Chapter Twenty-Five

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
January 26 - February 9, 1998
"Power gives us the right to rule"
 
Zara had thought she was in the clear. Sure she has to report to Yurina, and technically Theodore Yaxley is her "co-leader", but both of them are supposed to be doing their own things, which should lead to Zara being in charge. And from there she was going to show Yaxley (older Yaxley) how effectively she was running things on her own, and prove to him that she should be fully and formally put in charge of the entire Unit.
 
Instead, mere weeks after saying he'd let her do her own thing, her infuriating co-leader had gone back on his word and decided to actually "help" her. And his version of help is absolutely ruining all of Zara's plans, both to take over and to fix the Unit.
 
At first he'd started actively training her Snatchers, but in non-lethal takedowns. Zara had confronted him about it in the middle of one of his training session and thrown out that he'd never been in the field and had no idea what they were up against.
 
"These Fugitives," She'd told him angrily as their troops looked on nervously, "Are desperate, feral outlaws more than willing to kill us to run from their crimes. Marcus," She waved at one of the men standing nearby, who flinched away from the gesture, "Was stabbed with a Muggle weapon. They're willing to sink to any level, and here you are telling my brave volunteers not to use every available method to defend themselves?"
 
"I'm merely saying that these people are to be brough to trial - they're half-dead of starvation by now Zara, our troops are more than a match for them I'm sure."
 
That was when Zara had made her biggest mistake (the whole fight being public had been another - her mother had thoroughly deconstructed her entire day when she came home that evening and informed Zara that she'd brought everything onto herself. Which wasn't what Zara had wanted to hear).
 
"You've never been out there, so you have no idea what you're talking about." It had been said dismissively, intended to be the killing blow and send him back to flirting at his desk and letting Zara prove her worth.
 
Instead he'd decided to start going with her out into the Forest. Which is ten times worse than him training the troops back in the Ministry, as she's very quickly learned.
 
The final week of January sees him tagging along on a solo mission she'd been planning for a month to one of the uncharted areas of the Forest. She'd intended to scout it out and assign one of their new teams to the section, and maybe take down a few Mudbloods if she came across them (she needs some stress relief), but at the last possible second Theo had popped over to her desk and invited himself along.
 
Zara had tried to insist she would do better on her own, but he'd name dropped his uncle and she'd been forced to comply. Unfortunately, Corban Yaxley could take this job from her at any moment, so she has to bend to his whims. For now.
 
One day she's going to be his boss, and she's going to make the elder Yaxley and Yurina clean the loos every single day. It's where lazy idiots like them should be. But for now she has to let them think she's dancing to their tune.
 
By actually doing that, but she prefers to ignore the details when they're liable to piss her off.
 
"Fine, get your robes on." She grumbles, and Theo beams obnoxiously at her before trotting off. She can practically see a tail swishing mockingly behind him. He's obviously doing all of this just to irritate her.
 
He takes ten minutes to get back - ten minutes, might she add, that she could have been dividing new scouting sections in - and he's carrying a bag.
 
She glares at it. "What is that supposed to be?" She asks dryly.
 
He raises an eyebrow imperiously. "Always take note of stakeout spots, that's day two of Hit Wizard Training. I'm going to draw a map of each section so I can specialize the training for the groups assigned to them."
 
Zara just glares at him. How dare he have a good idea? Though considering a lot of the other "information" he's collected in the past few weeks has been utterly bogus she's sure he'll manage to screw this up as well.
 
And that, she thinks as she apparates herself to the Forest, is an entirely other situation that is only further screwing with her image. There have been multiple points when Theo has offered up supposedly legit info on Fugitive locations or resistance camps that have turned up absolutely nothing. Theo has seemed frustrated by the continual failures, even coordinating a few strikes personally and leading one of the more recent ones (which had actually resulted in a fight, though not with who they were expecting - in fact, no one had even seen who had attacked the scouting party, but even Zara can admit they must have been good considering the number of Deatheaters still recovering in Mungo's). But Zara isn't buying his act. Theodore Yaxley is out to ruin her reputation before she's even had a chance to build it and she isn't having it. She just needs to prove what he's doing.
 
