Report Card- Become One in the Rhythm by imstillalive. Chapters 1 - 8

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Title : (0/2) Was it eye-catching? Does it fit the fic?

For me,if I saw just the title, I probably wouldn't have clicked on it. But that's just me. As for if it fits the fic, I don't see it yet. But then again you only have 8 chapters

Description & Foreword : (1/2) did it get me curious/interested? Did it give too much information or totally off topic?

It got me a tad bit interested and I feel as if you could have given a bit more. Since the description and foreword were pretty short.

Originality: (3/5) Was it different from other fics out there?

The high school idea is used a lot. The tutoring too but you have your own little vibe to it.

Overall Appearance/Neatness: (5/5) How were things like your background, poster, and font? Did I have trouble reading due to any font ?

Very Neat and organized. No trouble reading it due to the font or anything like that. Background wasn't distracting and the poster was nice.

Word Choice & Descriptiveness: (5/6) Did you have a wide range in variety with words? Was I able to visualize things in my head easily with your words?

Decent range of words. Picturing things was alright. 

Story Flow: (9/10) Were things going by smoothly or was it confusing and jerky?

Everything was pretty smooth. There was one choppy part or two but other than that it was all good.

Grammar, Sentence Fluency, and etc : (19/20) I’m a semi-grammar freak so grammar is a big thing for me. Grammar, spelling, and all the good stuff in this section. Except this part of the grading to be stricter.

I couldn't find many grammar or spelling mistakes but there were a few small ones. Almost not noticeable though.

Plot: (15/20): Very important. Was it interesting? Was it well written?

It's well written, don't get me wrong on that. It's just that it didn't seem to get me hooked with the first 8 chapters.

Writing Style and Format : (19/20) How was the layout/formatting? Was your style easy to figure out and read? How does it look? Was it professional looking? Etc.

Looked neat and professional. Your style of writing isn't confusing either. Not full points because I didn't really feel like I was reading out of a book.

Overall Enjoyment: (8/10) How much I liked your fic overall.

I don't read much but I know high school fics are common. However, I did think it was cute and amusing and I did enjoy it.
 

Total: 84/100

EXTRA CREDIT~! A CHANCE for more points and also a possibility that more points will get taken off…

Characters: (0/3) Were your characters well developed? Did they have a voice to them?

i feel like you could develop your characters more. Then again, there's only 8 chapters.

Chapter Titles: (0/2) Did you even have them? Did they go with the chapter? Were they creative?

No points since even though you DID have chapter titles, it's just the number of the chapter.

My Feels: (1.5/5) What were my reactions to events? Did you get me to laugh, or crack a smile, resist the urge to throw something at the computer screen, cry, etc? All that good stuff. *Note- Points will be taken off if I ever had any “ What the hell did I just read” moments.

I cracked a smile here and there. Occasionally had " This ." mood whenever Jihyun showed up lol.

Twists & Turns + Cliffhangers: (0/2) Did you have them? If you did, were they creative or gasp worthy?

There's only 8 chapters, not much to twist and turn.

Anything Else: (0/3) Anything else praise worthy or points off?

It's a good fic, with only 8 chapters, there's not much to say.

Notes/ Comments from Me (no points):

So far so good. I think to make it different from other fics, you should make it your own somehow. i can't really give  you tips with how to do that because it's really up to you. Keep up the good work ^__^

Final Total: 85.5/100