Chapter Fourty-Eight

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
May 2, 1998
"Finally, the truth"
 
Claire likes her team, she decides. They're all quite professional, with only one Muggleborn in the bunch, and they're all excellent at being quiet and going where instructed without asking questions.
 
Which is, admittedly, why she picked them as her team. She does feel a little bad sticking Rat with Finn and the Muggleborns, but she also has Panther who's basically the best so Claire feels justified in her division decisions for the most part.
 
Her team had reached the Law Enforcement level quite quickly and it hadn't taken long for them to split off into their pre-assigned pairs to begin sieging the floor.
 
However, Claire had quickly realized that this wasn't going to be a loud, intense battle like she'd been hoping when she was given this floor during the task division earlier. Instead it feels like a chess game, where each side is trying to make exactly the right move to force their opponent out into the open, and Claire is both extremely stressed and also a little bit bored when after what must have been at least a few hours only five or so spells have been cast, and those were mostly aimed at objects and not people.
 
One surprising upside to everything is the number of Ministry workers who were caught in the crossfire who have opted to join up and help them fight rather than run and hide. Currently Claire is crouched behind an overturned desk with Clary Travers, or "Kitten" as she's known in the Underground, and a Law Enforcement employee who had introduced herself as Mafalda Hopkirk and offered to help them navigate the floor. She's been incredibly helpful since she knows which desks belong to Deatheaters or Deatheater sympathizers and which house Ministry workers who are on their side (or at the very least aren't going to fight either way).
 
"We should split cover." Clary says lowly (Claire tries to think of her as Kitten but she knows her better as Clary so she's given up on that endeavor). "You keep Hopkirk as your pair, I can find another Ministry worker, or worst case I'm the ideal person to leave solo anyway. The more points of attack we have the better our advantage will be."
 
"We don't have an advantage right now." Claire grumbles. "Someone should invent a spell that lets people see through walls, that way we'd know where everyone is."
 
"Someone probably will eventually." Clary says with a grin, "But for now I think splitting up is our best option."
 
It's only when Clary doesn't immediately move that Claire realizes she's waiting for approval. "Oh, uh, yeah, you're probably right." Claire says quickly, and Clary shoots her another grin before casting a Disillusionment charm and slinking across the room to the next cover. If Claire didn't know exactly where to look, she wouldn't have seen Clary at all.
 
Unfortunately, their opponent seems to have better eyesight than Claire does.
 
Clary does manage to avoid the stunning spell, but only because the person casting it apparently doesn't know what an inside voice is.
 
"Well we know where he is now at least." Hopkirk says, clearly angling for nonchalant but landing somewhere around strained panic instead.
 
Claire peers around the side of the desk to try and gauge where their opponent has gone, but there's nothing in sight except more desks and walls.
 
"I always liked working here." She grumbles. "But I'm officially getting sick of this layout."
 
Clary snorts, still close enough to be able to hear the comment, though she's slowly inching away again so she'll be out of earshot soon. "We'll add remodeling this floor to the list of to-dos." She snarks lightly before once again diving from cover and out of sight.
 
Claire huffs out a breath. "Well, just you and me then." She mumbles, and the older woman with her regards her curiously.
 
"You're a former Gryffindor, aren't you?" She asks with a faint smile. "You know, I might have an idea that would let you actually do some fighting, but it's pretty high risk for possibly very little reward."
 
Claire immediately turns towards her. "Well right now we're gathering zero reward so I'll take whatever you've got." She says eagerly.
 
Hopkirk nods. "Alright then. There's an old glass case near the back of the Department, right next to the Department Head's offices. It has a bunch of newspaper articles and such on major cases the Auror department has cracked. Hasn't been touched in years so it's about ready to fall apart. If we can shatter it-"
 
"The distraction should be enough for our forces to move in and catch them off guard." Claire finishes with a grin. "I love it. Let me just figure out who's closest to the case right now."
 
Hopkirk watches her curiously as Claire wracks her brain to figure out which pair were sent around to the back. There were two, she knows, but she doesn't want to send more than one messenger, even if she is going to be sending it in cloaked mode so it shouldn't give away anyone's position.
 
