Chapter Fifteen

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
December 5-10, 1997
"We are only as strong as we are united, as weak as we are divided"
 
The Order of the Phoenix is, generally speaking, pretty awesome. Kent had spent his first few days as a new recruit sleeping on Laurel and Eric Hobbes' couch while a few other Order members set up defenses around his and Drake's apartment to keep out anyone looking to do harm to either of them. Drake and Evera had set up in Jacob Fawley's place, which Kent hadn't liked considering the romantic history between his sister and his former Gryffindor teammate, but Evera had reported afterwards that Jacob had been a perfect gentleman, and Drake had backed her up.
 
During the week that he was staying with the Hobbes family, Kent had spent most of his time dueling with Laurel to stay sharp, babysitting their five year old daughter Victoria, and learning what exactly his new role is going to be, now that he's rather spectacularly quit his day job.
 
For the most part it's involved trudging around the woods and fighting off Snatchers to protect Muggleborns on the run. Occasionally it means undercover missions trying to locate Deatheater gathering places to try and collect information on what the Dark Lord and his inner circle are up to, since that crowd has been unnervingly quiet since the Ministry takeover.
 
Information gathering outings are rare though, on account of the Order's Ministry insider Kingsley Shacklebolt being the guy primarily in charge of collecting that intel, which makes sense as he's quite good at it.
 
That isn't to say that Kent doesn't have some... critiques of the Order. Now that he's been an active member for just over a month, he can say rather confidently that the leadership of the Order is haphazard at best, and nonexistent at worst. As far as he can tell, Dumbledore's death left a power vacuum that no one really knows how to fill. The best people for the job are all tied up with other things - Kingsley with his spying, McGonagall with Hogwarts, and Snape with being a backstabbing traitor (to quote Nymphdora Tonks) - and while the Weasleys are doing their best to be the primary coordinators, it's clear neither Arthur nor Molly are cut out for the job despite their best efforts.
 
It isn't such a huge deal though - the members of the Order of the Phoenix are all very competent individuals and everyone tends to break into groups of their own accord for missions so the lack of a power hierarchy hasn't stopped them from doing quite a bit of good since Kent joined up. Plus, the lack of bosses means he gets to keep teaming up with Drake and Evera for Snatcher missions, which is a lot of fun.
 
Laurel, he's noticed, usually takes former Gryffindor Quidditch players for her jobs, and the Weasleys all work with each other, with one - two? - major exception that honestly doesn't surprise Kent all that much considering he's heard that the Weasley twins have always been good at making new friends.
 
In this case, the new friend is another 'Ministry Insider' sort who doesn't officially run with the Order but who works closely with them nonetheless. Her name is Zoe Wentworth and she works as a photographer for the Daily Prophet, and as such has access to the news before anyone else does. She uses this access to keep tabs on the Snatchers' successes as well as what the opposition is saying, and she drops by the Weasley house every few weeks to supply the twins with the material. The twins then put it to use in what Kent honestly thinks is the most functional and consistently helpful part of the Order: the Potterwatch.
 
Started by the twins and their best friend and technical director Lee Jordan, the Watch is a secret radio show hosted by the Order that keeps sympathizers aware of everything going on in the wizarding world. Between Zoe's Prophet tip-offs and the intel from regular guest presenter Leona Poole from the Wizarding Wireless Network, the Watch consistently has enough information to broadcast twice a month at least. Kent hasn't seen the setup himself just yet, but he's hopeful he'll get to guest on the show eventually, and before the Weasleys inevitably have to abandon the Burrow and possibly stop Potterwatch broadcasting.
 
Which is Kent's other major contention with the Order: they don't actually have a proper HQ. Laurel had mentioned they used to, but it had been compromised by Yaxley back in September& in a series of events that no one seems to really understand, and now the Order meets in the Burrow bi-monthly to share information and plan attacks against the Dark Lord's forces. It's a piss-poor system in Kent's opinion, especially considering the Weasleys are under watch and will have to go into hiding sooner rather than later, but it's working well enough that he's only mentioned it in passing to Drake and Evera while they're out on raids.
 
Overall though, he can't complain. They've defended countless Muggleborns and put multiple Snatchers into Mungo's where they can't cause any more trouble for at least a few weeks while they recover. He's gotten to crash a Deatheater gathering in Northern Ireland, throwing off a plan to raze a Muggle village and scattering the goons well enough that no attempt has been made against Ireland since.
 
