Report Card- Never Though Those 3 WordsThat I've Been Waiting For Will Be The Last From Her by mizice90. Chapters 1-7.

Story Link

Title : (1/2) Was it eye-catching? Does it fit the fic?

It fits the fic but it's not all that eye catching. In fact, It was just too long in my opinion. Like, whoa. I think you could shorten it up a bit because I think it's WAY too long.

Description & Foreword : (0/2) did it get me curious/interested? Did it give too much information or totally off topic?

Honestly, I didn't get hooked or anything. But that's just me.

Originality: (3/5) Was it different from other fics out there?

Hana's secret. That is all.

Overall Appearance/Neatness: (5/5) How were things like your background, poster, and font? Did I have trouble reading due to any font?

No trouble reading it due to the font. Poster and background were fine.

Word Choice & Descriptiveness: (3/6) Did you have a wide range in variety with words? Was I able to visualize things in my head easily with your words?

There wasn't a wide range of words but English isn't your first language so I guess it's understandable. I wasn't really able to picture well... anything. I have no clue what your OC looks like. Or what SHINee look like, or just anyone. I mean I know what my idols look like but what era was they're hair and etc. All that stuff was missing.

Story Flow: (8/10) Were things going by smoothly or was it confusing and jerky?

A bit choppy.

Grammar, Sentence Fluency, and etc : (15/20) I’m a semi-grammar freak so grammar is a big thing for me. Grammar, spelling, and all the good stuff in this section. Except this part of the grading to be stricter.

Knowing that English wasn't your first language. I cut you a bit of slack, but after a while. There were just way too many mistakes. The first chapter already had like 10+ mistakes. I don't know how long you've learned English or anything like that, but I couldn't just ignore all the mistakes and let them fly by for language reasons. Like some examples:

' "texttexttexttext" smirking at me." should/could have been ' "texttexttexttext" She smirked at me.

'Minho and Key immediately run towards us ..." should have been ' Minho and Key imediately ran towards us...'

There's too many for me to list.

Plot: (16/20): Very important. Was it interesting? Was it well written?

It was fairly well written but I wasn't all that interested.

Writing Style and Format : (16/20) How was the layout/formatting? Was your style easy to figure out and read? How does it look? Was it professional looking? Etc.

Neat and all that good stuff. HOWEVER, the biggest pet peeve was how all the talking was in italics. It wasn't making it harder to read but I would get confused because usually italics are for thoughts.

Overall Enjoyment: (6/10) How much I liked your fic overall.

It was an alright fic.

Total: 73/100

EXTRA CREDIT~! A CHANCE for more points and also a possibility that more points will get taken off…

Characters: (0/3) Were your characters well developed? Did they have a voice to them?

There was some voice but your characters weren't at all that well developed.

Chapter Titles: (/2) Did you even have them? Did they go with the chapter? Were they creative?

You did have them but they weren't all the creative.

My Feels: (1/5) What were my reactions to events? Did you get me to laugh, or crack a smile, resist the urge to throw something at the computer screen, cry, etc? All that good stuff. *Note- Points will be taken off if I ever had any “ What the hell did I just read” moments.

Despite not being all that interested, I did tear up a bit on the last chapter lol. Maybe it was because I was listening to the live performance of Life while reading.

Twists & Turns + Cliffhangers: (/2) Did you have them? If you did, were they creative or gasp worthy?

None.

Anything Else: (0/3) Anything else praise worthy or points off?

N/A

Notes/ Comments from Me (no points):

It's a fairly good fic, just some tweeking is needed. : ]

Final Total: 74/100