Chapter Fourty-Seven

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
May 2, 1998
"They're your family after all"
 
 Aiden doesn't go to the Hog's Head right away after getting both Goat and Python's messages. No, he has a job to complete first before he can go fight - he needs to funnel everyone through the Floo system to where they want to go.
 
He sends the message to Aberforth, telling him to keep the passage to Hogwarts open until everyone is through, and then he Apparates to the Dearborn manor to get to work.
 
Scorcha is arguing with Menna in the foyer when he arrives, though they're far from the only two people present. Despite his initial reluctance, Gareth has ended up turning the manor into a full-time, safehouse which currently houses about half a dozen refugee Muggleborns, many of whom Aiden spots lingering by the stairs or in doorways off the foyer.
 
Gareth himself appears only moments later in a rush of robes. "You're not going to fight and that's final Menna." He says firmly. "Your mother is right, you're too young and too out of practice."
 
Scorcha looks over at Gareth thankfully, and spots Aiden as she does. "Oh! Aiden, you're here." She smiles and he gives her a quick nod in return.
 
"You all got the message I assume, and I'm here to help anyone who wants to fight get to where they want to go, whether that's the Ministry or the school. I exchanged a few messengers with Goat and he's holding open a passage to Hogwarts until the last fighters are through." He says briskly. "Anyone underage will stay here at the manor with Scorcha, and obviously no one is obligated to fight. No one will think any less of you if you stay here and hold down the fort."
 
Scorcha immediatley shifts into professional mode, something Aiden has become quite familiar with in the past months and he's pleased to see it now. They'll be able to get this done quickly and efficiently.
 
"Alright, Menna you gather everyone currently here in the house, Aiden you'll stay by the Floo to direct anyone through as they arrive and send them to their preferred destination. Gareth, you send a message out to the other safehouses to send all their fugitives here before deciding anything. We have plenty of room for them don't give me that look."
 
Aiden laughs slightly - Scorcha hadn't even needed to look at Gareth to know he wasn't too pleased with his assigned role, but despite the grumbling Gareth does pull out his wand and begins doing as instructed.
 
It all goes more smoothly than Aiden could have hoped, but it's still been a good half hour since he'd Apparated in when the last of the fighters has been sent off to their requested location. Most people had wanted to go to the school, of course, but there had been several as well who headed to help at the Ministry. Finally, all that's left is him and Gareth, Scorcha having herded all the people who had chosen to stay behind up the stairs to find them rooms for the night.
 
"You're not coming through." Aiden says, not really asking.
 
Gareth shakes his head. "My brother died for the last war, and here we are seventeen years later and what's changed? I'm not giving my life for this when it can be better used elsewhere." He eyes Aiden critically. "I always figured Tanner was the touchy-feely risk-taking type between the two of you." He adds after a moment. "You've changed a lot since school."
 
"So have you. It has been over twenty years you know." Aiden points out with a wry grin. "And besides, I need to be with my family. And I think," He adds with a more knowing look, "You need to be with yours."
 
Gareth flushes and huffs out a breath, but he doesn't deny it. "Don't die out there Case, you're the only one who can get rid of this invasive system you've set up once all this is over." He says instead, and Aiden grins.
 
"I'll try not to. See you around." And with that he finally steps through the fireplace and stumbles out into the Hog's Head Tavern.
 
He ends up walking right into an argument between Aberforth and a slightly plump, older witch. A third, younger wizard is watching them with clear amusement.
 
"We must seal the passageway!" The woman insists. "We don't want any Deatheaters getting down it!"
 
"Well obviously you crazy old coot but-" Aberforth cuts off when he sees Aiden step out of the fireplace. "Well good, there you are. Everyone through then?"
 
"We're all clear." Aiden comfirms. "You can close the passage now Ab." He carefully avoids using Aberforth's code name - this woman is obviously not Underground and depending on how this fight goes they may still need the group working with some semblance of secrecy afterwards. And he doesn't know what to think of the smirking Asian man who's now watching him with a sharp, curious gaze.
 
The woman eyes him suspiciously. "And you are?" She asks.
 
"Aiden Case, Floo Network Engineer. I was helping get people here who wanted to help, but everyone is through now." He explains, being honest without actually revealing anything.
 