Really, the only thing that's been consistently annoying is the weather.
 
"Ugh, it's raining again?" Drake groans one day as he, Kent, and Evera crouch on a rooftop across from Borgin and Burkes. They're spying on Lucius Malfoy, wh's reappeared after being off the radar for several months, and about thirty minutes into the stake out the sky had opened up. "Isn't December supposed to have snow?"
 
"Too warm for snow." Evera grumbles, holding her wand over her head to create a barrier against the weather. "We did have that flurry last week, but it's weirdly mild this year."
 
"And they say we're going through a global cooling event." Kent jokes lightly. "Well, at least there's no ice up here. That's something."
 
"Ice wouldn't be ruining my hair." Drake says sadly as he finally gets his own barrier up too late to prevent his curly locks from sticking to his face. "I'm going to catch flu this year. It'll be the first time since before Hogwarts I've ever gotten sick. I'm calling it now."
 
Kent laughs. "If you do I'm moving in with Evera." He declares. "I'd like to maintain my health record, thank you very much."
 
"You'd probably be even more at risk with me Kent, Jemma's been crashing in my guest room and she's lugging whatever grossness she runs into at Mungo's around with her." His sister points out cheerfully. She's somehow managed to stay completely dry despite the surprise downpour - even Kent hadn't been fast enough to avoid getting a bit damp, though he's not as drenched as Drake.
 
Kent frowns at the mention of Jemma. "How's she doing?" He asks quietly. He hasn't seen much of his sister's blonde friend since the prisoner release back in October since he hasn't been injured enough to see any of the mediwitches or wizards on the Order's payroll (not that they're getting paid), but Jemma and Evera have been friends for years, so he worries about her as much as he does his flesh-and-blood sister.
 
Evera shrugs. "She didn't say it but I think she moved in with me because her house is too painful to be in alone." She says sadly. "She won't talk to me though, which is annoying. I'm friends with Don too, you know? He's her husband so of course him vanishing is worse for her but that doesn't mean I'm not worried."
 
Kent sighs and looks back to Borgin and Burkes. There's still no sign of Malfoy, which means they should probably dispatch a stealth team later to snoop around the shop - obviously he's doing something in there and whatever it is can't be good for the Order.
 
They squat in silence after that; the only sound is the rain against the rooftop around them as they wait for their quarry to reappear. It takes a good hour and a half before Lucius emerges and wrinkles his nose at the weather.
 
The trio stalk him back to the edge of the alley, and Kent clocks that he's holding a package he hadn't had before just before he spins on his heel and Apparates away.
 
"Welp, that was boring." Evera declares with a slight whine. "I'll report to the Weasleys, you two can head home. Anything specific you want me to say?"
 
They part ways soon after that and Drake and Kent return to their flat. Kent can feel the wards protesting him slightly as they always do these days - he should probably have that looked at by someone but he has no idea who set up the wards. He thinks Bill Weasley is on the team, but he figures there must be others and Bill is rather busy with his new wife these days. Kent wouldn't want to intrude on what little honeymoon time the newlyweds can get.
 
"Shower." Drake declares emphatically before shuffling off to his bathroom, leaving a trail of water behind him.
 
Kent can't help laughing slightly as he dries himself and his shoes off before giving Drake's abandoned boots and the floor the same treatment. Drake is an excellent duelist when on the job, but he seems to forget he has magic the rest of the time.
 
Kent decides to take a shower as well once he's put everything away, and he and Drake spend the remainder of the evening listening to the wireless - Leona is covering a match between the Appleby Arrows and the Wimbourne Wasps which is always a fun game considering the centuries old rivalry between the two teams - and eating Chinese takeout.
 
"Think we'll get another posting tomorrow?" Drake asks hopefully as the game ends and Kent yawns and stretches.
 
Kent shrugs awkwardly, half-draped over the couch so he doesn't really have room to complete the gesture properly. "Probably not, you know that. We get assignments pretty haphazardly. But there's the bi monthly meeting on Sunday so you can look forward to that."
 
Drake groans. "I almost miss paperwork." He mumbles pettily, and Kent laughs.
 
"No you don't. You can't miss what you never did." He teases. "Alright, I'm calling it a night. You staying up?"
 
Drake shrugs. "Not super tired, so probably. G'night Kent."
 
