Chapter Eight

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
October 21-23, 1997
"The Ministry has fallen"
 
Kent Sylvester is not a stupid man, despite what some of his friends and coworkers might imply (usually jokingly, though he's not sure about some of the older trainers). He's a bit stubborn, definitely, and enjoys an adrenaline rush just fine but what self-respecting Hit Wizard doesn't? Neither of those things mean he's oblivious to the eyes watching him at every hour of the day, waiting for him to slip up and show his true loyalties.
 
It's been over two months now since the Ministry fell, and though it was mostly a quiet takeover Kent can see it in the little things. The biggest of which, for him, is the fact he hasn't been dispatched on a mission since July. Under Scrimgeour the entirety of the Auror branch was constantly in motion, constantly following new leads on Dark activities or hunting down Azkaban escapees. 
 
Now with Thicknesse the entire Law Enforcement Department has practically ground to a halt - only the necessary maintenance branches are still running as normal. Even the Patrol has been hijacked by the crazy Japanese lady for her Muggleborn hunting group, leaving actual criminals to run about causing havoc unchecked. There had been three fires in Diagon Alley this week alone that had raged needlessly out of control for hours before being reined in and doused.
 
For two months it's felt like the Department has been holding it's breath, and Kent officially feels like his lungs are about to burst. The sole thing that's stopped him so far from committing some grand act of rebellion and vanishing into the night is the message he'd gotten a little over a week after the Ministry had fallen.
 
When the time comes, we will call on you. Until then, stay low and stay ready. Listen for the magpie's theft.
 
The letter had been slipped under his door, and he knows the handwriting, otherwise he'd be suspicious. But Laurel Kiddell - Hobbes, whatever, he'll probably never get used to her new last name - had never steered him wrong in her three years as his Quidditch Captain back at Hogwarts, so he trusts her now as well.
 
Still, the waiting is slowly killing him, and after an incident the week before he's about ready to burst.
 
"Breathe dude, you look ready to explode." His roommate informs him one morning as they get ready to head into work. Drake Jarvis is Kent's little sister Evera's best friend and a fellow Hit Wizard. Initially Drake and Evera had both been bunking with Kent, supposedly just as a stepping stone to getting on their own feet, but while Evera had indeed packed up and gotten her own place a little over a year ago now, Drake has utterly failed to give any indication he's even looking for alternative living conditions.
 
"Like you can talk, you nearly got yourself suspended last week." Kent counters pointedly. "You know we're being watched and you still tried to initiate a disapproved investigation." Not that Kent can blame him - he'd been furious as well when their request to open a missing persons case on Donaghan Tremlett had been rejected by Yaxley.
 
Tremlett not only is a very well-known figure in the Wizarding world, being the bassist for the famous Weird Sisters, he's also a close friend of theirs, having married Evera's other best friend Jemma two years ago. Kent honestly hadn't thought the Muggleborn Registration Commission would be able to touch him considering his celebrity status, but two weeks ago he'd vanished from his and Jemma's apartment, leaving her distraught and begging her three Hit Wizard friends for help (a disturbing enough sight on it's own even without the distressing context - Jemma has always been startlingly put together, even back when she was a tiny first year).
 
"Being watched maybe." Drake sighs, grimacing at his cereal. "Still not sold on that you know, nothing has actually happened since the regime change. I know Yaxley is a supervisor and obviously everything is going to high hell but other than not getting assignments we don't really have any more supervision than we did before."
 
Kent raises an eyebrow. "How you passed your exams I'll never know." He teases lightly, though there's little levity behind it. "Didn't you notice that all the trainers and captains we've been working with since August were Slytherins in school?"
 
Drake raises an eyebrow. "So? Travers was in my year and sure she wasn't great but she's a good worker. And Shacklebolt is the most respected Captain in an age, bar none. And that's by every House - heck, I'm pretty sure Tonks might've actually forgotten which House he used to be in."
 
"Tonks also married a werewolf who's suspected to be working with Fenrir's pack." Kent points out wryly. He isn't completely sold on that bit of trivia himself, but the Auror rumor mill rarely produces material that doesn't have at least a little bit of basis in fact.
 
