I Love Onew

Feeling's Unknown

 

"Be quick. You have no time left…” The voice said faintly and suddenly, Key didn’t feel its presence anymore.

 

“What my heart desires the most…” Key echoed.

 

Suddenly, Key’s mind was flooded.

 

Flooded by the smiles of one person.

 

The one person that was always there for him.

 

The one person that always forgave him when he was angry.

 

Onew.

 

 

***

 

“ONEW HYUNG!” Key called out to his best friend.

 

Onew turned around and smiled a cute and dorky smile to Key.

 

“Come on dongsaeng! Hurry up!” Onew shouted out.

 

Key pouted and began to use his short stubby legs to chase after his hyung.

 

“Hyung!” Key shouted again, panting.

 

“AH!” Key shouted and he fell down onto the ground, scrapping his right knee.

 

Key began to cry and looked at the right knee in pain.

 

Suddenly, Key felt a hand on his shoulder and he looked up.

 

“Are you ok Key?”

 

Key suddenly didn’t feel anymore pain and he got up, his right leg slightly limp.

 

Key shook his head and smiled at his hyung.

 

“I’m fine.”

 

“Chinca?”

 

Onew asked again, still worried.

 

“Ye.” Key nodded and smiled again.

 

 

***

 

 

“What my heart desires the most…” Key asked himself again after that flash back.

 

Suddenly, he knew.

 

He knew.

 

He knew what his heart desired the most.

 

But…he was scared.

 

What if it was only him?

 

What if he didn’t feel the same way as me?

 

What if…?

 

 

***

 

“Listen carefully class,” Mrs. Lee said to the grade 5 class.

 

“There is no such thing as “what if’s”. If you feel that it is right then it is right.”

 

The class looked at each other and then back at their beautiful and married teacher.

 

“If you like someone, tell them. If you love someone, tell them.”

 

Key and Onew looked at each other and smiled brightly, not understanding what their teacher was telling them.

 

“Because if you don’t, then it’ll be too late.”

 

 

***

 

Key stopped breathing and suddenly, he understood what his grade 5 teacher meant when she said that.

 

After all these years of forgetting this part of his past, he finally remembered it.

 

And for once, he understood.

 

“I love Onew.”

 

Key said.

 

“Congratulation’s Key. You’ve figured it out now.”

 

The voice was back and Key looked around for it.

 

“You won’t be able to see me Key.”

 

The voice said.

 

“But I want to thank you for making me realise that I’ve loved Onew hyung this whole time!” Key said.

 

“It’s fine. But…”

 

“But…”

 

“If you…something…Onew…”

 

Key’s vision began to blur again and his ears began to ring.

 

“Mianhae…”

 

Key said faintly and suddenly, he was gone.

 

 

***

 

Key’s eyes were heavy and his ears was still slightly ringing.

 

“Key…please…please don’t leave me…”

 

Key heard a voice sob next to him and Key smiled gently.

 

“Hyung…”

 

Key said faintly and suddenly, Onew’s crying face was right in front of his eyes.

 

“I won’t leave you again.”

 

Key said, smiling.

 

Onew smiled and hugged the Key that was on the hospital bed.

 

“I love you hyung…” Key said.

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Michellakiels #1
So great
KimJacKey
#2
Chapter 3: I have been looking for this fic for over 2 years now, and I can't believe I found it. This chapter was the only one I had read, since I had a little blackberry and the Internet was weak. I remember this fic so much because it's the first ever fanfic I've read and it got me into fanfiction. I didn't remember the name of the story, but I knew this chapter like the back of my hand and now that I've found it after such a long search, I'm really happy to be able to read the full thing and I love it♡♡ It's really a great story!
LeeJinki-m
#3
seems interesting
cl-o-v-e-r
#4
Chapter 17: This story was amazing! You're style of writing is reallllly cool!
KhunRi17
#5
this fanfic is so great ^^
I love your writing style
I'm feeling like watching the real show..
good job dear..
kid_leadersone
#6
awesome story
shinnni
#7
Good, good, good ,good! Chuah! Love the story!
riamaulina #8
awesome XD
Exoturn
#9
I TOTALLY LOVE SHINEE! New reader here~
caline
#10
Would you please replace the taeminxminho tag with the 2min tag? :D Thanks. ♥