"Night. Don't stay up too long." He says it habitually, something their parents always said to him and Evera that he's since picked up. Drake and Evera have both mockingly called him 'dad' over it more than once, so he's tried to ease up on saying it. But when he's this tired, things slip out.
 
He does hear Drake go into his room before he falls asleep, so at least his advice seems to have been taken. A sleepy Drake makes for an annoying roommate after all.
 
As expected there's no word from the Order the next day, but Evera comes over with Jemma Tremlett in tow and they manage to find things to do to keep themselves occupied.
 
More specifically, Evera also brings Muggle board games over, and figuring out how they work while Jemma giggles unhelpfully behind them keeps them occupied. But it's all fun - Kent had admittedly be a little skeptical of how much enjoyment you could possibly get from a game where you literally just pick up wooden sticks but they end up going seven rounds as he and Drake keep trying - and failing - to defeat Evera. They only stop when Kent notes her ego might explode out of her head if she wins any more games. Jemma and Evera say over for dinner - which means Jemma cooks while scolding him and Drake about how unhealthy eating takeout every night is - and they all listen to Leona's radio show while they eat.
 
"So Jemma, how did you come to be part of the Order? I never asked, and I know you were already joined up when we came in." Kent prompts curiously during a commercial break.
 
Jemma shrugs idly, gesturing at the radio. "Leona contacted me after an early raid went sideways, back in September or so. I'm not all that active with them honestly, I just come in when they ask and I happen to be available. It's gotten pretty busy at Mungo's these days, we had a guy with a stab wound come in a few weeks ago and no one knew what to do with that." She looks half-amused at the story, so Kent assumes the stab-ee was someone who deserved it.
 
"I wonder how Leona joined." Drake muses aloud. "The Order isn't exactly out and about actively recruiting any random person."
 
Evera snorts. "Do you even remember Hogwarts? I'd be more surprised if Leona Poole, information broker extraordinaire, hadn't figured out everything about the Order of the Phoenix and demanded entrance."
 
The three old friends laugh, and Kent smiles and quirks an eyebrow, though he's not quite in on the joke. He knows Leona had been a gossip queen, but she had been in Evera's year so he hadn't really known her. Apparently her information gathering skills are impressive.
 
"Anyway, it feels like all of us are just on call for the Order." Evera sighs. "We're frankly lucky that the Snatchers are as much a disorganized mess as we are."
 
"It's not that bad." Drake protests. "It's tough to fight a whole war when the other side is hiding like a bunch of cowards. The Dark Lord hasn't been seen in months, he's off cowering in the shadows."
 
"He's controlling the Ministry." Kent corrects. "Which is way more dangerous honestly."
 
Evera huffs. "Still, we should brainstorm some ways to up our game. I don't know if you guys noticed but the Snatchers recently have been getting better."
 
Drake grimaces. "And here I was hoping I was just out of practice." He sighs. "Okay, I'm in. Good thing there's a meeting tomorrow, huh?"
 
They chat for a few hours after that before the girls bid their farewells and head back to Evera's apartment while Drake and Kent clean up. They'd come up with a few ideas of how to better coordinate, but they're rough at best and will be difficult to apply to a group as large as the Order has become. Still, it'll be a start.
 
The next day Drake and Kent grab their brooms and cast disillusionments on themselves to fly out to the Burrow for the Order meeting. They don't always attend, but meetings are a set pattern so they always know when one is occurring and can show up if they have something to report.
 
They arrive just past noon and are greeted at the door by Mrs. Weasley, who frets over Drake's lanky figure and drags him to the kitchen to have some lunch while Kent wanders into the living room to see who else has arrived.
 
Bill and Fleur Weasley are on the couch talking to the Hobbes while Victoria totters around their feet. There's thumping coming from upstairs which Kent assumes must mean the twins are home as well, and perhaps Lee Jordan based on how much of a ruckus is being caused.
 
Laurel spots him first and grins, waving him over. "Hey Sylvester, rare to see you here." She observes  cheerfully. "All good with Malfoy?"
 
Kent shrugs. "He's doing something but it's impossible to say what at the moment. I'm more worried about the Snatchers."
 
Eric grimaces from beside his wife. "I concur with that. We need more formalized teams, and somewhere to train."
 
Kent grins. "We had the same thought yesterday." He offers as he takes a seat in one of the armchairs. "Maybe a proper HQ as well."
 