Drake just scoffs and goes back to scarfing down his breakfast.
 
They go into work together, though Drake breaks off towards one of the other training rooms once they reach the second floor - he and Evera are on a different squad than Kent is, and frankly he's rather thankful for that. He'd probably end up distracted in the field worrying about the two of them doing something stupid and get himself killed, knowing his luck.
 
"Lunch in the Alley today?" Drake checks before they part ways.
 
"Bring my sister, I'd like to be reminded what her face looks like." Kent grins, and Drake laughs before waving him off. Kent heads to the senior training room to meet up with his own team and get a few warmup drills in before they start in on whatever BS paperwork Yaxley has lined up for them to do today.
 
He's one of the first ones to arrive - only two other people are in the room when he opens the door and one of them is the Trainer for the day - Fulton if he remembers correctly, one of the older Trainers, and, as Kent had pointed out to Drake, a Slytherin.
 
The other person there is also a former snake, but Kent likes this one a whole lot more than Fulton.
 
"Heya partner." He grins, dropping down next to Theodore Yaxley and starting to stretch.
 
Theo glances over and offers a lopsided grin of his own. It had taken some time to work past Theo's outer defences and school-hardened House biases, but as it turns out he's a pretty chill guy underneath everything - certainly not the worst partner he could have. Of course, with everything that's gone down Kent isn't sure if he completely trusts his partner anymore, especially considering who Theo is related to.
 
"No chance you managed to convince your uncle to give us something interesting to do today?" Kent continues talking, used to holding up the conversation between himself and Theo this early in the morning - his partner is not and early bird by any stretch.
 
Theo half-shrugs and the grin drops into a grimace. "Don't have much control over him." He points out wryly. "There is a hierarchy in the family you know."
 
"Weird- pureblood politics." Kent replies without missing a beat, and Theo huffs out a laugh that's trying very hard to not be a laugh.
 
"Don't let the boss hear you say that." He mumbles, turning back to his stretches.
 
Kent doesn't mind Theo's quieter nature (in the workplace at least, he definitely gets louder when they go out for drinks after hours) - he himself rather enjoys talking so their dynamic works quite well for them. While they aren't the top pair in their division they rank consistently well in their evaluations which is necessary for their line of work.
 
So Kent fills the space between them with idle chatter, mostly about the Quidditch season that had started a few weeks back since he knows that's a topic both of them are interested in - technically they had met when on opposing teams back in Hogwarts. Theo occasionally drops an opinion or observation but is mostly content to let Kent prattle on.
 
Eventually the rest of the squad shows up and they get to actually training. A lot of their team are Gryffindors and Kent catches Fulton glaring at people's turned backs more than once.
 
Kent really doesn't think it's just because Fulton is a grump.
 
Training goes a bit long that day so they don't get much paperwork done before lunch break starts but it's still more desk work than Kent ever wanted to deal with in his life.
 
He invites Theo to join him for lunch, which he often does and has continued to do to maintain a level of normalcy with the other, but as usual his parter refuses and heads for the employee lunch room. Kent just shrugs and swings by the junior level to pick up Drake and Evera.
 
"Jemma might join us today, if she doesn't have an emergency." Evera announces as they head out. "She owled me this morning about it."
 
"When does Mungo's Trauma Ward not have an emergency?" Drake points out dryly. "Don was the one who used to drag Jemma out to socialize, remember?"
 
Evera winces, and Kent quickly jumps into the conversation.
 
"Did you two hear about the massive row in the Patrol HQ yesterday? Brown said that Nakayashi and one of those Snatchers really got into it over something."
 
Evera snorts. "Didn't hear about it big bro, actually heard it. And Nakayashi didn't do any yelling, that woman is terrifyingly calm in every situation." She shudders. "I hate how often she's in Patrol HQ these days, it's right next to our primary training room. Anyway, it was that Wong girl she got in a fight with, one of Moldypant's people that's moved into the Ministry. Wong was whining about Nakayashi not taking things seriously - it was kind of pathetic if I'm honest."
 
Drake laughs. "It was, but it's pretty common. Wong is loud and angry about pretty much everything."
 
