Chapter Fourty-Four

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
May 2, 1998
"There are all kinds of courage"
 
Audrey is in the middle of burning parchment when the Goat messenger bursts through her wall.
 
The burning is a regular part of her daily routine now, and she's pretty sure her neighbors think she's a bit mad, having a fire every day when it's nearly the summer. But no one questions it either; in this environment no one dares ask questions - you never know who's willing to kill you to keep you quiet.
 
It works in Audrey's favor, since it means she's never interrupted, and this is one of the more delicate aspects of her entire part of the operation.
 
The parchments being burned contain the names and locations of the rescued Muggleborns currently being housed by the Underground, from those recovering in their local safehouses to the ones successfully smuggled across the border. No trace can be left so Audrey each day memorizes any new locations and then destroys the evidence entirely.
 
She's just starting on her second to last parchment when the messenger (or patronus, no one can actually tell which one Aberforth is using since they're the same) appears. That is definitely not part of her usual routine, and of course she's immediately on high alert - changes in routine means something big has happened, whether that be the safehouse raid from a few months back or the Floo Network completion (even in war not all news is bad news).
 
However, it's never been Goat sending the message before - usually it's Python or Lion who contact her, so the unexpected intrusion is that much more alarming.
 
"They're getting ready to fight at Hogwarts. This is the final showdown." The messenger (she's going to just assume it's a messenger, they're easier than Patronuses) announces before vanishing in a swirl of silver, and Audrey blinks. She hadn't told it to speak, which means this isn't just a standard message - it's an emergency one, something that must be conveyed immediately regardless of where the recipient is.
 
Anonymity doesn't matter anymore.
 
Audrey stands up, throws the rest of the parchment into the flames (they can deal with the fallout of that later if there is a later) and grabs both her wands up from her desk. It's then that the second Messenger arrives, this one much more familiar in shape.
 
"We're taking back the Ministry. If things don't go well at the school we need our government back." The Python declares, no-nonsense and precise as ever. Audrey hums - another emergency Messenger. She already knows where she'll be heading - she never cared much for school after all (and if her brother is there she won't be able to focus on anything else). But obviously things are coming to a head, and if that's the case she has a stop to make before heading to the Ministry.
 
Despite having not been there for a month, apparating to Percy's flat is easy and familiar, and she blasts open the door ready for a fight.
 
Inside the flat is an absolute mess, and for a brief moment Audrey panics - until she sees her boyfriend standing in the middle of the disaster zone over two unconscious forms.
 
Percy sees her at the same time that she sees him, and he breaks out into a relieved smile and closes the distance between them in only four steps. Audrey grabs him as soon as he's close enough, dragging him down into a tight hug.
 
"I hate you a little." She tells him, muffled against the front of his robes. "Being Rat is exhausting."
 
"But necessary?" He asks, and she hums. Honestly after a month she's getting used to the role, but she still knows if given the choice she wouldn't want to do it again. Still, she does know that what she's done is a good thing and the Underground would have been in a far worse position if she hadn't been around to step up after Percy was dragged from his desk.
 
"Still glad it seems to be over, one way or another." She says when they finally pull apart. "I assume you got both Messengers?"
 
Percy nods, looking a little uncertain, and Audrey frowns. That looks means Percy is about to say something that she isn't going to like. "What?" She prompts, stepping back slightly though keeping a hand gripping his robes. "What are you thinking?"
 
"I need to go to Hogwarts." He says, and she frowns.
 
"The Underground needs to take back the Ministry. You're a founder, Perce, you need to be there." She points out. Unspoken is her fear that if they part here she won't ever see him again, and this month has been bad enough knowing he's still alive.
 
Percy shakes his head. "Maybe, but you're Rat now Audrey. You're more their leader than I am. And..." He sighs. "My family will be at Hogwarts."
 
Audrey bites her lip. She knows plenty about the Weasleys, and if she's honest she isn't quite sure how she feels about them. But she knows Percy loves them despite everything, and she gets what he isn't saying. Any of them could die tonight, and he wants to make up with them before that happens.
 