"That's a harder sell." Bill Weasley muses. "As nice as it would be, the charms placed on 13 Grimmauld Place were extremely high level. I'm working on reconstructing them but until we have them solidified there's not much we can do. If we're going to be keeping everything in one location it needs to be properly protected."
 
Kent nods along as Bill is speaking. It makes sense, annoying as that is.
 
Evera arrives shortly after and perches on the arm of Kent's chair, and it seems that's everyone planning to come.
 
"Odd, normally Tonks and Lupin are here as well." Laurel observes, clearly a bit put out at the other couple's absence. "I wanted to see how far along Tonks is now!"
 
"She's over five months now dear, she and Lupin are officially taking time off." Mrs. Weasley scolds slightly as she bustles into the room followed by several plates of snacks. "Too much stress could hurt the baby!"
 
Kent settles back into his seat and is mostly content to listen to the proceedings of the meeting. Laurel reports on the atmosphere at work - she and Eric are some of the few active Order members who also still have day jobs, so they're able to keep a finger on the pulse of general society.
 
"It's tense, but people are starting to settle back down." Laurel sighs. "Now that the bulk of Muggleborns have either been arrested or fled people are content to go back to acting like things are normal."
 
"There's less of that at Mungo's." Eric offers after a giving the group a moment to process his wife's words. "We're constantly seeing injured Snatchers coming in an out of the Emergency Ward. Occasionally we'll get a captured Muggleborn, but it's rare." He doesn't add that any Fugitives caught are usually imprisoned immediately regardless of their condition, assuming they aren't already dead.
 
"There might be an uptick though." Evera says, worrying at her bottom lip. "I did a bit of solo scouting this morning around the north end of the Forest of Dean and the same team of Snatchers we faced off against last week was there again, setting up traps. They're definitely under new management, and whoever it is is giving them proper training. These aren't just a bunch of angry Deatheather wannabes anymore, they're turning into a properly oiled army."
 
Drake frowns. "The exact same team Ev?" He asks doubtfully.
 
Evera gives him an exasperated look. "I wouldn't have said so otherwise Drake." She points out. "So yeah, seems like they have official teams now, probably based on skillset if I were to hazard a guess."
 
"Then we need to start matching teams in the same way." Laurel suggests. "Though it's hard since everyone has such random schedules." She adds with a frown.
 
The bounce ideas around for most of the afternoon while Mrs. Weasley keeps serving food and checking that the wards around the house haven't been disturbed. The twins come down just as things are winding down, both Lee Jordan and Zoe Wentworth in tow.
 
"We're all set to broadcast tomorrow evening." One of the twins reports with a grin. Kent steals a glance at his ears and determines that it's George. "Anything you guys want us to add in?"
 
"Snatchers are getting organized so be more careful around them. They may not tip over so easily anymore." Evera supplies, earning a laugh for Lee.
 
"Nice one, we'll script it in." He promises, and Evera beams.
 
"That would tie in with the uptick in arrests this past week." Zoe says with a frown. "I wish there was some way we could contact the Fugitives directly, let them know what's happening."
 
"It's too risky." Fred says quietly, and clearly this isn't a new conversation. Zoe must know someone on the run.
 
Zoe huffs. "Yeah I know. See you all in a couple weeks."
 
"You're not going to be presenting this time Renegade?" Bill asks lightly.
 
"Just me and Ringer." Lee confirms. "You know, Fred, you could always correspond if you wanted."
 
Fred sticks his tongue out and grins. "Nah man, someone has to be watching the shop, it would be suspicious if we were both gone. Besides no one can come up with a better codename than Rodent, and I'm not using that."
 
Kent shakes his head, his cloak already half-on as he'd been about to leave when the twins had appeared. "I don't know how much use I'd be but feel free to call on me or one of these two if you'd like an inside scoop from a former Hit Wizard." He offers lightly.
 
Lee beams. "I may just take you up on that my good sir."
 
"Sweet! I want to be Radiance!" Evera pipes up.
 
"What would that even mean?" Drake asks in confusion, and Evera smacks him as Kent laughs and bids farewell to the group.
 
He's just about ready to take off - Drake and Evera have already cast their Disillusionments and taken to the air - when Laurel catches up to him.
 
"Hey, just so you know I'll probably be taking a bigger team to sweep the Northern Forest this week. If what Evera said is true, and I'm sure it is, we need to clear out those traps before they're successful. Can I count on you to lend a hand?"
 