"There now, don't you feel like a right fool Augusta?" Aberforth sneers, and Aiden leaves them to bicker (and the other man to snicker) some more as he makes his way through the open portrait hole he spots behind the bar. It's not hard to figure out that this is the way into the school.
 
A young red-haired girl is pouting in one of the chairs as Aiden steps through, and she eyes him cautiously, immediately jumping up and pulling out her wand.
 
"Give me one reason not to hex you." She threatens.
 
Aiden puts up his hands despite instinct telling him to pull out one of the two wands he currently has on his person. The hair clearly gives away that this must be one of the Weasleys, which means they're on the same side, which means he doesn't want to antagonize her.
 
"I'm on your side." He says. "Aberforth told me about the fight and I wanted to come help."
 
She doesn't look completely convinced, but some of the initial hostility does ease. "Aberforth is telling a lot of people about the fight." She says, and Aiden gets the sense that the phrase has some deeper meaning he's not privy to, so he doesn't reply.
 
After a long moment they hear squabbling coming up the passage behind Aiden, and Aberforth and the woman - Augusta, Aiden recalls Ab calling her - clamber out into the room.
 
"And now you can seal it you old windbag, since you don't seem to trust that Ryuu can do it just fine from his end." Aberforth grumbles. "Really, think I don't know what I'm doing I knew perfectly well what I'm doing." He stomps past Aiden who attempts a wave but isn't surprised when it's ignored.
 
"Calling me an old windbag, he was old when I was in school." Augusta grumbles, turning to Aiden. "You sure no more of your folk, whoever you are, are going to be needing the tunnel?" She checks. "Wouldn't want to wall out reinforcements."
 
Aiden sees the girl finally putting her wand away at Augusta's words, and he relaxes slightly. "All good, I made sure I came through last." He confirms. "There might be some underaged kids who try to sneak in actually, so it's probably best to seal this up and keep them safe."
 
The girl makes a noise of derision but both adults ignore her, and Aiden heads out into the castle, which is already buzzing with people rushing about making preparations.
 
Aiden scans for anyone he recognizes, hoping they'll be able to tell him where Logan is. He spots a few school robes, but they're all Gryffindors and Ravenclaws, no one he knows well enough to walk up to.
 
Luckily (unluckily? He has to talk to a stranger now) one of the people rushing by ends up approaching him first.
 
"You're here to help, right?" The woman asks, then continues speaking without actually waiting for an answer. "Great, the barrier just fell, they're going to need help on the grounds, let's move."
 
"I'm actually looking for my... my ward." He says awkwardly as he stumbles after her down the hallway. "Do you know where the Hufflepuff students are?"
 
"Nope, everyone divided up after the evacuation." She replies, not missing a beat, "The kids are scattered around."
 
That's the last she speaks, dragging him along behind her like he's tethered to an invisible string despite him not actually having to follow her. He just isn't quite sure what else to do at this point.
 
Then they run into their first band of Deatheaters and Aiden doesn't have time to think about anything that isn't defending against the onslaught of spells and curses thrown their way.
 
He loses sight of the woman who'd brought him along, and he does worry slightly about her safety, but then reinforcements show up and the battle becomes a lot more manageable.
 
He's out of practice with his wand work though, more accustomed to paperwork and detail adjustments these days than full-on duels, so he finds himself being saved at multiple points by the witches and wizards around him, and after what's probably only a few minutes but feels like a lifetime he's feeling pretty useless and embarrassed.
 
He does get a few spells off, even makes contact with one of them, but he still finds himself sticking close to the other fighters (who he assumes must be the Order of the Phoenix - one of the Healers, Setter, had mentioned them once when she and Aiden had crossed paths at the Dearborn Manor and this seems like the sort of fight they'd be present for) and hiding behind shield charms far more often than his ego appreciates.
 
But from his sheltered position he notices something - there's a crack running up the wall just where the majority of the attacking force is entering from. Maybe the key isn't to take them out one by one - maybe they can do it in one fell swoop.
 
Gripping his wand, he drops his shield and points - not at the attackers, but at the crack - and fires a blasting curse.
 
He barely flings up his shield in time to avoid the massive explosion that follows, but it's well worth it - the majority of their aggressors are buried under the rubble.
 
"Brilliant job!" Someone congratulates him. "Though now we're going to have a tough time getting in."
 
Aiden glances over to find a Gryffindor student studying the collapsed wall with a frown.
 