"I find that's typical with teenagers." Kent jokes, finally placing the name 'Wong' with the face of an Asian nineteen year old who'd started working out of the Auror department only two weeks before as part of the new Fugitive Recovery Unit, more commonly referred to as the Snatchers (when no one from the Unit is around to hear it, anyway).
 
Lunch at least stays light after that, the conversation drifting primarily into Quidditch as they're all former players and current enthusiasts of the game. Laurel's name comes up a few times and Kent tamps down on the urge to say something referencing the note - for one thing it could give him away if anyone is watching them, and for another Evera and Drake don't know about it so it would fall flat anyway.
 
The rest of the day absolutely drags on, the one bright point coming when Kingsley Shacklebolt comes by to check in on their team and chats with Kent for a few minutes before moving on. Then it's back to the grind and Kent thanks every deity he can think of when five finally rolls around and he's able to bolt out the door.
 
Drake is already at the lift when Kent walks up. "Evera headed home, but she said to call you a dunderhead and ask how paperwork was." He declares solemnly and Kent can only laugh, too pleased by the workday being over to rise to his sister's second-hand taunting.
 
"Evera's insults are slipping, I found yesterday's farewell far more inventive." He declares as the roommates descend in the lift. "Where should we get tonight's takeout?"
 
They debate the pros and cons of having Italian versus Chinese for dinner that night, and Kent's Italian wins out when he points out they had some sort of Asian food for five days straight the week before. He knows Drake doesn't really care since it's Kent's turn to pay - the debate is just a typical Tuesday routine at this point of their cohabitation.
 
They swing by their usual Italian place - a great mom and pop type restaurant on the Muggle side of London - and take their food back to the flat where they immediately put on the radio to the sports channel.
 
Drake laughs when he hears the voice that comes through. "Well , looks like Leona finally made it onto WWW. Good for her, she never shut up about that in school."
 
Leona Poole had been in Drake, Jemma, and Evera's year in school, and she'd been Quidditch announcer during Kent's final year so he actually does remember her.
 
"Good for her." He agrees idly, only half-paying attention to the reports once he realizes Leona isn't covering an actual game but is debating statistics for upcoming ones with whoever her cohost is.
 
He's only picking up on every few words for a while, but then Leona says something that latches onto his brain and demands attention.
 
"I'm just saying Henry, I think the Montrose Magpies could steal the victory from the Ballycastle Bats next week." Leona declares, some of her inflection sounding a bit weird but not enough that a normal listener would register it. But Kent does.
 
He's reread Laurel's letter a dozen times at least since receiving it, and he'd always wondered at the odd last sentence. Listen for the magpie's theft.
 
Leona just dropped the code phrase, and Kent feels something in his gut spike hot and excited. This is finally it - whatever he's been waiting for will be happening soon.
 
Drake glance over at him oddly. "You that excited about a Montrose win? I thought you were a steadfast Arrows fan."
 
Kent blinks, remembering that Drake has never read the letter and he probably looks a bit insane to his roommate right at this moment. "Ah, no, something else." He grins over, mentally debating whether to tell Drake the whole truth yet. He knows he will eventually - Drake will want to help, as will Evera - but the other Hit Wizard isn't always the most subtle person in the world. The longer he goes not knowing details the less likely it is he'll accidentally give something away. "I'll tell you later."
 
Drake just raises an eyebrow and turns back to demolishing his food. Kent eats at a more sedate pace - his stomach is still churning in excitement and he doesn't want to throw up.
 
That night he pulls out the letter again and runs a finger over the sentence, wondering if there's some sort of magic code he can unlock now that he's heard the phrase. He grabs for his wand to start checking when a blue lynx bursts into his room. He blinks in surprise but his training stops him from physically startling.
 
He of course recognizes that the animal is a Patronus, though he isn't familiar with the caster (Laurel's is a goose so it definitely isn't her). Whoever it is though, he bets they're with Laurel and presumably Leona in whatever rebellion currently being cooked up.
 
He settles on his bed and focuses on the lynx as it likewise takes on a sitting position in midair before it's jaw drops open and a familiar voice pours out.
 