Kent punches her shoulder lightly. "You've got all three of us." He promises.
 
She grins. "Great. Good to know I've got people in my corner. And count yourself lucky that you know you've got some too." She adds, looking up to where Drake and Evera had vanished.
 
It isn't until later that he wonders at the phrasing, but at that point it's late and he's tired - he's asleep before he can really think about it.
 
It's another three days before Laurel contacts him, her owl crashing into his wards and nearly killing itself. Drake manages to rescue it by catching it before it can fall too far, but its wing is sprained so the two men scramble to make it a makeshift nest (they really should get an owl at some point since they can't use the Ministry ones anymore) before finally opening up the letter.
 
3 PM, North Forest
 
Kent grins and Drake whoops.
 
"Alright, finally some action!" The brunet cheers, grabbing his wand and his broom before Kent catches him and points at the clock.
 
"It's barely nine AM Drake, cool your jets. We'll Apparate over at two forty-five."
 
Drake grumbles but puts the broom down. But Kent gets it - he knows he's going to be just as antsy waiting to leave.
 
When they finally go to the meeting point Kent is surprised to find that it's a rather large group that's gathered. Evera has beaten them, and she waves them over to where she and Jemma are sipping warm butterbeer on a couple of conjured chairs.
 
"Share." Drake demands immediately, making grabby hands for Evera's mug which she laughingly pulls out of his reach.
 
"You guys excited for this? There's got to be at least twenty people here." She observes brightly. "Jacob and Oliver are around here someone, and that lady from your team who defected with us." She says, poking at her brother. "I didn't recognize anyone else, but I know Laurel is around too obviously."
 
As if summoned, the star Quidditch player appears, auburn hair up in a bun and her expression set into the Game Face Kent knows all too well. She conjures a small ladder so she can stand above the gathered group and within moments of her ascending it the gathered crowd falls silent as she starts to speak.
 
"Alright, all the fighters will be splitting into pairs, all medical aid will remain here under disillusionment. An advance team has scouted for the traps and located about twenty six, so this is going to be a long afternoon. Do not activate the traps while dismantling them if possible - we suspect they may alert the Snatchers if they're tripped. Any questions?"
 
"How are we pairing up?" One of the older witches in the group pipes up curiously.
 
Laurel gives her a steady gaze. "I'm letting you all pick your partners." She says easily. "If you don't know anyone here come see me and we'll pair up the stragglers."
 
The woman seems content with that and links arms with the man next to her, who looks vaguely annoyed.
 
Kent turns to his sister, only to find that she and Drake are already partnered.
 
His sister grins at him unapologetically. "Sorry bro, but we already worked together professionally, it just makes sense." She says cheerfully. "Now go make new friends."
 
Kent rolls his eyes, but honestly he doesn't mind that much and can't say he wasn't expecting it. The two have been best friends for fourteen years - siblings or not Kent can't compete with that.
 
He starts scanning the group for any more familiar faces - Evera had mentioned Jacob Fawley and as annoying as he'd been in school Kent recalls him having amazing reflexes.
 
However, someone else finds Kent before he can find Jacob. A young man with broad shoulders and super short chestnut brown hair saunters up to him with an easy grin.
 
"Hey, Kent Sylvester right?" He asks curiously, and Kent mentally tries to place where he's seen this guy before - he definitely looks familiar, enough so that Kent figures he'll feel stupid when the guy introduces himself.
 
"That would be me." He confirms, and the other man beams.
 
"Great! I'm Oliver Wood, I replaced you on the Gryffindor team my second year. It's great to finally meet you properly. I mean, not as an overenthusiastic eleven-year-old." He corrects, blushing slightly.
 
Yep, Kent feels stupid. He can vaguely remember a young Oliver bounding after him in the hallways of Hogwarts and asking a few million questions a minute about playing Keeper and being Quidditch Captain and lots of other things Kent hadn't had time for when he was trying to study for his NEWTs.
 
"At least you recognize you were overenthusiastic." He says, quirking a grin, and Oliver laughs.
 
"Better late than never. You think you can forgive me enough to team up?"
 
Oliver Wood, Kent soon learns, is an aggressively likable fellow, even if he is still just on this side of too excitable at times.
 
