, I could really feel how Yunji felt. Lots of voice for her that made her able to be relatable.

Chapter Titles: (0/2) Did you even have them? Did they go with the chapter? Were they creative?

It was a oneshot. lol Need I say more?

My Feels: (1/5) What were my reactions to events? Did you get me to laugh, or crack a smile, resist the urge to throw something at the computer screen, cry, etc? All that good stuff. *Note- Points will be taken off if I ever had any “ What the hell did I just read” moments.

I felt my heart sink a bit at one part and get a little mad with Woohyun. Thanks a lot Woohyun, you were the cause of those feels. -.-" haha

Twists & Turns + Cliffhangers: (0/2) Did you have them? Were they creative or gasp worthy?

No twists or turns. Or cliffhangers.

Anything Else: (2/3) Anything else praise worthy or points off?

I feel like you put a lot of thought into this one-shot and I love how you were able to put all this into one chapter instead of like splitting the story up into multiple chapters. I find that praise worthy.

Then finally, Notes/ Comments from Me (no points) ! I found this one shot to be very deep and somewhat emotional. I feel like you really kind of poured your heart out into it and I really like that. This was a beautiful oneshot. I applaud you. Amazing.

Final Total: 102/100