"In two days' time there will be a transfer of captured Muggleborns to Azkaban. Both Hit Wizard teams will be on the transfer, and there will be a bid to free the prisoners by the Order of the Phoenix. Recruit anyone you think is trustworthy and be prepared to fight your former coworkers." Kingsley Shacklebolt is, even in Patronus form, all business and Kent respects that. For his part he's surprised he hasn't vibrated through his bed in his excitement. He definitely knows two people who he'll be recruiting onto the team.
 
He falls back onto his bed as the Lynx vanishes and lets his mind whirl. The Order of the Phoenix sounds familiar, but he can't quite place the name at the moment. Still, he has something else he needs to do before he latches on to obsessing over it. Pulling out his wand he summons his own Patronus.
 
The white stallion bursts forth with some effort - Kent hadn't gotten his Patronus corporeal until his very last year of Hit Wizard training and even now he has some difficulty with it - and immediately lunges at his closet before realizing there are no dementors to fight, at which point it turns to Kent and gives him what he would swear to be an annoyed look.
 
"Sorry buddy, just need to get a message to Evera." He tells it, and then quickly repeats what Kingsley's Patronus had told him - plus mentioning that he'll tell Drake tomorrow after work - before sending his stallion off to his sister.
 
He spends the rest of the night barely able to sleep from a mix of excitement and continual attempts at trying to remember where he'd heard the name 'Order of the Phoenix' before. It comes to him just before he falls asleep: the Order had been Dumbledore's resistance force again Voldemort in the first war.
 
Kent dreams that night of Dumbledore rising from the ashes and smiting the Dark Lord once again. He wakes up feeling especially energized.
 
That morning Evera is waiting for them by the lifts as they reach the Ministry atrium. "Morning boys!" She says cheerfully. "Just wanted to confirm I got your owl Kent."
 
"Owl?" Drake asks in confusion.
 
Evera waves him off lazily. "Mum's birthday is next week, we're coordinating gifts." She explains easily, grinning at her best friend. Kent is just glad she obviously agrees with keeping Drake out of the loop until the last possible second.
 
That day in training feels a lot more draining than usual, not in the least because Kent spends a good third of the class debating with himself if he trusts Theo enough to talk to him. Sure he's Slytherin, and he's a Yaxley, but he hasn't really shown signs of being that loyal to his uncle. And beyond that, they've been partners for years - Kent has repeatedly trusted Theo with his life on past raids. It feels strange to keep him out of the know now.
 
But ultimately he says nothing, despite a deep, gnawing want to. For all Theo hasn't shown loyalty to his family line, he hasn't shown any indication he disagrees with them either.
 
Kent collects two other Hit Wizards for the operation and at lunch Evera mentions that she'd spoken with four people herself. That puts nine out of twenty four people on the transport on their side. It's not a majority, but Kent imagines some member of the Order will show up to help, and there will likely be some non-rebellers who simply won't fight back.
 
"You've been quiet today." Theo observes when Kent gets back from lunch.
 
Kent quickly pulls on a grin. "Did you want to hear all about the wonders of gift coordination? My sister has absolutely terrible gifting ideas so I'm basically buying for both of us right now. You're lucky you don't have any siblings."
 
Theo eyes him a moment longer before giving a half grin. "It was pretty great being first in everything." He agrees with the usual edge of arrogance that his voice never quite seems to drop.
 
Kent does make a more concerted effort to chat with Theo after that - they always banter during the afternoon if they're stuck on desk duty (and lately they always are) and it wouldn't do to make anyone suspicious of his change in behavior. He's pretty sure he manages just fine up until Theo snags his arm just as they're getting ready to leave for the day.
 
"I'm not supposed to tell you this." He says in a low voice, and the knot in Kent's gut loosens infinitesimally. If Theo suspects something he probably wouldn't have opened with that, "But Uncle Corban says we're getting to stretch our legs tomorrow. So you're welcome." He flashes a cocky grin and Kent slaps him on the back with a laugh.
 
"Way to go Theo! I knew nepotism would work in our favor eventually!"
 
Theo snorts. "I got this job before he became Head. In fact, I recall beating your arse in every single exam during training." He snarks, and Kent is only too happy to jab back now that he knows Theo isn't suspicious.
 