"Did you need to get in?" He asks politely, unsure of what else to really say in response to that.
 
The boy - man? It's hard to tell since he's short and very badly bruised so his facial features are difficult to make out, but if he's here fighting he must be over seventeen - tilts his head. "I need to get everyone who can cast a corporeal patronus out onto the grounds. There are dementors coming."
 
Aiden tenses. "Dementors?"
 
"Mm." The boy (he's going with boy, the robes mean he's still in school) either doesn't register the slight panic that slips into Aiden's tone or he's so used to it that it doesn't phase him. Aiden vainly hopes it's the former. "You don't happen to be able to cast a corporeal patronus, do you?" He asks after a moment.
 
Aiden grimaces. Not anymore. "No, sorry. I might be able to make another door though, if that would help. Although I'm actually looking for a student as well - would it be alright if I went with you once we get through this?" He gestures at the mess in front of them, and the boy grins.
 
"Sounds like a plan mate. I'll just get out of your way then." The boy agrees cheerfully, stepping aside as Aiden raises his wand again.
 
A moment later he's carefully pulled a section of the wall away, and he tosses it down a different hallway where it appears there are no combatants. It's now that he notices the rest of the people he'd been fighting with have scattered, probably looking for other Deatheaters to take down.
 
The boy whistles. "Color me impressed."
 
"Well, I'm not much good in a fight." Aiden admits sheepishly, and the boy laughs.
 
"That's alright, I've got us covered there. Who did you say you were looking for?" He asks as they peer through the new hole to check for any Deatheaters before hurrying through and heading towards the sound of fighting.
 
"I hadn't. I'm looking for my ward, Logan Griffith. Do you know him?"
 
The boy grins. "Yeah! You must be Aiden then. I'm Seamus Finnigan, we're in the same year. Logan was a huge help with the DA this year, you should be proud of him."
 
Aiden smiles in return. "I am." He says simply.
 
Seamus continues to lead the way, wand up and eyes darting around for any aggressors even as he continues talking. "I'm pretty sure he went with Ernie and the other Hufflepuffs to help around the grounds so this team up is good for both of us - I'm looking for Ernie myself. He's kind of a know-it-all but he means well, and he's really consistent with casting corporeal patronuses."
 
Seamus, Aiden is learning quickly, either really likes hearing the sound of his own voice or is the type of person who chatters endlessly to distract from his own nerves. If he were a betting man Aiden would say it's likely the latter, but whatever the reason, Seamus doesn't stop rambling until they find themselves in another firefight with a pair of Deatheaters
 
As before, Aiden isn't much help, and despite his confidence earlier Seamus is beginning to struggle as well when two figures swoop in to back them up.
 
"Thanks mates! You got this?" Seamus asks, and Aiden thinks it's probably a bit rude to cut and run but the two red heads seem to have the situation under control and he and Seamus really do need to keep moving.
 
"We're fine Finnigan, go." The taller one instructs, not turning from his opponent as he forces the shorter figure back a few steps.
 
"These guys won't know what hit them!" The other one agrees, far too brightly considering the situation in Aiden's opinion, but everyone has their own coping mechanisms.
 
"Got it, good luck!" Seamus gives a cocky little salute before turning back to Aiden. "Let's go!"
 
They're halfway down another hallway when they hear the explosion behind them.
 
Both jump, and Aiden looks back worriedly. "When I blasted that crack it probably weakened some of the structural integrity of the building." He groans. He hadn't thought that far, but it makes sense.
 
Seamus responds before he can get too far into beating himself up over it. "You saved a bunch of people with that stunt, and walls can be fixed. Come on, we need to find people who can cast Patronuses."
 
Aiden frowns as they resume their brisk pace down the corridor. "Why didn't you ask those two earlier?"
 
"Who, Fred and Percy? They're great guys but I don't think any of the Weasleys managed to cast Patronuses during DA meetings except for Ginny, and even she had some trouble with it. Besides, they kind of had their hands full." Seamus says idly. "Good to see Percy though, he was a great prefect, I never understood why there was that weird gap between him and the rest of the family."
 
Aiden just nods along, not really following the conversation at all but having already accepted that this was the price of following Seamus around the school.
 
"HEY!" Seamus suddenly shouts, and Aiden nearly drops his wand from the abrupt noise. "Susan!"
 