"I found another one!" He shouts as Kent finishes up dismantling a snare the two of them had unearthed about three quarters of an hour into the search. So far things are going well - no Snatchers have surprised them and the teams have reported in fifteen successfully disabled traps so far, with minimal injuries to boot.
 
Of course that's when everything goes sideways. Kent looks up to see where Oliver is located, stupidly assuming he'd gotten the last of the activations removed from the trap that he's holding. He isn't sure what he triggers exactly, but he barely dives out of the way as the trap in his hand activates and starts spitting out thorns.
 
"!" He hisses, whipping out his wand and destroying the thing before it can hurt anyone. But the damage is done - he can hear the cracking of people Apparating in. Obviously the traps were set to alert their creators when they were set off.
 
Kent's Hit Wizard instincts thankfully haven't dulled in the time he's been off the field - things going horribly sideways is something he's trained to be prepared for. As such he's able to deflect the stunner that flies through the air back at the person who threw it before diving into another duel. He may be well trained, but he knows most of the people here aren't, and he'll need to prioritize their safety over taking out any Snatchers.
 
Things are a blur after that, and he does take a few more hits than he'd like - he's used to having someone watching his back.
 
He bites back the bile that threatens to rise up - now is not the time to think about Theo - and spins to face his next opponent only to draw up short.
 
Theodore Yaxley looks just as upset to see him as Kent feels. The two of them stare at each other for what feels like an eternity but Kent knows can't have been more than a second since he has to dodge out of the way of a curse flung by one of the other Snatchers.
 
"You're a Snatcher now Theo? Really?" Kent growls as he and his former parter circle each other.
 
"I'm the leader. You think this group suddenly shapes up without a proper teacher?" Theo fires back, and it's the drawling, lazy tone that Kent had become so familiar with during their school-time Quidditch rivalry. And it hurts to hear that tone, because he'd thought they were past that. But maybe that tone is the real Theo and Kent has been kidding himself this whole time.
 
"Figures you'd pull this. Lucky for me I know your weak points." Kent grins and fires at one of the other duelists, taking her out before she can further injure her opponent. The man smiles weakly at him - the annoyed guy from earlier, but where's his partner? - and limps away, back towards where Kent knows Jemma, Eric, and the two other mediwizards are waiting.
 
"I was top of the class Kent. Even if you know them you can't exploit them." Theo smirks infuriatingly, and suddenly Kent realizes how quiet the woods have gotten. He and Theo seem to be the only two still fighting, though neither of them have actually thrown a spell at the other, now that he thinks about it.
 
"Kent!" It's Drake's voice, higher than it should be and scared. "Kent it's-" He stumbles to a halt when he sees Theo.
 
"Looks like your team turned tail." Kent taunts. "Why don't you go join them?"
 
"Looks like your team took enough of a beating to know not to cross us again." Theo returns sharply, eyeing Drake suspiciously. "Until next time Kent."
 
Kent glares at the spot for a long moment after his former partner disapparates until he feels Drake grab his arm and yank weakly.
 
"Kent... I..." He looks lost, and Kent immediately turns to him.
 
"Hey, are you hurt? What's going on?" He demands gently, looking over his roommate worriedly.
 
Drake shakes his head mutely and tugs Kent back out of the forest.
 
The group is a mess. Laurel is nursing a dislocated shoulder, Oliver Wood has an impressive amount of blood staining his hip though he seems to have been stabilized, and the annoyed guy's partner has a black eye and a gash on her forehead that's still stubbornly leaking despite Eric's attempts to stem it.
 
But there are three figures who draw his attention. Jemma is crouched down beside two figures who are lying prone on the frosty ground. He can see the pale face of Jacob Fawley and the blonde shock of hair beside him is-
 
"No." Kent breathes, feeling like something has grabbed his gut and squeezed. He stumbles over to Jemma, dropping to the ground next to her, ignoring the blood that soaks into his knees. "No." He repeats weakly.
 
"I'm sorry." Jemma sound exhausted. "I couldn't save her."
 
The blank eyes of his little sister stare up at him. Evera is gone.
 
Author's Note: ... I'm sorry.
 
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So I'm thinking I might do a final 'afterwords' chapter to share my thoughts and feelings on writing this story, if that's something people would be interested in? I'm also open to answering any lingering questions people might have there as well!

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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2436 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2436 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2436 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
#9
Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
luv_kero
2436 streak #10
Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P