She sighs. "I need to be at the Ministry." She says after a moment. "But you better be careful Percy Weasley, or I'll bring you back to life just so Python can poison you."
 
He laughs and leans over to kiss her, deep and promising. "You be careful as well." He says once they break apart for air, "I love you."
 
And this is happening way too fast - they've been dating for four months, one of which they didn't see each other during, but Audrey knows he means it. Percy feels things intensely, but he never puts those feelings to words unless he's thought about it carefully.
 
She just kisses him because she doesn't know yet if she can honestly return the sentiment, but she hopes that they'll have time enough after this to figure it out.
 
"I'll see you on the other side." She promises, then they both step away from each other and pull out their wands.
 
When Audrey appears in the Ministry Atrium she's almost immediately dragged into cover, narrowly avoiding a stunning spell in the process.
 
"Thanks." She says, glancing over at the woman who'd saved her. She's a skinny strawberry-blonde who Audrey doesn't recognize from the Ministry so she must be with the Underground.
 
"No problem." The woman says. "The Deatheaters still here have figured out that we're trying to kick them out so they're sieging the Atrium. That blonde lady has a few of us down here gathering up the stragglers."
 
"You mean Python?" Audrey guesses, figuring a blonde giving orders is probably the other leader.
 
The woman shrugs. "Weird name, but I guess so?"
 
Audrey blinks, and suddenly realizes this woman isn't Ministry or Underground.
 
"Um, no offense, but who are you exactly?" She asks, and the woman grins.
 
"That message about the fighting went out to every safehouse you guys are running - I was staying with Evie and Fitz and decided to come help out here at the Ministry. I'm Cassie Ingram, by the way."
 
"A Muggleborn." Audrey breathes, recognizing the name. She remembers moving Cassie from Deer's place over to Fox and Owl (Evie and Fitz, apparently) after the woman had been cleared. It's strange putting a face to one of the names on the parchment. "Then... are there other Muggleborns here?"
 
"Yeah, some guy called Gryphon was helping people Floo to the right areas depending on if they wanted to help here or at Hogwarts. Or if they're underage or don't want to fight they just hole up at that big mansion we go to first after being picked up."
 
"Deer's place, smart." Audrey says, more to herself than to Cassie. "It's easily defensible and unconnected to a majority of our operatives, it'll likely still be safe even if both attacks fail spectacularly."
 
Cassie shrugs. "If you say so. We should probably get out of here though, doesn't seem like anyone else is coming in so the other side will probably start trying to move on our position here. The blonde said we should regroup in the Minister's offices."
 
Audrey flinches. "I know where that is." She says heavily. She understands Python's choice, but the idea of going back into those offices isn't something that ever sits well with her. At least this time, she muses as she and Cassie break cover and run for the stairs, she might get some positive memories out of the visit.
 
She deflects a few hexes and curses as they run, but fewer than she'd expected. "Don't seem to be many people." She observes to Cassie, who shrugs.
 
"Most went to Hogwarts." She agrees. "I think it's where the grand showdown will be, you know? More allure to go to that one. We have a decent force here though, from what I saw."
 
Audrey hums. Most likely a majority of the Ministry Underground had come here, just like she had. After all, they've been fighting this war within the Ministry walls from day one - it would feel wrong to finish it anywhere else.
 
"Do you know who we're fighting against?" She asks, and then quickly adds, "I mean names, obviously we're fighting Deatheaters."
 
Cassie shrugs as they finally reach the stairs and magically barricade the door behind themselves. "No idea on names. I think one girl said there were some Snatchers? They'd know more than me."
 
Audrey nods. "Alright, let's keep moving then. That barricade won't hold forever."
 
They move up to the second floor silently, Cassie in front and Audrey at the back, wands up and ears perked for any sound that's out of place.
 
They push open the door to the Minister's offices and are immediately confronted with several wands.
 
"Just me! Back with another friend." Cassie chirps, and the wands lower again. Audrey weaves around Cassie and immediately scans for Python and Lion, finding the two women by Percy's desk (it's never really felt like hers, even a month later) speaking rapidly back and forth. She immediately makes her way over - she's supposed to be the original Rat, after all, they need to show a united front.
 
