AICHOO

Feeling's Unknown

 

Key didn't know what to do.

 

However much he wanted to give another a second change he couldn't bear to hurt himself again.

 

He looked at Onew.

 

Key sighed.

 

Key could never ignore Onew when Onew's eyes was looking so intently at him.

 

Key looked up at the rain and thought to himself,

 

Please...why does my life have to be like this...?

 

Key looked back at Onew.

 

"Fine...I'll give you one more chance."

 

Key walked past Onew, in the direction of their home.

 

Onew turned around seeing Key's back facing him, so lonely, so isolated.

 

Onew jogged up to catch up to him.

 

Onew took Key's hand in his and they continued to walk like that for a few minutes, with the rain every where and the wind blowing in every direction possible.

 

"Key..."

 

"Sshhh..." Key put his finger to his lips and pointed another finger into the distance, letting go of Onew's hand.

 

Onew squinted to look at what Key was pointing at but he couldn't see it.

 

Key giggled.

 

Onew looked at Key.

 

It seemed like a century since he had heard that giggle and he knew that he was never going to get sick of it.

 

Never.

 

"Look up silly!"

 

Onew shook out of his thoughts and looked up.

 

There, lying perfectly was the most beautiful thing Onew had ever seen.

 

A rainbow.

 

Although Onew had seen rainbows before, this one was more special.

 

This rainbow was more special because he was looking at it with Key.

 

This rainbow was more special because it symbolises that Onew still has hope to be with Key.

 

Onew turned around to look at Key.

 

Key was perfect.

 

He was perfect in every way.

 

His smile.

 

His hair.

 

His lips.

 

His figure.

 

His eyes.

 

His personality.

 

Kim Kibum was perfect.

 

Onew turned Key around.

 

Key looked at Onew oddly.

 

"What?"

 

"Listen to me..."

 

Key looked at Onew, waiting for him to continue.

 

"About what happened at school...I was...-"

 

"I don't care."

 

Onew looked at Key.

 

He knew he was lying.

 

Pain was written across his delicate face.

 

"I know you care so just..."

 

"NO!"

 

Onew was taken back.

 

Key was never the type of person that shouted and yet he just did.

 

Onew couldn't afford to get Key angry twice in one day so he just pulled Key over and gave him a hug.

 

"Miyanae..."

 

"Saranghae..."

 

Key pushed Onew away.

 

"Stop joking around."

 

Key walked away from Onew.

 

Onew was shocked.

 

He wasn't joking...in fact, he was far from it.

 

Onew ran up to Key and pulled him to face him.

 

"I'm not joking!"  Onew said.

 

"This isn't a topic you should joke about Onew."

 

"I'm not..."

 

"AICHOO!" Key sneezed.

 

Onew was worried now.

 

He began to walk home, fast tugging Key along behind him with his hand.

 

"Where are we going?!?"

 

"Home!" Onew replied to Key's question.

 

Right now, Onew didn't care whether or not Key knew he loved him. He was just worried about Key.

 

Key was in the rain for too long and he was going to catch a cold.

 

The rain stopped.

 

Onew and Key stopped walking and looked up.

 

"Great timing..." Onew muttered to himself.

 

"Let's go out and play!" Key said to Onew who was behind him.

 

Onew turned around his face stern.

 

"No."

 

"Why not?!" 

 

"You're sick!"

 

"I am no-AICHOO!"

 

"See. You need rest."

 

Key pouted and Onew almost smiled if it wasn't because he didn't want Key to be sick.

 

"Time to get home. It's late anyways!"

 

Key sighed and nodded, following behind Onew.

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Michellakiels #1
So great
KimJacKey
#2
Chapter 3: I have been looking for this fic for over 2 years now, and I can't believe I found it. This chapter was the only one I had read, since I had a little blackberry and the Internet was weak. I remember this fic so much because it's the first ever fanfic I've read and it got me into fanfiction. I didn't remember the name of the story, but I knew this chapter like the back of my hand and now that I've found it after such a long search, I'm really happy to be able to read the full thing and I love it♡♡ It's really a great story!
LeeJinki-m
#3
seems interesting
cl-o-v-e-r
#4
Chapter 17: This story was amazing! You're style of writing is reallllly cool!
KhunRi17
#5
this fanfic is so great ^^
I love your writing style
I'm feeling like watching the real show..
good job dear..
kid_leadersone
#6
awesome story
shinnni
#7
Good, good, good ,good! Chuah! Love the story!
riamaulina #8
awesome XD
Exoturn
#9
I TOTALLY LOVE SHINEE! New reader here~
caline
#10
Would you please replace the taeminxminho tag with the 2min tag? :D Thanks. ♥