It isn't until he gets home an hour later that he wonders if Theo had told him because he knows. Kingsley is a Slytherin and it seems like he's running things on this operation - maybe Theo is part of it as well? Kent hopes so, he'd hate to have to break in a new partner when his current one works so well.
 
He does finally tell Drake what's up over dinner that night, and his roommate goes on a rant about not being trusted. Kent just shoots back that he'd promised to move out ages ago so does he really expect anyone to trust him after that?
 
Kent gets a pillow in his face for the comment but it's well worth the look on Drake's.
 
They're both up early the next morning, neither able to sleep long under the force of their excitement. They end up tossing a Quaffle - Transfigured from a plastic bowl by Kent - back and forth to work off some of the excess energy while waiting for the sun to rise.
 
"Dude I feel like I'm going to explode. Who else is in on this?" Drake asks as he attempts a trick shot and nearly takes out a picture from Jemma's wedding.
 
Kent hums, moving to pick up the Quaffle from the floor. "Inside there's Harvey and Bering from my team, and Evera said she got four from your group but I don't know who. Outside I know Laurel is in on it and your friend Leona as well." He doesn't mention Kingsley - Drake still has a few hours to play dumb at work and Kent figures if he does manage to slip he probably shouldn't have the name of the probable insider for the Order.
 
"Leona wasn't my friend she was a menance. And very helpful, I'm not surprised she's in on this." Drake declares. "And I think I know who Evera would talk to but we're all playing dumb today anyway, right? At least until things go down?" He frowns as he catches Kent's return pass. "How will we know?"
 
Kent can only shrug. "It's Laurel and Kingsley. I'd be more impressed if there aren't twenty plans upon plans for every possible contingency." He points out. "We'll know."
 
"I joined the Quidditch team under you, not Laurel." Drake points out. "But I'll take your word for it."
 
The sun at least is up now, and Kent is finally feeling hungry so he makes them both breakfast and they head into work just a little bit earlier than normal. Kent is pretty sure no one will notice.
 
"You're early." Theo greets him immediately when he walks out onto the mats.
 
Kent grins sheepishly. "Okay, I might've been so excited last night I woke up early." He admits.
 
Theo rolls his eyes. "Gryffindors." He grumbles, and Kent just laughs. He eyes his partner carefully while they stretch and continue chatting, hoping to catch some sort of signal that Theo is on their side, that sharing the information about their job today was... something, at least. Kent is pretty sure they're friends now, even if it's an unconventional friendship at best.
 
The rest of their team file in soon after nine and after their morning training routine they're informed about the transfer job. Kent elbows Theo lightly and gives him a grin, which is wryly returned.
 
It isn't until they're outside and ready to collect the cargo that Kent actually starts to feel nervous. Not for himself or his coconspirators - they can all handle themselves just fine. He's worried for the Muggleborns.
 
The look weary, hungry, and generally not in any state to get caught in the middle of a firefight. If things go badly...

Kent shakes his head and forces himself to focus. Laurel and Kingsley will have a plan. He has to trust that.
 
The Hit Wizard teams line up in their usual prisoner transfer formations - it's not the first time they've had to guard high-risk criminals after all, though normally those people have been fairly convicted.
 
Kent takes a few steadying breaths and ignores the curious side-glance he gets from Theo, who is, as always, standing next to him in the formation. 
 
The first twenty minutes are standard procedure - it isn't until they're nearing the warp point where they'll be magically transported onto Azkaban that the Order makes its move.
 
Kent nearly misses it - the flash of magic, a muted crack of Apparation. Without his training he might have been caught off guard.
 
As it is, the entire is made up of people with his exact training, so nobody misses it, and within seconds the air lights up with spells.
 
Kent fires a few harmless stunners into the sky before spinning and firing a distinctly less harmless one straight at Fulton, who was leading the . The man crumples instantly, and Kent's turn serves as a trigger as the other members of the resistance begin firing on their teammates.
 
It's absolute chaos for a while, but Kent does register the Muggleborns being herded away by a woman with a familiar auburn pixie cut. Once the last of the prisoners is racing away she runs over to Kent and starts assisting him with driving off the remaining enemies.
 