"No boyfriend?" Python says in lieu of a greeting, and Audrey shakes her head.
 
"He's out, but he went to Hogwarts. His family." She says briskly, wanting to move on. "What do we have so far? Who's on the other side?"
 
"Yurina Nakayashi for one." Lion makes a face, and Audrey winces as well. Great, that's a massive point in favor of the other team. "And Branwen Avery, most likely, though no clear confirmation one way or another."
 
"There are some Snatchers, but quite a few of them seem to have been sent out to Hogwarts for that offensive." Python adds. "Overall I think our numbers are about even with theirs, so we're going to have to be smart about this." She shoots a look at Lion, and Audrey realizes she had probably interrupted an argument when she'd come over. Slytherin tactics versus Gryffindor spirit, definitely a dangerous combination when handled poorly.
 
"I agree, tactical decisions are probably our best bet here." She agrees with Python though, and though Lion scowls she nods. Somewhere down the line the three of them seem to have figured out a comfortable balance in their shared leadership.
 
Lion hums. "I figure since I know most of the recruits here I can divy up teams that will work best together?" She offers. "You two can figure out the attack plan - Rat knows the Ministry layout better than I do and you're the grand tactitian Python."
 
"Sounds good." Audrey says quickly before Python can snipe back. "Thanks Lion. We'll get back to you once we've got a clear outline and you can help select which teams should cover which areas."
 
Lion tilts her head and then turns back to the room, shouting to gather together their ragtag bunch of volunteers (though Audrey has to admit there are more people here than she would have expected considering how cautious the Underground is with its recruitment).
 
Python watches the other woman for a moment before turning back to Audrey. "Alright then Rat, which areas of the Minstry would you say are the best places for Deatheaters to be hiding out?
 
Audrey takes a somewhat shaky breath - yes she'd volunteered for this, but that doesn't mean she isn't internally screaming and definitely not ready - and then hops up onto the side of the desk, right where she'd always sat while chatting with Percy about life and work and dates.
 
"I think they most likely will be in the Department of Magical Law Enforcement, on the floor above this one - it's large but very precisely laid out, easy to defend and ideal for ambush attacks." She decides after a moment. "Also, if Yurina is here and Yaxley isn't she's the highest ranking officer present, and that's sort of home base for her, where she'll be most familiar with the layout." She then pauses, frowns, and corrects herself. "Actually Yurina also would be familiar with the Department of International Magical Cooperation on Level Five, so we probably need teams at both departments."
 
Python nods briskly. "We'll make sure to put people familiar with each of the Departments into those groups." She agrees. "The teams covering the Law Enforcement area will have to be a little more cautious considering the layout, but we have a decent number of people from that floor on our side."
 
Audrey's eyes flick across the group gathered in front of her and realizes that Python is right - she recognizes two relatively prominent Law Enforcement officials just from a simple scan - Auror Trainer Clary Travers and the recently promoted Investigator Finn Lopatkina-Paluch. To her somewhat ashamed additional surprise she recognizes both as former Slytherins. She also spots Hugo Longbottom from International Cooperation so that's helpful as well.
 
"Alright, so those should be our main targeted areas, but I think we should send a team down to the lower levels as well. They're keeping a number of political prisoners down there and I think we should evacuate them out in case things god poorly." Audrey says, turning back to Python, who's nodding.
 
"Agreed, and we've got a Wizengamot lawyer here as well so she can be part of that bunch." Python says firmly. "Let me just tell Lion about that, so she can optimize the teams with it in mind." She pushes off the desks, which she'd been leaning against, and heads over to Lion and the other people in the room. It's a lot of young people, and Audrey recognizes quite a few from her rounds in the Ministry. There's Eloise Taylor from Records, Sarah Poole from the Wizengamot (she must be the lawyer Python had just mentioned), a few Muggleborns she knew before they'd vanished and who's names she'd seen on the parchments she memorized each day. There are even some Ministry workers who aren't associated with the Underground or the Muggleborns who are still standing with the group and listening to Lion's directions, clearly ready to fight now even if they hadn't before.
 