She has a brief moment where Saundra's face flashes in front of her - the covert mode for the Messengers had been developed using the Founder's notes rather early on in the expansion and is usually the version taught now rather than the original, more obvious ones.
 
She shakes her head - stay on task. She flicks her wand and summons her familiar silver lion.
 
"Message for Bat." She says, keeping her voice low. "There's an old glass case near your location. Find it and destroy it as loudly as possible, then get clear. Message end."
 
The lion nods once and then leaps into the air, vanishing as it does.
 
"Impressive." Hopkirk comments. "That wasn't a standard Patronus, was it? They can't disappear like that. And usually they need an actual name."
 
"It's how we communicate." Claire says shortly, not wanting to really go into any detail about the Underground, no matter how helpful Hopkirk is being. For all her friction with Python, she agrees with the other's instructions not to share information about the organization with anyone outside of it, even if they seem to be helping.
 
Hopkirk for her part is savvy enough not to try and push further, and Claire lets them sit in silence as they wait for Bat to receive the message and activate the distraction.
 
It takes long enough that Claire is pretty sure her joints are going numb from crouching, but the crash does eventually echo through the room, and even Claire jumps despite having expected it.
 
She's moving in an instant, diving out of cover with one wand out and the other in easy grabbing distance in case she's disarmed (she loves having two wands, why doesn't everyone do that?). Hopkirk is a little slower, but she does follow Claire's lead ultimately which is admittedly impressive. The two woman move to where the blast aimed at Clary earlier had come from, and after a moment their suspicions are proved correct as a stunning spell is flung their way.
 
Claire deflects it easily, sending it wide, and then shoots off a disarming charm that draws a yelp from their hidden opponent.
 
"You take it from here, I'm moving further in." She instructs Hopkirk, but she doesn't wait for a confirmation before heading further into the maze of desks and cubicles.
 
She doesn't remember this floor being quite this cluttered, though admittedly she rarely had to go further than the front few offices back when she worked with the Wizengamot Administrative Services. Still, she knows where the explosion had come from, and figures that if she moves in that direction she'll eventually reach the other side of the floor, and hopefully find a few other Underground members as she does.
 
A shout from behind her sends her spinning and running back to Hopkirk.
 
The woman is mostly fine, minus a sluggishly bleeding cut near her left shoulder, but she looks frazzled.
 
"He had a friend." She says tightly. "Nearly took my arm off but I managed to dodge it. Probably should tell the rest of your group that these guys are fighting in pairs."
 
Claire nods tightly. Sending off multiple Messengers will be time consuming, but it's necessary since she needs to inform Rat and Python's teams about this as well, and who knows how they've been split up.
 
She tries to remember everyone who'd come in with them, and sends out a series of messages hoping that she hasn't left anyone out.
 
"There are quite a few of you." Hopkirk observes, and Claire sighs. This woman is rather inquisitive, which would be fine if the things she was poking at weren't secrets.
 
"Sure." She mutters. "Just watch my back."
 
They begin moving further into the room again, and thankfully Hopkirk keeps shut and her wand up. They get into a couple skirmishes, but they're quickly concluded and Claire is starting to realize that they were probably at an hours long standstill with maybe eight opponents.
 
If she hadn't felt ridiculous already she definitely would now.
 
The fight is over in minutes, and the Underground comes out on top easily. To Claire's immense pride her entire team had taken advantage of the distraction Bat had provided (she got the best team, hands down) and they all finish subduing their opponent within minutes of each other.
 
"Alright, so that's this floor secure." Claire says briskly, pulling all attention back onto herself. "Bat, Fox, and Tarantula, are you good to watch this group and keep the floor secure?"
 
The three women nod, and Boar steps up as well (unsurprising, considering he's married to Tarantula).
 
"Alright then, I'm going to take the rest of you out into the halls and we're going to have to split up to clear the rest of the floors." Claire instructs. She divides them all into four teams of three, including the Ministry workers they'd picked up as she does. She puts Hopkirk with Clary - the younger woman is notorious for scaring people silent, hopefully she can work her magic on Hopkirk and her insistent curiosity about the Underground.
 