Aiden immediately follows Seamus's eye line, and sure enough there's a dirty, battered Susan Bones standing at the end of it. She looks over at them and raises an eyebrow, though despite the attempted show of nonchalance she's clearly exhausted both physically and mentally.
 
"Where's Ernie?" Seamus asks, and Aiden has a moment to think it's rather rude not to ask how Susan is doing until he remembers that this is a battle and there are literal dead (unconscious? Hopefully unconscious) bodies on the floor so just being alive is confirmation that she's good enough.
 
"Other side of the castle I thought? I was with Lav, Padma, and Terry though, so I'm not really sure where anyone else ended up during the task divisions."
 
"Where are they then?" Seamus asks with a frown. "I need people who can cast corporeal patronuses out on the grounds, we've got dementors sighted."
 
"Ew, lovely, because that's what we needed." Susan groans. "I'll keep an eye out and send anyone I find that way. Hi Mr. Case." She adds with a slight grin. "I do know Logan was going with Ernie, so probably stick with this guy if you're looking for him."
 
"Stay safe Susan." Aiden replies, and she gives a half-salute before running off to rejoin the fighting.
 
"Onwards then I suppose." Seamus sighs. "I really thought I'd get to set a few more Deatheaters on fire, but what can you do."
 
Aiden half tunes Seamus's ramblings out as they weave through the castle, mostly dodging battles but occasionally getting caught up in them. Aiden still feels like a burden for the most part since he still can't hold his own in one-on-one duels, but Seamus is so enthusiastic every time he does something like take out a wall or deflect a spell off one Deatheater's shield to hit another in the back or side that he's starting to feel like he might still be contributing positively to the effort.
 
It feels like another small eternity, but they do actually manage to successfully locate Ernie, and despite the number of other groups that have been split up by the chaos filling the castle he's still with Logan and a handful of other students.

"Finally." Seamus says, cutting himself off mid-rant as he does. "Ernie! Hey, over here! Ooh, Micheal's here too, wonder if he's figured out a new memory that works." He waves the group down and gives his usual dementor announcement, but Aiden honestly misses it - he can't look away from Logan.
 
His ward has a gash along the outside of his left arm that's sluggishly staining the sleeve of his uniform dress shirt red, though the progress is slow enough to show that it's not a fresh injury, but possibly something reopened by the intensity of the fighting. He's got a bruise on his right cheek that's just starting to fade from red to black and the bags under his eyes give him a hollow, haunted look. But despite all of that there's a sharp shine of determination in his eyes, and Aiden's breath catches.
 
He takes a lot after Evelyn, in the end, even if he looks more like me. Tanner muses, and Aiden has to agree.
 
It takes a moment for Logan to notice him in return, too caught up in the conversation with Seamus and Ernie, but when he finally looks over his eyes widen and he breaks out into a massive smile.
 
"Aiden! You're here!" He exclaims, hurrying away from the group to approach Aiden. "How did you hear about this?"
 
"I'm working with a group that had someone on the inside." He says simply, and the pride in Logan's answering smile makes any frustrations he might have had with the Underground instantly worth it.
 
"Hey Logan! You're on point, we're heading out to the grounds!" Ernie calls over to them, and Logan flashes a thumbs up.
 
"Oh, and if you see Padma send her out that way too!" Seamus adds. "See ya later Mr. Case." He waves and then he and Ernie are off.
 
"That boy does not stop moving." Aiden observes. "So what are we doing?"
 
"We're heading towards the classrooms to collect stuff that might be helpful." Logan reports. "Trelawney was flinging crystal balls down on everyone earlier which was surprisingly effective. Plus there are acromantulas inside now which is not great. And the giant is a whole other thing." He makes a face. "I'm personally hoping that Professor Lupin left his Boggart somewhere - we could set it on the Deatheaters and drive them off easily with that, no way they know how to handle being scared of anything."
 
"At least not if they can't just kill it." One of the other boys says a bit too gleefully. He has on a Ravenclaw tie, which has somehow remained intact despite the rest of his clothing being torn and dirty, and is sporting several bruises that are too settled to be newer than a day old but are too prominent to be older than a week.
 
Logan turns to him. "Oh shush Michael, enough death humor, you didn't die." He scolds. "Anyway now that Aiden is here we're going to be fine - he's the best wizard I've ever known."
 
Aiden is probably blushing - hopefully he can live up to Logan's praise. The rest of the group looks rather amused.
 