It's enough to make her hopeful that maybe, even if this goes badly, there are more than enough people ready to stand up for what's right that a loss today won't mean a loss forever.
 
Cassie Ingram happens to glance up and catch her eye as she looks around, and the woman gives her a grin that Audrey automatically returns, though she's not sure if hers was very genuine.
 
Python walks back over then so Audrey doesn't have too long to linger on how she looked and resumes her position against the desk. "Lion's on board. We're going to go in three teams, so each of us will be leading one. I volunteered you to head the team going to the Department of International Magical Cooperation, and Lion is taking Magical Law Enforcement."
 
Audrey raises an eyebrow. That means... "You're heading the rescue group?"
 
Python snorts. "I am a licensed Mediwitch, and seeing as both our actual on-team healers went to Hogwarts I'm the best option available to deal with the physical trauma we're likely going to find down there. And being a Slytherin doesn't mean I don't want to help people." She adds wryly.
 
Audrey doesn't counter the assumption - it had been subconscious on her part, but Python isn't wrong. "Sorry, that sounds, well, sound. I'm guessing Lion doesn't have any real experience in any other departments?"
 
Python tilts her head. "Precisely. She's only ever worked in Law Enforcement. You, on the other hand, have experience throughout the entire Ministry so we figured of the three of us you'd know the other departments best. Lion should be done with the groups soon so we can get more detail done then."
 
Audrey hums slightly in response, as ever not totally sure how to talk to Python if she isn't making reports for the Underground.
 
The younger girl usually is content to leave them in silence, but Audrey supposes today is unique, as after a moment Python speaks again.
 
"You knew my sister, right? You were in her year, her House."
 
It's not the first time Audrey has spoken about Saundra with a member of the Underground - heck, she's a common topic of conversation with Percy and Lion - but it is the first time Python has brought her up. Audrey has admittedly always avoided talking about Saundra with the other woman's sister, almost scared of what she'll see in Python's expression if she does.
 
But she's not going to lie, even if she knows the conversation is probably going to get awkward. "Yeah, I roomed with her. She talked about you a lot."
 
Python hums. "You weren't friends." She says, an observation, not a question. She shakes her head after a moment. "You're dating Percy now. He's the one who sent her to the courts. How do you reconcile that?"
 
Audrey shifts uncertainly. Does Python not know? No, she does - she's the only one other than Percy and Audrey who was in on the plan that got Saundra killed but solidified Percy's place as a spy.
 
Or, it had until a month ago.
 
Audrey huffs out a breath. "Well, I did know Saundra. It's a very her thing to do something stupid if she thinks she's helping. And Percy still hates himself for it - I think he always will, on some level. I don't need to hate him too."
 
Python nods slightly, staring out at their small team of freedom fighters as Lion wrangles them into groups. "That's fair." She says after a moment. "I'm mostly mad at Saundra, I think."
 
Audrey doesn't know what to say to thank, and thankfully she doesn't have to figure it out as Lion chooses that moment to walk back over and announce that the teams are complete.
 
"There are smaller groups of two and three within each bunch, so you can split them off - they know who they are." She adds. "So what's next oh fearless leaders?"
 
"You're one of us, accept it." Python shoots back, pushing off the desk and then hopping up onto it to address the full group. "Alright, Lion has sorted you all into one of three teams. The group heading into the lower levels are with me - our main goal is to get any prisoners out and safely back to Deer's home. If you don't know where that is, take them to the main meeting area and I'll check there once the cells are cleared. We will have to fight to get down there - I doubt the Atrium has entirely cleared of enemies, so don't think we have the soft gig. The other two teams will either be going with Lion to the Department of Magical Law Enforcement or with Rat to the Department of International Magical Cooperation. Our job is to incapacitate all aggressors. Don't kill if you don't have to, but your lives always come first."
 
She pauses to think, then continues. "You may run into other Ministry workers as you go - either recruit them into your teams or get them somewhere safe to hunker down. Do not tell them more than they need to know to stay safe or try to send them out of the building - they could turn on us or be killed."
 