It's only when she's assigned each group to a floor that she realizes she hadn't given herself a team.
 
She sighs but sends everyone on their way - no reason to mess up a perfectly good plan just because her brain forgot to include itself in her headcount earlier.
 
"I can go patrol the halls on this floor with you." Tarantula offers, and after a moment's hesitation Claire tilts her head in agreement.
 
Tarantula gives Boar a quick kiss before they head out, and Claire politely looks the other way.
 
"So you two been married long?" She asks awkwardly after a few minutes have passed and the women haven't run into any trouble. She doesn't really know the Safe House operators well - sure she'd been keeping track of them but she never stayed at their homes for longer than absolutely necessary in order to minimize the chances she'd be seen. So she knows a few minuscule details but doesn't have much of a grip on who Tarantula actually is. She doesn't even know the other woman's name.
 
The other woman grins, flicking a blonde curl out of her face. "Going on six years." She says. "We started dating in Hogwarts and just never got sick of each other."
 
"Same House?" Claire guesses. Based on her own experience, most school-time romances that worked out happened between people from the same House.
 
"Hufflepuff." Tarantula confirms. "Started dating... gosh, sixth year I think? It was sort of gradual. We were really good friends for a long time, and then we just started dating. It was pretty seamless."
 
"Well color me jealous. I've never even been in a relationship." Claire says wryly. "I had a crush on an older boy in my House but that never went anywhere. He got married this year to someone way hotter anyway."
 
"Oh, Bill Weasley? Everyone had a crush on him." Tarantula laughs.
 
Claire gives a startled laugh as well and feels her face heating up. "Well I feel a bit less foolish if that is the case." She grins.
 
The blonde snorts. "Well, Leona didn't, I don't think, but that's because she was drooling after his younger brother in our year. Maybe we should correct it to everyone has a crush on one of the Weasleys." She decides.
 
Claire didn't really know Bill's brothers as well as she did him, but she can definitely see why "Leona" would have liked Charlie - the Seeker was certainly easy on the eyes. "Fair enough. I do think all the girls in my year were pretty firmly infatuated with Bill, though maybe it was an age thing."
 
"You're a year older than me, grandma." Tarantula teases. "Age had nothing to-"
 
She's cut off when a curse flies out of nowhere and sends them both diving to find the nearest cover.
 
"Surrender and I'll consider letting you live." A voice demands. It's female and a bit squeaky, a tone that Claire immediately recognizes as fear.
 
She grins over at Tarantula, who looks a bit concerned but gives a sharp nod - ready when you are.
 
Claire slips her Underground wand into her left hand before jumping back out into the open and throwing up a shield. As expected a spell bounces off of it, and as Claire lets it fall she lifts her left hand and returns fire with a stunner.
 
The opponent's defeat is heralded by a crash as she's knocked down from where she'd been crouched in the shadows on top of one of the chairs people would sit in when they were waiting on a meeting with someone in the offices.
 
"They work in pairs." Tarantula reminds her, and Claire quickly has her shield back up, just in time to absorb an attempted disarming charm. She spins to face her new opponent - and immediately freezes.
 
"Tarantula." She says lowly, "Finish the patrol and go back to the others. I'll handle this."

Her partner frowns and glances at the man that Claire is locked in a staring contest with, looking torn.
 
"Go." Claire repeats sharply, and the blonde finally nods and sinks into the shadows, continuing down the hall and away from where Claire is still rooted to the spot behind her magic shield.
 
The man standing across from her lets Tarantula leave, though Claire isn't sure if it's kindness or shock that stays his hand.

After all, her brother had no idea what she was doing, so seeing her here is as startling for him as running into him is for her.
 
Max breaks the silence between them first. "Claire? What are you..." He trails off, eyes finally drifting to where Tarantula had been moments before. "You... who was that? What are you doing?"
 
"The right thing." She says, and pretends isn't trying to squeeze itself shut, that her eyes aren't burning. She knew this could happen, knew she might end up on the other side of a family member's wand. It still hurts now that it's actually happening, though. "I'm doing the right thing Max. Don't make me go through you to do it."
 