Theo appears beside her a moment later, whistling cheerfully. "Well then, I'll go East you go West?"
 
"We don't split up." Zara snaps. If he's going to come along, she's going to make damn sure he doesn't screw everything up. This is important to her. "You don't even know what you're doing."
 
He makes and offended noise at that, and good, his entire existence offends Zara, let him suffer in some of his own medicine for once.
 
"I'm a fully trained Hit Wizard-"
 
"Who's never been on one of these types of scouting missions." Zara finishes flatly. "I have. You stay with me or you go home, those are your options. You're all about learning, right?" She can't help the sarcastic jab, and she thinks she's more than earned it anyway.
 
Theo scoffs but turns back towards her. "Alright then, lead the way." He bows mockingly and ugh why couldn't he have taken the other option?
 
Zara strides ahead of him with a huff, entering the new area confidently. "Don't fall behind." She snaps, pulling out her wand as she scans her surroundings for good Apparation and ambush points.
 
Theo is quiet for all of a minute before deciding it's been too long since he last made her want to hex him. "So what exactly are we doing? Since apparently I don't know what that is." His voice drips sarcasm and Zara grips her wand tightly.
 
His uncle will give control back to the Japanese wench if I kill him. She reminds herself firmly. She can handle a few more weeks of this. She can.
 
"Look for good areas to set up traps, and clearings to use for apparating in." She says tersely in response, and he snorts.
 
"So what we do when hunting down targets then? I thought you said this would be different."
 
She's going to kill him. As soon as she's able to without risking her own station she's going to kill him. And probably his stupid uncle too, for forcing her into this in the first place.
 
"Just. Do. It." She grits out as evenly as she can manage, and by some miracle he actually does. He hums as he does, so Zara can't completely ignore his presence the way she'd very much like to, but it's better than nothing at least.
 
They travel in that near-silence for a while as the sun dips lower over the tree-line, visible for long than it might normally be in this area due to the bare branches of the trees overhead.
 
"There really aren't any good ambush points around here." Theo declares with a whine, and Zara hates that she agrees. The entire area would be great come the spring, but in the current weather nothing could hide effectively here.
 
"Probably means no Mudbloods either." She grumbles. "And here I could use something to hex."
 
Theo doesn't say anything to that, which has Zara feeling rather smug. Clearly he does have some working brain functions if the subtle threat successfully shut his mouth.
 
They move in silence for a while longer before Theo speaks up again. "It's getting dark." He announces, like it's some grand discovery and not a statement of the obvious.
 
"No ." Zara grumbles. "Your point?"
 
He scoffs. "And this is why my uncle set me to babysit you. We won't be able to get anything done in the dark, it's too difficult to see and we're liable to hurt ourselves."
 
She rolls her eyes. "Please, you led a nighttime stake out don't lecture me on-"
 
"That was pre-planned and well formulated! This is wandering uncharted terrain blindly like a couple of idiots. You can go for it, but I'm heading back. I have no interest in learning if there really are coyotes out here."

Zara growls under her breath at the implied insult. "Fine. I'll finish tomorrow." She grumbles.
 
Theo hums. "See you in the morning then!" He declares cheerfully, and Zara's groan is mixed with the sound of him apparating away. She stands in the empty forest for a few moments longer, glaring at the spot Theo had been before spinning on her heel and heading home herself.
 
She complains to her mother that evening over dinner while sneaking scraps of their chicken dinner to Princess under the table. Hui Ying just sighs.
 
"You cannot let him irritate you so obviously." She scolds. "It gives him power."
 
Zara scowls. It's not the first time her mother has told her that, and she knows it, but Theo just grates so intensely on her nerves it can be difficult to tolerate at times. She's vastly superior in intellect and capability, and yet she has to deal with a slacker nepotism case dragging her down. And with his connections to his uncle his failures are going to ultimately be blamed on her.
 
She knows all this, her mother has repeatedly told her and beyond that she just isn't an idiot despite what the Yaxleys want to believe. And still.
 