Though everyone is clearly listening to Python speak, several are also craning to get a glance at Audrey, who shifts uncomfortably under the attention, her skin crawling. She understands the interest, of course - no one has ever seen Rat before other than Python and Lion, and Percy was a bit of a legend among the earliest Underground recruits. These people have no idea she isn't one of the founders.
 
"Alright then, Dungeon team, we'll head out first. The rest need to move fast after that, we've already given them time to plan their attack and we don't want them to have any more." Python commands, hopping off the desk and heading straight for the door, clearly expecting her team to follow her without further instruction.
 
And to Audrey's slight surprise they do - a group of six including Cassie Ingram and Sarah Poole follow close on Python's heels, wands drawn as they vanish through the door in single file.
 
Lion waves her crew over next, and Audrey is a bit put-off to see that most of the people she knows decently well, like Eloise and Clary, are on that team, leaving her with a crowd of curious strangers (and Hugo Longbottom - she thankfully has at least one ally here).
 
She clears awkwardly, realizing abruptly she's still sitting on the desk like a school girl and she quickly jumps down so she's on her own two feet when she addresses the group.
 
"Alright, so I'm sorry to say I don't quite know all of you so if we can do introductions before heading out it would be appreciated." Hopefully that sounds commanding and not pathetic but Audrey honestly figures it's more likely the latter. "Code names for those who have them, first names for everyone else." She adds quickly. "And what your job is or was so I know who's best with what skills."
 
She's careful to focus as each person offers their introductions so that if she needs to give orders later she'll be able to do so quickly and efficiently. Hugo, or "Panther" as he introduces himself as, mentions both his job in the International Cooperation Department as well as his time honing his dueling skills as a Field Agent. He also offers Audrey a slight smile as he does and Audrey can honestly say that if she wasn't already very much infatuated with a certain red-haired, insecure, self-sacrificing, brilliant man she probably would have blushed.
 
As it was she just smiled back thankfully as all the people after follow his example, explicitly stating what they're good at.
 
The last person to speak is Finn, the only Law Enforcement employee who hadn't gone with Lion's group. "Horned Owl, though most people just say H.O. since it's too long." He rolls his eyes at nothing, a vague smile on his lips. "I'm an Investigator for the Auror Division in the Department of Magical Law Enforcement and I can do just about anything you need me to."
 
Audrey nods, figuring that despite how braggadocious the introduction had been, Finn probably isn't exaggerating. Investigators are only one step below Hit-Wizards in terms of how thouroughly they're trained, so Finn is almost certainly their best fighter.
 
She nods tightly. "Alright then. Our target is the fifth floor - Panther, you're the one here who would best know the layout, how many entrances and exits are there?"
 
"Three, including the lift." He says immediately, "There are two stairwell exists, one near the lift and one at the back by the Magical Office of Law, which is where I work. That entrance is less likely to be guarded as not many people know about it unless they actually work that far back."
 
Audrey nods. "Alright, then we're going to go in teams. Hugo, since you know the back areas best you'll take one team up the back entrance, while I'll lead an assault on the front. We'll hopefully catch any Deatheaters there by coming in from both sides."
 
"Classic pincer move." Finn says approvingly. "I assume I'll be with your team Rat? Since I'm the best fighter here."
 
Audrey sighs, already wishing he'd gone with Lion. She understands why Finn is with her of course - they need the best trained fighters divided evenly between the teams - but she rather wishes she'd gotten Clary instead. The other Auror at least is known to be polite when she isn't shouting her students into emotional breakdowns.
 
"You will, yes." She confirms, and then quickly divides the other five people between herself and Hugo - Panther, she needs to remember that - based on skillset. Her and Finn - Horned Owl, whatever, that code name is dumb and there are too many of them in her opinion - take the two Muggleborns in the group as they're both better in defense than offense, and the other three head out with Hugo.
 
The Muggleborns - Aidan and Felicity as they'd introduced themselves - are both scrawny and worn as all the rescued Muggleborns still in the country would be, but they have a determination about them that puts Audrey somewhat at ease about their ability to fend for themselves should things go very wrong.
 