He looks lost, his wand still raised but the grip a bit slack. "I don't understand. You're... you're with them? The people who hurt dad? Who steal magic?"
 
Claire bristles, and her own grip tightens. "You know that isn't true Max, you have to." She says sharply (not desperate, she manages to keep that out of her tone, thankfully). "Didn't you tell me that Houses don't matter? Why is parentage any different?"
 
"Because it is Claire, how are you even comparing those two things?" Max asks, but his wand grip has tightened as well. "Where a Hat arbitrarily decides to send you and your biology are entirely different!"
 
"Well.... well witches and wizards had to come from somewhere, didn't they?" She says after a moment. "And since it's well known that Muggles came first, we must have evolved from them to start with. Which would me every one of us came from Muggles at some point! Muggleborns are just modern evolutions is all."
 
Max is making a face, but Claire is pretty sure she just convinced herself. Of course, imprisoning people with no proof never sat well with her, but right now she's more certain than ever that there's no way the accusations could be even the slightest bit true.
 
"They really brainwashed you in that House, didn't they?" He says after a moment, and Claire glares.
 
"And now you're backtracking on the House comment, very mature." She says flatly. "Clearly you changing your opinions in order to maintain your worldview instead of considering new information means I'm the one that's brainwashed."
 
"That isn't..." Max trails off, struggling to find his words, and Claire drops the Protego shield that she had continued to hold until this point. Max sighs. "That isn't fair Claire."
 
"Neither is putting innocent people in prison to rot and starve. Neither is forcing children to go on the run in the woods for months on end just so they don't end up rotting in those prison cells." Claire clenches her jaw. "Do you know the people I've seen while helping on this side? Because I promise you, your lot don't come out looking like the good guys when a fourteen year old has a massive, infected gash up his leg that one of your Unit put there."
 
Max grimaces. "We didn't... we were under orders not to hurt anyone unless they fought back." He protests, but it's weak.
 
"Sure, maybe under the younger Yaxley. I met Zara Wong a few times you know, and I somehow doubt she cares about kids' lives." Claire shoots back, and Max flinches, a clear confirmation of the accusation. "And besides, even if that was the case there were obviously people ignoring those orders. And you're working beside them, letting them do it."
 
Max looks slightly off balance now, but his wand holds steady in the air and Claire's does too. She feels sick at the sight, even though her mind knows she's in the right. Her heart just hasn't quite caught up to that yet.
 
"And you work beside the people who put dad in a coma." He finally counters, after several long seconds of silence have stretched out between them. "Tell me Claire, since you're so high and mighty, how much did they enjoy that? Did they celebrate it?"
 
It's her turn to wince, recalling all those months ago when she'd congratulated Panther on his successful, if unexpected, attack on a group of Deatheaters, not realizing one had been her own father.
 
"Panther fought to defend himself, but you're right." She says after a moment. "I was happy at first, until I learned who it was. But I stopped being happy about dead and injured Snatchers after that. Did you ever feel guilty about the dead and injured innocents you spent your time hunting down?"
 
Max glares. "Oh well I'm glad you feel bad." He growls sarcastically. "I guess that makes up for everything then."
 
"The system is broken Max!" Claire exclaims, and suddenly she feels like she's going to cry again. Whether it's from exhaustion, fury, or heartbreak she isn't quite sure. "The system is broken and at least on my side I do feel the moral weight of my choices. I stop and think and wish we didn't live in a world where people like He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named run around and make us choose which lives are more important. But that is the world we live in. And at least the people I'm fighting against have a fair chance at fighting back."
 
Max doesn't say anything, but Claire is all at once feeling rather dizzy. She lowers her wand and takes a few steps back to lean against the wall. They stay there silently for a long time before Claire decides to speak again.
 
"And you were right, about the Houses. Before, I mean. The girl who started my group was a Hufflepuff, but the one who kept it going was a Slytherin. You actually made me a little more lenient towards her, when you said that stuff about the Houses. I was judging her for the colors she wore, not the person she was. And don't get me wrong, we still aren't friends, but we work well together, better than we used to. That's thanks to you." She smiles faintly. "Isn't that ironic? The comments of a Snatcher improved the leadership of the group opposing him."
 