"So you're the famous Aiden." Michael grins. "Logan talks about you a lot you know. I wish my dad was half as cool as you apparently are."
 
Now Aiden is definitely feeling a bit warm, and he looks over at Logan to find his ward is turning red as well.
 
"That's enough of that - useful objects, let's go!" Logan declares, spinning and marching down the hall purposefully, ignoring the giggling from the rest of the group.
 
Aiden awkwardly keeps to the back of the group, watching in quiet awe as Logan takes charge and directs the others towards different rooms - always in pairs and with instructions to "watch each others' backs."
 
One girl laughs at the instruction. "We've made it this far, I don't intend to let anyone get the drop on me now."
 
Logan just sighs and looks over at her partner, who nods and hurries after her.
 
"Katie's one of the only sixth years old enough to participate." He explains as he and Aiden keep walking. It's only them and Michael now, everyone else successfully scattered. "But she's a bit-"
 
"Of a Gryffindor." Michael supplies cheerfully. "Smart not pairing any of the lions together Lo, that probably would have turned into a total disaster."
 
Aiden doesn't comment, but based on his recollection of the Gryffindor House during his time at Hogwarts he's inclined to agree with Michael.
 
"Okay so there's just the old Defense room left to check." Logan says. "I know Gabe, Romilda, and your brother torched it-"
 
"Damn right they did." Michael says proudly.
 
"-But there were some sections blocked off by stone walls. Some things from past professors might have been left behind and survived." Logan continues smoothly, ignoring Michael's interruption easily.
 
"Dare I ask what happened?" Aiden decides to say, and Michael instantly lights up and explains how earlier in the year a trio of fifth years - including his younger brother Nathan - had burned the entire Defense Against the Dark Arts so completely that the room had been unrecoverable and they'd had a full week off from Dark Arts classes while Amycus relocated.
 
"Seamus got the blame for that one, but he didn't even mind, kept bragging about it to anyone who would listen." Michael laughs.
 
"Yeah well, I'm pretty sure he's sweet on your brother - if Nate hadn't been part of that escapade he probably wouldn't have been quite so lenient with Gabe and Romilda." Logan comments, and Michael immediately chokes.
 
Aiden stands back, feeling a bit out of the loop as the two boys argue over whether or not Seamus has a crush on Nathan or someone named "Dean", and the name "Lavender" is thrown around as well. He has no idea who any of these people are and yet he finds himself quite proud of Logan. Despite everything it seems his ward has made new friends this year, and even made some positive memories among the many, many uglier ones.
 
"Assuming it hasn't changed places since I went here, but I think you just walked past the Defense room." He finally speaks up with no small amount of amusement, and the two boys both flush and hurry back to where he's standing by the door.
 
"Right, sorry. Thanks Aiden." Logan grins sheepishly.
 
However they've barely managed to crack the door (after taking down the many protective spells erected around it) when a chilling voice fills the air.
 
"You have fought." It says, "Valiantly. Lord Voldemort knows how to value bravery."
 
Logan rolls his eyes and Michael snorts at that. Aiden fears for what the two have been through that the voice from nowhere doesn't seem to phase them.
 
"Yet you have sustained heavy loses." The voice continues. "If you continue to resist me, you will all die, one by one."
 
Aiden hisses as the image of Tanner and Evelyn's bodies springs to the forefront of his mind.
 
"I do not wish this to happen. Every drop of magical blood spilled is a loss and a waste."
 
"Ew." Michael grumbles. "Heard that sentiment plenty enough from the Carrows."
 
"Lord Voldemort is merciful." Both boys snort derisively at that, "I command my forces to retreat, immediately. You have one hour. Dispose of your dead with dignity. Treat your injured.
 
"I speak now, Harry Potter, directly to you."
 
"And there's the angle." Logan mutters. Aiden agrees whole-heartedly. This entire show of 'mercy' is all purely focused on Potter, like it always is.
 
Aiden wonders how worried the boy's guardians must be about him and feels a pang of empathy.
 
Voldemort is still talking, but Michael and Logan are already heading back towards where they'd split off from the rest of the group, and Aiden hurries after them.
 
"We should regroup in the Great Hall." He suggests. "That seems the most likely place to go, since there's quite a bit of space for the fighters."
 