"You let your emotions cloud your judgement. You said to me that you mistrust his intentions, that he is purposefully giving poor information to damage your reputation." Her mother says firmly. "Trust your instincts - prove it. If you can show his uncle that Theodore is a liability then you will not only be given full leadership but also secure yourself as trustworthy and clever."
 
Zara bows her head slightly. "Yes mother." She sighs, leaning over to scratch Princess behind the ears when the tabby lightly headbuts her leg. Hui Ying glares at her pointedly.
 
"When do you see him next?" She asks, and Zara sighs again just thinking about it.
 
"Tomorrow, we didn't finishes scouting the new sector today since he invited himself along and threw off my entire schedule." She grumbles, glaring harder when her mother smiles.
 
"Good. You spend as much time with him as possible from this point forward." Her mother instructs firmly.
 
Zara sits up in her chair instantly. "What? Mum I can barely stand him now why would I-"
 
"If you are correct that he wishes to sabotage you, then being around him more will lead to him inevitably slipping up. Keep your enemies close Zara, you know this."
 
Zara grimaces. "Yes mother." She says again, more resigned this time.
 
Her mother smiles. "A small sacrifice today makes a great victory tomorrow. Now go sleep, you'll need to be your best tomorrow for Theodore."
 
Zara retreats to her room as ordered and sketches out a simple map of the area she and Theo had covered that afternoon before calling it a night and heading to join Princess in the bed. Her mother is right - she'll need all her wits about her tomorrow if she's going to start making "friends" with Theo.
 
She arrives at the office early the next morning, determined to get a few things in order and refocus herself on her goals, which ought to make dealing with Theo easier. Her problem, she thinks, was that she was too focused on what she could lose - she needs to remember what will be gained.
 
Theo arrives about thirty minutes after she does and looks a little wary when she gives him her sweetest smile, leaning forward to show off a bit and throw him further off kilter.
 
"You ready to go?" She asks brightly. "Or do you need some time to get things together? I figure as long as we're in the field by ten we should be able to finish everything."
 
Theo eyes her warily as he slowly shakes his head. "I've got everything." He says after a moment. "I'll meet you there?"
 
"Sounds good! See you in a second." She smiles again and apparates away, reappearing in the chosen clearing a few moments later. She smirks to herself when it takes Theo nearly a minute to follow - clearly he had to reorient himself. As always, her mother was correct. Zara will prove Theo is up to no good sooner than she'd hoped if just a couple of smiles is already throwing his game.
 
When he appears Zara cheerfully offers to let him lead this time - "You are a fully trained Hit-Wizard after all, you'd be much better equipped than me if we run into any rabid Fugitives" - and she trails just behind him, sizing him up thoughtfully and beaming every time he glances back at her. They walk mostly in silence, and Zara revels in it.
 
Squirm little bastard. She thinks as Theo once again looks over at her. Squirm knowing that I'll be unveiling your incompetence and taking what's rightfully mine soon.
 
Theo does finally speak when they find a good clearing to serve as an Apparation point for whatever team ends up assigned to the new sector.
 
"We should find another though." He adds as Zara takes note of the location on her map, "The area is too large for a single team to cover effectively." He sounds like he's trying to be mocking, but it comes out hesitant, like he's no longer sure how she'll react.
 
Good. "I agree." She says lightly, because she actually does and also because she likes seeing how uncomfortable the comment makes him. "How about this entry point is for everything we've covered in the past two days, and the rest will go to a different team?"
 
Theo tilts his head, apparently recovering from his unease in the face of actual work. "Should be alright, but let's make sure to double check both sections before solidifying that in the rotation, we wouldn't want to give anyone more or less work than anyone else."
 
Zara hums in acknowledgment before moving ahead to scout out the remaining area, reasserting herself as the leader of the expedition as she does. Throwing Theo off balance is all well and good, but she's still in charge.
 
As such this means she's in front when they actually do run into a Fugitive, who swears and fumbles for his wand.
 