"Morning Sylvester, nice form." Laurel Kiddell - Hobbes, his brain reminds him - is wearing a facemask and has charmed her eyes green, but Kent could recognize that voice anywhere after years of hearing it shouting on the Quidditch pitch. She grins at him as she tosses up a protection charm around them. "We just need to keep these guys busy for a bit longer and then come find me or one of the other resistors and we'll get you out."
 
He nods to acknowledge the order and she's off again.
 
A few more minutes of fighting, and then Kent sees Drake grabbed by one of the outside Order members and be Apparated away. He takes the cue for what it is and scans for his own exit.
 
Instead his eyes land on a familiar figure, still fighting hard and looking murderous as he bears down on Elizabeth Harvey, who's struggling to both maintain her shield charm and fight back.
 
Kent feels something drop in his stomach even as he fires a stunner at Theodore Yaxley, forcing his partner - former parter - to turn from Harvey and face Kent instead.
 
"Somehow I'm not surprised," The blonde man growls, "That even after all these years you're crap at following orders."
 
"Somehow I am surprised that after all these years you still can't think for yourself." Kent fires back, internally wincing at the phrasing of the sentence. Too vulnerable - a good Hit Wizard would push the advantage, and Theo is a great one. So Kent doesn't let him respond. "It's crazy Theo, I really thought you were a good person. My mistake I guess." He levels a blasting curse at Theo's feet and has latched onto a nearby Order member before the other has recovered his footing. "See you around."
 
The last thing he sees before he's Side-Along Apparated is Theo's glare.
 
The world reforms around him and they're in a house that he doesn't recognize, but he does spot several familiar faces in the area as masks are removed.
 
Harvey is talking with Nymphadora Tonks while the obviously pregnant woman heals a cut on Harvey's arm. Oliver Wood is perched on a couch arm chatting animatedly with Jacob Fawley, who Kent hasn't seen since school but who's looking good despite the obvious recently healed gash on his forehead. And Bill Weasley is seated on the stairs talking quietly with Laurel, who catches Kent staring and waves at him with a grin.
 
He waves back and then scans the room again for the two people he's most anxious to see are safe. He finds Drake and Evera crouched in a corner, giggling slightly and looking rather punch-drunk but uninjured.
 
"Well that was a rush." Evera declares when she spots her brother walking over. "I got a Bat-Bogey Hex on Johnson right before I left, he looked furious."
 
Kent gives her a grin that feels a bit flat. He doesn't know Johnson, but he's glad his sister apparently enjoyed the fight, even if in the aftermath he's mostly feeling drained.
 
Surprisingly it's Drake who picks up on it. "Dude, you okay? You look bummed for someone who was just on the winning side."
 
"Theo wasn't." Is all Kent says, and while Drake frowns he sees understanding light up his sister's eyes.
 
"Maybe he'll come around, you don't know." She offers quietly. "You two were a good team, that sort of bond doesn't just vanish no matter what the circumstances are."
 
"Sure Ev. You two aren't hurt at all, right?"
 
"Jemma fixed me up." Drake says. "Did you know she was recruited ages ago and never told us anything? If her husband wasn't MIA I'd be rather angry with her."
 
Kent lets his sister and his roommate continue chatting around him as he takes in the room. If he's honest, despite the successful transfer interruption he doesn't feel like they've won all that much. The Ministry is still going to arrest Muggleborns, the Snatchers are still out there hunting down the ones that escape. This feels like a temporary fix for a much deeper issue.
 
Still, he reminds himself firmly that it's better than nothing. And now that he's here and can begin openly working with the Order, he can help them with the more permanent fixes.
 
He sighs. War is far less glorious than he'd thought it would be - but someone has to fight it, and he supposes they have to start somewhere. 
 
Author's Note: URGH this chapter was hard OTL Here I was thinking "It's Kent! He's from H:aH! I'm used to him!" but NOPE that made it harder because I had to reintroduce SO MUCH this chapter OTL I am very sorry if things are confusing or characters feel rushed in, I swear that won't happen again OTL ;;
 
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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2435 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2435 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2435 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
#9
Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
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Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P