Chapter Fourteen

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
November 19-22, 1997
"There is only power, and those too weak to seek it"
 
Zara Wong apparates back to her London flat soaking wet and ready to murder the first thing she sees. She's been a part of the Muggleborn Retrieval Initiative, or Fugitive Recovery Unit, or whatever they're calling it these days (she's heard whispers in the halls calling them the Snatchers, and she actually quite likes that one. It's suitably intimidating) for two months and the entire operation is a disorganized mess that's had far more failures that successes (see above name change that was both pointless and a waste of time).
 
And it's all the fault of the idiot they'd put in charge. Zara makes a face just thinking about the tiny Japanese that's supposed to be her boss (gag). Yurina has never once been out in the field, always too busy goofing off at the Ministry to bother actually doing her job. Not that Zara is all that surprised, really, considering the woman isn't from England. Of course she wouldn't bother putting in proper effort for a country that isn't her own.
 
She hears shuffling from one of the hallways and spins to glare at whatever it is until a chunky black tabby plods into view.
 
Zara huffs out a breath and finally puts her wand away, dropping her dripping cloak onto the floor to dry later and leaning over to pick up her cat. Princess purrs sleepily and bats at her nose, and Zara finally cracks a small smile.
 
"Hey beautiful, you here to comfort your mom after a rough day at work?" She coos. "Of course you are, you're the greatest kitty in the world, aren't you Princess? You want some special wet food?"
 
"You spoil her far too much." A voice reprimands her as she steps into the kitchen, setting Princess down so she can fetch the food.
 
Zara looks over at the stout little woman standing by the stove, clearly halfway though preparing dinner. "Oh mother, I do not. She deserves every bit of love she gets."
 
Huiying Wong purses her lips in clear disagreement as she watches Zara spoon cat food into one of their nicest bowls and place it on the floor for the cat. "Did I hear you mention work went poorly?" She says after a moment of watching the tabby demolish the meal.
 
Zara groans and drops herself at the table, finally kicking off her shoes so she can put her feet up, ignoring her mother's disapproving stare. "Horrid. I wasn't with Rowle at least, the absolute idiot, but the woman I was working with today let our quarry escape like an absolute rookie. It feels like I'm the ony competent person ever out in the field, but no one listens to my orders because I'm too young or whatever." She glowers at her damp socks. "Honestly we'd have all the Fugutives rounded up and in Azkaban where thieves and Mudbloods like them belong if I was in charge, but no Yaxley picks perfect princess Ga Mui Yurina just because the Dark Lord liked her work on something entirely unrelated."
 
Her mother huffs an amused breath and flicks her wand at the counter to move the dinner process to the next step before taking a seat beside her daughter, magically pushing Zara's feet of the table as she does so. "Tell me about your day then." She instructs briskly, settling back in the chair.
 
Zara wrinkles her nose and places two fingers on her wand so she can finally magically dry herself off before slumping further into the chair and rattling off the details of their completely botched assignment.
 
"For one thing everyone I've worked with is untrained and unmarked - I'm the only real Deatheater out there in the field but since none of them have learned basic respect they don't get that they have to listen to me. And then they go off and clomp about, make enough noise to scare of anyone in a twenty foot radius. And Yaxley wonders why our numbers haven't been great." She grimaces. "Though he hasn't given us much of a budget either, which isn't fair at all. I'd like to see him try to do half as well as I do with what I've got to work with."
 
"Well it sounds like you should talk to Yaxley." Her mother says idly. "Inform him of all this. In fact, is that little Corban Yaxley you're speaking of? I recall him from the first war, the man is desperate to prove himself and his family. If he thinks something will make him look bad he'll fix it, no questions asked."
 
Zara snorts. "I don't know if I'd call him little mother." She smirks. "But that certainly sounds like him. Perhaps I'll take an audience with him tomorrow, show him exactly what a mistake he made putting Yurina in charge of something a true English Deatheater ought to be leading."
 
Her mother smiles proudly. "I know you will dear. Now, you practice on me. Pretend I'm Yaxley, what are you going to say?"
 
Zara clears and quickly sits up as her mother stands and returns to monitoring the kitchen utensils as they prepare dinner.
 
"Mr. Yaxley I am here to speak to you about the Fugitive Recovery Unit and the utter failure of the current-"
 
"No. Again." Her mother interrupts, and Zara scowls at her back but complies. Her mother has never steered her wrong, and she knows Huiying only wants to see her succeed.
 
She thinks over what she had said and tries again. "Mr. Yaxley, I am here to speak to you..."
 
It goes on for over an hour, Huiying regularly cutting Zara off and having her rework the speech over and over again. It's infuriating, but when her mother finally lays out their dinner on the table, nodding in approval at Zara's latest attempt, the young witch has to admit that her pitch sounds quite good. Yaxley won't be able to ignore her request regardless of her age or his attitude.
 
This is why her mother is the best.
 
The next day she puts on her cleanest, darkest robes and strides purposefully through the Ministry to the Department of Magical Law Enforcement, her speech on loop in her head as her six-inch heels clip determinedly along the marble floors. The robe is parted slightly at the top, showing off her best assets in a way she knows is getting her looks from the male Ministry workers she strides past.
 