"You've been doing this for a while." Max says softly into the ensuing quiet. "You talk like you're a leader."
 
Claire tilts her head in acknowledgement. "After the Founder died I became one. I've been with the group since September." She watches the rush of emotions that cross his face at that admission. She wonders if he'll throw up like she did when he'd joined the Snatchers.
 
He doesn't, but his wand lowers as well. "...The whole time, then?" He asks after a moment. "Were you ever really working on special projects or was it all just a cover?"
 
"I'd say it was pretty special, what I was doing." Claire offers with a wry smirk that Max doesn't return.
 
"How did you even manage to get that excuse? The Minister himself made the call." Her brother asks instead.
 
The information does startle Claire slightly, but she shrugs it off. "I only know what's pertinent to my role." She says, and she's not even lying. Still, she might talk to Python about that when all this is over - it seems like a bigger risk than they'd normally take, associating the Minister with the Underground, even tangentially.
 
Max lets out a low, hissing breath. "You realize I'd have to report all this, right? You're connected to that safehouse raid from March, aren't you? They've been quietly following up on that you know."
 
"Obviously not well." She smirks. Python always said that she got a lot more leeway and trust from the Deatheaters due to her House, and Claire is pretty sure that that's been a major factor in keeping the investigations pointing in the wrong directions.
 
That and the fact that Clary and Finn have definitely been tampering with any and all evidence that could suggest the suspected leak was linked to Saundra and her efforts from the year before.
 
Max sighs. "You've been with them from the start Claire. I'm pretty sure any information you have will be pretty damaging."
 
Claire tenses at that, wand lifting into the air slowly, cautiously. Is Max going to turn on her? Turn her in? Some part of her had hoped... no, some part of her had firmly believed he wouldn't. Despite everything she didn't think Max would actually turn on her, and it had loosened her tongue in ways that the group might have to pay for now.
 
But Max's wand stays lowered, his eyes locked on the floor between Claire's feet.
 
"I wouldn't tell them anything." She says after another long, tense moment of silence. "They could try, but I'd die before giving anything or anyone up."
 
It's a genuine conviction, but she recalls a comment Audrey had made once, early on in their acquaintanceship.
 
"I'd like to think I could do what she did, but honestly I don't know. You can't really know until you've actually been in a situation to know how you'd react to it."
 
Still, Claire is pretty sure she'd hold up. She's a Gryffindor, after all. And besides, she doesn't think she could live knowing she'd caved.
 
Of course, she isn't sure how comfortable living is going to be knowing her own brother is honestly considering turning her over to be tortured. Her mind trips over the word a few times and she feels bile rising up . She swallows hard.
 
Max lets out a shaky breath. His wand is still slack in his hand. "Just go." He finally grits out. "Go and don't get caught, for Merlin's sake."
 
Claire blinks, stares, and then gives a slightly strangled laugh.
 
"You too." She says after a moment. "Just..." She doesn't know what she was going to say, so she doesn't say anything, just stares at her brother for a few moments longer before her wand lowers and she takes a few steps back, towards the direction Tarantula had vanished.
 
Max's wand shifts in his hand, and he takes a few steps back as well. Claire starts to turn, starts to walk away but-
 
"Isn't this cute?" A high, playful voice echoes through the halls and something in Claire's gut drops like lead.
 
Everyone in the Ministry knows that voice. And if she's here, then it doesn't matter if Max is willing to look the other way - Claire is probably going to be dead or caught soon enough anyway.
 
Yurina Nakayashi seems to appear from nowhere, teeth bared in a feral grin and wand twirling cheerfully between her finger tips. She's directly between the two of them, but her focus is entirely on Claire. "I only heard the ending there, but it's not so hard to see what's happening here. Are you going soft Rosier? And to think, your sister here had such high praise for you when you first applied to the Unit."
 
Max glances at her but Claire keeps her focus on Yurina. The moment she looks away is the moment she loses.
 