"We'll give Hu- Panther and his team some time to make their way up and then launch the distraction from the front." She instructs, again hoping she sounds like she knows what she's doing because she does not know what she's doing.
 
"Well then we have some time to kill! So Rat, you're supposedly one of the founders of this whole shebang." Finn immediately starts talking, that unnerving grin still on his face, and Audrey wonders if he somehow knows that she isn't the original Rat. He certainly phrased his question in a way that implies it. "How did all that happen? What was the big idea that launched all this?"
 
Audrey doesn't think she'd answer him even if she did have an answer, which really makes her wonder how he became an Investigator in the first place. "You only need to know what directly relevant to your work." She says, reciting something she's heard from all three of the actual founders. "If this goes poorly the less you know the better for everyone."
 
Finn raises an eyebrow, but he looks impressed rather than insulted. "I've heard that one before. It's smart though, I commend that. One of you all is definitely a Slytherin, though I don't think it's you."
 
It hits Audrey then that Finn isn't asking out of curiosity or nosiness, but rather a deep-seated, genuine want to piece things together. Which does explain his career choice quite well, though it doesn't make him any less annoying.
 
"You're one of the founders?" Felicity asks curiously. "Well then I want to say thank you. My little brother is still at the main safehouse recovering - he would have died for sure if Kitten hadn't found us when she did."
 
"That's Clary Travers." Finn tells her brightly. "She's a top Auror trainer so she's got basic medical training as well."
 
"Do you not?" Audrey can't help asking - Finn still seems annoying but he also seems very willing to chat about pretty much anything and Audrey is curious about his phrasing.
 
Finn shrugs. "It's not needed so much if you're not field active, so I haven't renewed my certifications this year. I can still do everything, just not legally." He replies.
 
Audrey still files that knowledge away - she doesn't know if anyone else in the group has any medical knowledge, so an expired liscence is still likely to be the best they've got.
 
Finn ends up being distracted talking to Aidan - apparently they were in the same year in school and had been friends for a brief period of time which is... interesting considering Audrey remembers Aidan being a Hufflepuff prefect while Finn was definitely a Slytherin. Not a common friendship, but she supposes Finn isn't very common.
 
She eventually shakes herself back to the present and calls the group to heel.
 
"Everyone ready? Remember we're primarily a distraction, so focus on safety first - only attack if you've got a clear opening." She orders, and internally grimaces when only two of the three with her nod.
 
Finn shrugs. "I can see a lot of openings, it's kind of the job." He notes.
 
Aidan rolls his eyes. "Good to see you haven't changed at all." He sighs.
 
Finn grins. "Not true, I expect people to disappoint me now." He declares grandly.
 
"Shush you two." Audrey snaps, and they at least have the decency to look apologetic. "We don't want to alert anyone any earlier than needed."
 
It's almost impressive how quickly Finn shifts at that - his amused aura drops almost instantaneously, replaced by pure professional determination. Aidan and Felicity also fall silent, though they look nervous despite their attempts to be as resolute as Finn.
 
Audrey can only hope she looks confident - inside she's definitely starting to panic. She's about to lead three other people into a literal battle, and only one of the four of them has any fighting experience - and it isn't her.
 
This is officially insanity.
 
Still, she leads the group to the front staircase and focuses on keeping her breathing even and her ears peeled for the sound of any possible attacks by their opponents and Merlin she didn't sign up for this. She just wanted to impress a cute boy, not lead a strike force!
 
But... she could have gone with Percy to Hogwarts. Or even stayed at his flat. She didn't have to be here. She knows that.
 
So why is it only now that she's thinking about backing out?
 
She takes a few shaky breaths, careful to keep the others at her back so they can't see. Squaring her shoulders she pulls out both her wands. She can be scared later - she has a war to win.
 
Author's Note: Bunch of H:aH cameos in here! And also what is effectively the final plot point for the Underground - the Battle of the Ministry~
 
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So I'm thinking I might do a final 'afterwords' chapter to share my thoughts and feelings on writing this story, if that's something people would be interested in? I'm also open to answering any lingering questions people might have there as well!

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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2442 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2442 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2442 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
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Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
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Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P