Good. Attention is exactly what she's going for.
 
She brushes straight past Yaxley's frazzled secretary and shoves open the door to his office, slamming it behind her just to be sure her entrance has been heard and noted. She meets the annoyed gaze over the desk with a quirk of her lips and a challenging eyebrow raise.
 
"Good morning Mr. Yaxley, I'm here to speak to you about the Fugitive Recovery Unit. I would suggest you hear me out as the current numbers from the group, which I'm sure you're aware of, are an utter embarrassment on this department."
 
Yaxley gawks at her, glaring, but Zara's mother is right - he can't argue against what she's said, which means she gets to keep going.
 
So far so perfect, not that she'd expect anything less from herself. She is a superior being after all, and the hard-won mark on her left forearm is proof of that.
 
"Naturally, if you were in charge of the Unit directly it would be running flawlessly as we both know, but as you have to organize the entire Department it's quite unfair to expect you to run everything alone - one would think you could rely on a fellow Deatheater to coordinate a team as simply as the Recovery Unit."
 
Add on some flattery - Zara's known that trick since she was five and it works just as well now as it ever has in the past. Yaxley is nodding along slightly, probably unaware he's even doing it, which is again, perfect.
 
Zara nods gravely, matching Yaxley's movements. "Thus I am here to propose a shift in leadership for the Unit. Clearly Yurina intends to make a joke of your otherwise brilliantly run department - as a member of the Unit I've seen first hand that she puts coordinating us at the bottom of her list of priorities. She prefers messing with Ministry workers and planning for our inevitable European expansion, which is of course well and good but a shame she'd try to make you look bad just because her own Department is rather immobile at the moment."
 
Yaxley is scowling now, but not at Zara. Rather, his eyes are unfocused and gazing at the wall behind her, and Zara knows with that that she's won. Yaxley hates Yurina, same as many of the other Deatheaters, and by pinning blame on her Zara now has him on her side. The enemy of my enemy and all.
 
"Perhaps if a powerful man closer to the action were to explain to the Dark Lord how difficult it's been for Yurina to balance the Unit with her other duties, that members of the Unit itself have spoken up about not having clear directions, surely our great Lord and Master will see fit to let you choose the new leadership."
 
Yaxley smirks at her. "I assume you think that leadership should be you, Ms. Wong?" He drawls.
 
Zara preens slightly that he knows her - it's to be expected, really, but often times the higher ranked Deatheaters from the first war look down on the new generation. "I've worked in the field repeatedly and have an in-person understanding of how a lot of the other Unit members work. I already have ideal team ups written up for submission and several tactics that have proven effective in the field before. I think I certainly would be a logical choice Mr. Yaxley. I want this Unit to thrive, and I want those filthy Mudbloods out of the public where they can damage good wizarding society. So yes, Mr. Yaxley, I do think the leadership should be me."
 
He leans back in his chair, fingers steepled, clearly considering her proposal. "Submit these team ups to Ms. Nakayashi before the end of the day, and inform her that if she hasn't improved her numbers by week's end I will be reassigning the organization of the Unit elsewhere."
 
Zara nods briskly, keeping her expression professionally neutral until she's exited the office and gotten halfway back to the lifts, at which point she breaks out into a grin.
 
Perfect. Absolutely perfect. By week's end she'll be calling the shots and she'll finally be able to prove to all the upstart fuddy-duddy old men exactly why she should be far more feared than she is currently.
 
She doesn't actually have her own desk at the Ministry, just the room in the Department of Magical Law Enforcement that's been dedicated for the Recovery Unit's use, so her proposal is sitting at home on her desk. She Floos straight there and rushes to her room to find the parchment.
 
Her mother is standing at the bottom of the stairs when she reappears, triumphantly clutching the team list.
 
"Well?" Huiying prompts, raising an eyebrow pointedly.
 
"It went brilliantly mother, I'll be in charge by the weekend. Thank you for your help." She adds, pecking the tiny woman on the cheeks. "I have to get back now, Yurina probably has me paired up with more idiots to go traipsing about the woods with this afternoon. See you for supper."
 
She returns to the Ministry and first checks the Department of International Affairs on the off chance Yurina is actually where she's supposed to be for once. Having crossed that off the list she heads to the lift and begins on the third floor before working her way up. Yurina tends to wander the Ministry during the day, and honestly Zara can appreciate the fun the other woman has putting the sniveling Ministry dogs in their place but it's still rather boorish in her opinion. Zara prefers destroying her enemies physically where she can, and putting them to use when that's more applicable.
 
The Department of Magical Accidents and Catastrophes is pretty quiet, as it usually is these days. Quite a bit of the Department had been Mudbloods who are now safely locked away, and the few left have little to really do. Zara ignores the hesitant greeting from one of the older secretaries on the floor as she scans around for either Yurina or someone crying, since the Japanese woman usually isn't far from a scene like that.
 
But the floor is quiet and she doesn't bother checking individual offices - the whole place is small enough that she'd be able to hear it if something was off. So she heads back to the lifts and goes up a floor to the Department for the Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures.
 