"Are you really going to choose a traitor over justice?" Yurina continues, speaking to Max even as she continues her staring contest with Claire. "She gave you a glowing recommendation for the Unit, even knowing she was sending you out to fight against people she herself was coordinating?"
 
Claire thinks Yurina was probably lying about how much she'd overheard. Her stomach twists when she realizes that she probably just gave away the Underground to the one person they most desperately needed to keep it secret from.
 
Claire isn't looking at Max at all now, not even in her periphery. She doesn't want to know what his reaction will be, because Yurina isn't even lying right now. Claire had given Max a good recommendation to join the exact group she was fighting against. She hadn't felt good about it but what else could she have done?
 
"Here, since you're so conflicted let me handle this one." Yurina offers magnanimously, and Claire's wand is up in her hand, the other slipped up her sleeve for easy access if needed (and it will be, she knows that with a dull certainty). "I'll even let her fire first, just so you don't have to feel bad about all this."
 
Claire doesn't fire first, won't give Yurina that satisfaction. And besides, the Japanese woman is still standing in front of Max, who seems to be frozen to the spot. All she has to do is step aside and anything Claire throws at her will hit her brother instead.
 
Yurina definitely knows that, is playing this game like a chess master, and here Claire is entirely out of her depth with no idea what's going to come next.
 
"No? What, are you scared?" Yurina mocks, voice lilting, clearly reveling in her own control of the situation. "That's fair. Tell you what Rosier, I won't have to tell the Dark Lord about this little stumble of yours if you knock her out and then walk away. What do you say?"
 
She finally steps out from between the siblings, leaning against the side of the corridor casually, but Claire can see the taut lines of her form - she's ready to fight at the slightest provocation.
 
Claire still keeps her eyes on Yurina, but her wand is up and ready to deflect anything Max sends her way.
 
She finally looks at his expression from the corner of her eye though, and something heavy settles in her gut when she sees the look of grim determination that's settled over his features as he raises his wand towards her.
 
She tenses, a Protego ready at the tip of her tongue, and Max strikes.
 
But not at her.
 
Yurina looks disappointed but unsurprised when she flicks Max's stunner away from her. She sighs heavily and pushes up from the wall.
 
"Very well." She hums. "You can die and I'll still get your sister so it's no real problem for me." With that she fires off several slicing spells that Max barely has time to deflect.
 
"Claire get out of here!" He shouts, but she ignores him. He just fired on Yurina Nakayashi, she's not leaving him to that fate.
 
The two of them together manage to push her back slightly, but despite that Yurina remains frustratingly (and concerningly) calm, a light smirk decorating her features as she lazily deflects everything they throw at her.
 
Claire was nervous before, but honestly she hadn't fully realized exactly how powerful Yurina is. Seeing it firsthand now is terrifying.
 
She shouldn't have split up her team.
 
"Claire, go." Max hisses again, but she shakes her head.
 
"Family looks out for each other." She snaps back. "This is the least I can do."
 
"Adorable." Yurina yawns, and then her wand flies through so many spells at once that Claire is forced to put up a full shield to avoid being hit.
 
Max isn't fast enough.
 
He's flung backwards into the wall, but Yurina doesn't bother even checking if he's down before putting the full force of her wrath onto Claire.
 
She doesn't want to, but Claire knows when she's beat (even if Python would be surprised to hear that).
 
She throws up a smokescreen and retreats, blinking back tears.
 
I'll come back for you Max. She promises. So just hang in there. I won't lose you to this stupid war, not when I just got you back.
 
But she knows it doesn't matter how hard Max fights to survive his injury - if Yurina decides to follow up and finish him off there's nothing either of them can do to stop her.
 
Claire keeps running, and she hates that it feels like losing.
 
Author's Note: :( I mean, we all knew it was coming but :( ALSO I'm putting the warning here that next chapter is pretty gory? If that's something you want to avoid I'll be putting a chapter overview at the end of it so you can see what happens without having to read the gross bits!
 
Next Time: What matters is making sure everyone else is alright
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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2454 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2454 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2454 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
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Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
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Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P