Zara doesn't give him a chance, touching her own wand inside her robe and silently sending the boy flying into a nearby tree, his own wand clattering from his hand.
 
Zara raises her wand again, grinning manically - this will be a great way to siphon off her frustration from the past few months - when another spell whizzes centimeters from her ear and she hears Theo deflect it.
 
"." She hisses, leaping backwards and scanning the area. "He's got friends. You secure the kid, I'll get rid of them."
 
Theo frowns. "You secure him." He counters firmly. "I'm trained in-"
 
Another blast sends them both diving away from each other, and Zara fires off several return curses - a mix of Crucio and Avada Kedavra though she doesn't see if anything hits.
 
She can' see Theo anymore, and worse she can't see the kid she'd stunned either, which is particularly irritating as he shouldn't have been able to get back up.
 
"We need to fall back!" She hears Theo's voice say, but  that; she's needed a good fight for a long time now and she's not losing this chance.
 
She throws up a protective shield as she darts between cover, dropping it as soon as she safely can and firing off multiple curses towards where she thinks the opponent is. A scream rewards her efforts, and she takes the opening and flies over to where a man is covering a gashed open face with one hand while trying to still grip his wand in the other.
 
"Hello, you caught me in a bad mood." She greets him pleasantly. "The name's Zara Wong. Just so you know who it was that brought you to justice."
 
The screams are gratifying, and the way they fade out into strangled chokes even more so. She feels ten times lighter already, and it's only been fifteen minutes. When the man's whimpering is no longer audible she flicks an idle killing curse over his slumped body and trots back into the clearing to find Theo. Standing alone.
 
"Where's the kid?" She demands. "What the Theo he was practically unconscious, how did you lose him?"
 
"There must have been another person with them." He says evasively, and now that she's closer Zara thinks he might look a bit ill.
 
Well. That's worth noting.
 
She doesn't respond and instead spins angrily on her heel and stalks off to finish the scouting mission.
 
"I'm reporting this." She tells him after a few minutes of silence. "That was sloppy."
 
He looks over at her disbelievingly. "I'm sorry, I was sloppy? That man screaming probably alerted every Fugitive in a ten kilometer radius that we're here. They're probably all clearing out and hiding elsewhere as we speak - completely counteracting the entire point of this endeavor, I might add."
 
Zara rolls her eyes. "If it bothered you so much you could have come over and ended it." She snipes back, and Theo has no response.
 
They finish the job in silence, and Theo excuses himself to go flirt when they get back, leaving Zara to actually fill out the paperwork and sort through the new hires to create the teams for each new sector.
 
Once that's sorted, taking until just after lunch and leaving her hungry and irritated, she begins writing up her complaint. She wasn't kidding about taking this to Corban Yaxley - Theo's uselessness today may be just what she's been waiting for. Tonight she'll be the sole leader of the Unit, she's confident about that.
 
She strides into Yaxley's office uninvited and unannounced with her formal complaint gripped in one fist, and for once she's pleased to see that Theo is already present.
 
"Excellent, you're here." She says briskly.
 
The elder Yaxley curls his lip. "As you should have been - thank you for finally joining us Ms. Wong."
 
Zara nearly trips as she comes to a dead stop in the middle of the room. This already isn't going how it's supposed to - what does Yaxley mean she's supposed to already be here? She'd never received a summons.
 
She says as much, and Theo rolls his eyes. "As I was saying." He drawls mockingly, and Zara fights back the hatred and disgust that crawls up her spine at the declaration. Stay in control, don't get emotional. She reminds herself firmly. She can kill him later, after she's exposed him now.
 
"The body of the Mudblood criminal you killed has been identified as Dirk Cresswell." Yaxley informs her blandly. "We also believe to know the identity of the boy you allowed to get away in your blood-crazed quest against Mr. Cresswell."
 
Zara gapes. "That let- Sir, that isn't-"
 
"Theodore has already explained the situation to me." Yaxley cuts her off firmly. "If you had simply disposed of Mr. Cresswell quickly and returned to help my nephew fend off the other assailant the boy wouldn't have had time to escape."
 