And the bodies isn't said, but Aiden has no doubt that the sentiment is echoing just as loudly in the boys' heads as it is in his.
 
At least Voldemort has stopped talking - his voice was an unwelcome soundtrack to Aiden's own internal panic.
 
"We've only got an hour." Michael mumbles. "If we... see any fallen we should bring them with."
 
They don't find any bodies - thank Merlin - but Michael volunteers to go look for them with a few other students when the trio reaches the Great Hall to find that, as Aiden has suspected, it's where everyone is choosing to recover.
 
"Do you need any medical assistance?" A frazzled witch asks, and looks relieved when both Aiden and Logan shake their heads. "Oh good, you can either help with collecting the deceased or stay to the side and rest if you need to. No shame in either, but please do stay out of the way of the healers."
 
The woman rushes off to intercept a few other people as they come in, and Aiden urges Logan to the side of the Great Hall to take a seat on one of the benches that's been moved aside to make room for the ever increasing number of bodies being laid out.
 
Aiden spots a familiar red head carrying the body of another, and something inside him cracks. He just hopes the killer wasn't the Deatheaters he and Seamus had left the two to fight in their stead.
 
"You sure you're alright?" He asks Logan instead of letting his mind linger on what could easily turn into a very dark spiral.
 
Logan nods. "I... yeah. I'm okay. We should help-" He tries to get up, but Aiden pulls him back down into a tight hug, and after a startled moment Logan returns it just as fiercely.
 
December was only four months ago, but it feels like it's been so much longer since the last time he held his ward like this, maybe even longer than four months - did he hug Logan at Christmas? He can't remember, so he tightens his grip in the present in case he needs to make up for that as well.
 
"I'm sorry I couldn't do more." He says softly, and Logan shakes his head against Aiden's chest.
 
"You don't need to. Just be my dad for a bit?" He requests softly, and Aiden can hear Tanner's smile.
 
He thinks maybe he feels his friend fade just a little bit, but he doesn't think about it as he holds his son closer.
 
They eventually pull apart, and Logan insists on helping move the dead.
 
Aiden doesn't protest. "I want to stay together though." He says instead, and Logan looks insulted that he thought they'd do otherwise.
 
They end up on the grounds, which are a horrible sight, coated in blood and body parts.
 
"Giant rampage." One of the other body movers says tiredly. "We're lucky to find anyone in tact out here." He glances at Logan and winces. "Uh, maybe you two should help inside. There's, um-" He looks over his shoulder helplessly. "...Maybe help inside." He finally mutters before hurrying on his way. Only as he passes them does Aiden realize he's carrying a pair of legs unconnected to a torso.
 
He doesn't throw up, but he'll probably need to later when he gives himself time to properly process all this.
 
Logan has already headed directly to where the awkward man had been looking when suggesting they leave, and when Aiden catches up his ward has already found what the man clearly didn't want them to.
 
"Oh gods... Ernie." Logan says softly, reverent and broken at once. "You proud idiot, what did you do?" He kneels down next to the crushed form of Ernie Macmillan. He'd clearly been trampled by the giants, and Aiden has a moment to think that at least it would have been a relatively quick death, even if it certainly wasn't clean.
 
"We're going to win." Logan says, his tone turned vicious, and that... Aiden doesn't think he's ever heard that level of malice from either Tanner or Evelyn. That seems to be all Logan.
 
"We're going to win." He repeats more forcefully. "We have to, we can't-" He breaks off and begins to slowly disconnect Ernie's body from the ground it's been stomped into. "They died so others can live free from all this. We have to win."
 
Aiden doesn't say anything, just kneels down to help. He hopes Logan is right, but he can't promise anything. War doesn't care who's fighting for the right reasons after all.
 
Looking at Ernie's body he doesn't think war cares for anyone in particular. And that only makes everything feel so much worse.
 
Aiden scoops up the limp form and turns to head back into the Great Hall. They need to keep moving - they only have an hour, after all.
 
Author's Note: So a few extra canon deaths are being thrown in too. I'm sorry OTL War cares for no one...
 
Next Time: You can only run from your problems for so long
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So I'm thinking I might do a final 'afterwords' chapter to share my thoughts and feelings on writing this story, if that's something people would be interested in? I'm also open to answering any lingering questions people might have there as well!

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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2447 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2447 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2447 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
#9
Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
luv_kero
2447 streak #10
Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P