Zara could swear, but she keeps the words locked up in the back of . It won't do her any good to lose her cool here. "I was unaware of a third assailant, and I was defending myself against Mr. Cresswell." She says firmly, fighting to keep her voice even and professional. "I apologize for thinking Mr. Yaxley could handle himself, considering his Hit Wizard training."
 
Yaxley raises an eyebrow, clearly unimpressed, and then proceeds to ignore her explanation entirely. "The escaped criminal is believed to be one Dean Thomas, a school-mate of Undesirable Number One. His capture could have brought us closer to capturing Potter."
 
Well . Zara steals a glance over at Theo, who looks irritatingly smug about the whole situation, before she looks back at his uncle.
 
"I was unaware of his identity at the time sir, I apologize. I would naturally have put more focus on his capture had I known."
 
"Indeed. My nephew will be debriefing the Unit on all known associates of Potter and his friends tomorrow afternoon so that these sorts of mistakes will not occur again."
 
Zara suppresses the flinch she naturally wants to give at 'mistake'. She doesn't make mistakes - she'd told Theo to secure the kid so this is his fault really. But of course his uncle would side with him.
 
She keeps her anger locked firmly in her gut up until she gets home, at which point she unloads all of it onto her mother, who looks unimpressed.
 
"This changes nothing. He lied about the situation so he's clearly still hiding something." She says briskly.
 
Zara sighs and takes Princess up to her room - she'd really wanted a bit more sympathy from Hui Ying, but her mother is right. Keep your eyes on the target.
 
It's only later, when she's winding down to sleep, that something occurs to her. Theo could have just killed Cresswell himself if he was so annoyed by her dragging it out - so why hadn't he?
 
She sits up excitedly, startling Princess who mewls pitifully until Zara her in apology. Theo had looked ill when Zara came back over to him after killing Cresswell. Theo wasn't comfortable with killing the Fugitives.
 
"He's not just trying to make me look bad." She breathes out, feeling a grin spreading across her face at the realization. "He's sabotaging the group because he's a traitor."
 
It's a thrilling realization, and Zara thinks she's going to have a lot of fun following Theo around in the coming weeks now that she knows. If he's really a spy he'll slip up eventually - and Zara will probably get his uncle's blessing to take him down.
 
She goes to sleep that night feeling much better.

The next day she's all smiles and apologies, and she even happily announces Theo as being in charge during his debrief on Potter's associates in the afternoon. She listens attentively and even suggests afterwards that they quiz the teams randomly over the next week to make sure the information has settled in fully. She can tell Theo is suspicious, but she doesn't care. She knows his secret now, and she's going to reveal him to everyone.
 
She follows him doggedly through the rest of the month, sitting with him at every meal and inviting herself along when he goes out after work. She happily keeps up conversations with him and takes note of his reactions whenever she intentionally talks about hunting down the Mudbloods or killing Order members. Unfortunately he's gotten better and doesn't slip the way he had in the forest that day, but Zara is confident that if she's patient she'll get what she's looking for.
 
It takes two weeks - two long, exhausting, infuriating weeks - but eventually Zara gets her chance when Theo invites her to an information drop with him on the evening of Monday, February ninth. He's been on a few others in that time, though as usual the tips didn't turn out to be much. Still, Zara feigns flattery when he asks her along the morning of the drop.
 
"I'm excited to meet your informant! Is he from your Hit Wizard days?" She asks brightly that evening, when the Ministry is nearly empty due to quitting time having been a solid two hours prior.
 
"He wasn't mine directly." Theo replies lazily. "But I saw him a few times in the past couple years on active duty, and when I put feelers out back when we were put in charge he responded. He's never been the best but he's had some good info in the past so I figure he's better than nothing."
 
It's a smooth lie - he's obviously practiced the response. Zara just hums lightly, even as she mentally sneers that she knows they'll be going to his Order contact pretending to be an 'informant' in the name of protecting Theo's espionage. They'll regret underestimating her.
 
They take the Muggle exit of the Ministry, and Zara can't cover her vague repulsion at having to walk through the streets of Muggle London, still bustling and filthy with Muggles going to and fro.
 
Theo obviously catches it and gives her a sympathetic look. "Sorry, we need to make sure we're not being followed, this guy is massively paranoid, and the Order wouldn't even think to look here for us."
 
That, at least, makes sense. She certainly wouldn't normally be caught dead out her among the cattle, but it's a worthwhile sacrifice to finally get rid of this particularly irksome thorn in her side.
 
She's going to need a long shower after this though - she'll be absolutely furious if this doesn't pan out after the sacrifices she's making, and has been making for weeks.
 
"Just stay back. I told him I'd bring you with this time but like I said-"
 
"Paranoid. Got it." She agrees cheerfully. She'd been expecting as much - they wouldn't want her to get a good look at the Order member's face after all. But too bad for them, she has other plans.
 
She waits at the mouth of an alleyway and listens in as Theo meets with someone who she can't see at all from her vantage point - which would have been suspicious if she hadn't already been onto them. Which means this was a last-minute deception, and will be easily disassembled once she has her hands on the informant.
 
The guy tells Theo something vague about spotting a campfire in an area close by the Wye river just off one of the Muggle's highways. Zara has no idea what a 'highway' is, but Theo seems to know, which only further proves his being a Blood Traitor.
 
Theo returns looking annoyed. "Okay, not as helpful as I'd like but I can organize a group to patrol the areas that match that description." He tells her as he moves to start walking back to the Ministry.
 
Zara nods, and then fakes a yawn. "Sounds good. I'm gonna find a quiet place and go home, I'm beat."
 
Theo looks a little concerned, but agrees. "Alright, I'll see you tomorrow."
 
She fakes walking away until he's back out of sight, then beelines for the alleyway again. If his stalling cost her her chance-
 
But no, there's still a figure in there, huddled against the dead end and snickering to himself. He yelps when Zara grabs him by the arm.
 
"Alright, name and allegiance, now." She hisses, pressing her wand into his side like a threat.
 
The guy squeaks pathetically for a moment, and she realizes that he's laughing at her.
 
"Lady if you think you're fooling anyone with that you're nutty." He wheezes, his voice worn and his breath utterly vile. "That ain't no gun."
 
Zara has no idea what a gun is, but she has figured out this guy isn't Order. This guy doesn't even know about magic.
 
So she gives him a small demonstration.
 
"Now then," She says with a grin, standing over his still twitching form, "If you don't want another shot of my friend the Cruciatus Curse then you're going to tell me everything I want to know.
 
The guy breaks easily after that, sobbing out that he's just a homeless man and that Theo had hired him to pretend to be part of a business deal to throw her off his scent. He's a blubbering mess by the end and Zara zaps him again just to shut him up.
 
She strides away from the limp body, rolling the new information around in her head. It isn't exactly what she'd been expecting, but it still proves what she needs it to. Theo never had an informant, so all his bogus information came directly from his own mind. Information that had wasted resources and gotten Snatchers and Deatheaters alike seriously injured. There's no weaseling his way out of this one. Not this time.
 
She apparates home straight from the alley - who cares if she's seen, they'll be ruling all these idiots soon enough - and heads straight up to her room to put together her presentation for Corban Yaxley. She even sends both him and Yurina owls to inform them that she'd like to meet with them the next day to discuss something that can't wait.
 
She'll do everything right, and by this time tomorrow she'll have that traitor Yaxley behind bars, stripped of his wand, and at her mercy.
 
She's looking forward to it. She's got a lot of frustration she wants to work out.
 
Author's Note: Well that was fun! This is, I think, the darkest chapter to date? And it's still January, we've got plenty worse to go! :D Anyway, you're all going to hate me next week probably but don't worry, I won't leave this plot thread hanging for too long xD I'm not that mean.
 
Next Week: A plan is only as good at its execution
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So I'm thinking I might do a final 'afterwords' chapter to share my thoughts and feelings on writing this story, if that's something people would be interested in? I'm also open to answering any lingering questions people might have there as well!

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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2443 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2443 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2443 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
#9
Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
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Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P