She rather likes this floor and these offices, namely because if she hadn't joined the Dark Lord she likely would have ended up here, keeping track of vermin and protecting good Wizarding culture. She'd decided this a month before when she'd met one of the employees in the lunch room and heard about the Werewolf Registry. There's a desk job she could agree with.
 
Though her current employment is obviously leagues better.
 
She looks around the Department, taking more time to snoop in each office as it's much larger and more inhabited than the ones on the floor below, and soon enough she finds Yurina leaning against the wall in one of the private offices, smirking at an older woman who's clearly struggling to find something to say.
 
"Ms. Nakayashi?" The formality is bitter on her tongue, but Zara forces it out anyway. Only two days and she's in charge, she reminds herself as the Japanese woman turns to face her.
 
Yurina is one of the few people who stands at about the same height as Zara (she isn't sure exactly how they measure against each other - they both regularly wear tall heels) but she has a way of staring at people that makes them feel small. Zara has seen it directed both at others and at herself, but unlike the cowards of the Ministry Zara doesn't shy from the calculating gaze.
 
"I have some team placements to submit to you, on order of Yaxley." She says briskly, holding out the parchment as she maintains steady eye contact with the other woman. She doesn't bother elaborating on the requirements associated with the order - Yurina can decide herself whether to use the teams or not, and when she doesn't the Unit will finally have proper leadership.
 
Yurina raises an eyebrow and accepts the papers without looking at them. "If that's all Zara?" She says, her voice lilting and mocking all at once. "I have important things to be doing and your ridiculous attempts to not be a bottom-feeder are interrupting them."
 
Zara growls slightly but catches herself, shoots a glace at the other woman in the room who still look terrified, and turns briskly to head back to the Department of Law Enforcement to see what her assignment for the day is.
 
She's matched up with Fenrir Greyback, which is disgusting but she'll be in charge soon enough and for now she's more than capable of being the beast's handler for the afternoon.
 
"We'll be taking the Eastern border of the Forest of Dean." She tells the werewolf briskly as he leers at her.
 
"Gotta say you're much nicer to smell than the others I've been with." Fenrir practically purrs, trying to move close but Zara touches her wand under her cloak and throws up a shielding charm. Otherwise she ignores the come-on. One has to keep a firm hand with the mutt, only letting out enough leash for him to strike at the proper prey - otherwise he'd go after just anyone like the animal he is and that's no good for proper society.
 
They reach the forest by air - Zara isn't touching a werewolf, no matter if Apparation would be much faster. Fenrir lands on all fours, already sniffing around for any Fugitives in the area. Zara leaves him to it - she knows locating is Fenrir's forte so she'll focus instead on capturing whoever they come across, assuming they find anyone at all.
 
She scowls at the frost-heavy branches above them as she follows the werewolf into the woods. Too often these days the teams sent out come back empty-handed. Zara knows it's because they tend to be sent to different locations and thus can't prepare ahead of time, something she'd complained about plenty to her boss with no change.
 
"Hey, got somethin'." Fenrir grunts. 
 
"Then go get it. I'll back you up." Zara snaps irritably, and the man gives her a grin that's more bared fangs than smile before taking off after whatever trail he's picked up. Zara keeps close behind him, eyes a bit more alert and her wand now out and in her hand. Usually when they do run into Fugitives they're underfed and desperate, so having her weapon on hand is just good form. Never confront a cornered animal unarmed after all. She should make brochures when she's in charge with tips like that. Maybe some of the other Snatchers would actually learn how to do their job decently.
 
Fenrir catches up to their quarry, and Zara gets a glimpse of short, strawberry blonde hair before whoever it is spins and catches sight of them, yelping and Apparating away mere moments before Fenrir pounces onto where she'd just been.
 
"Ugh, why am I surprised. You can't just go racing around the woods making enough racket to wake the dead!" Zara shouts angrily.
 
Fenrir spins on her, eyes gleaming. "I didn't see you doing anything useful. Though I could fix that, I'm owed dinner." He growls threateningly only to be smacked across the face with a stunner.
 
"I'm a cat person." Zara sniffs distastefully at the prone figure before sighing and deciding to head home for the evening. Mutt-boy can find his own way back.
 
She drops her cloak by the front door and goes straight to the kitchen to tell her mother about the successes of the day as well as practice the proposals for her plans to get the Recovery Unit working properly that she'll be presenting to Yaxley once he transfers control of the Unit to her on Saturday.
 
Huiying is monitoring the dinner preparations as she always is, and Princess is seated on the kitchen island watching the utensils fly around with detached curiosity.
 
"Zara. You said it went well?" Her mother prompts without turning around, and Zara grins as she drops onto one of the seats by the island so she can scratch Princess behind her ears.
 
"Perfectly." Zara confirms, and proceeds to give a far more detailed overview than she had during their momentary passing earlier in the day. She also begins listing the ideas she'd had about the Unit and how she intends to implement them within the first week of her leadership.
 
"That's all very good, but how do you plan to sell it to Yaxley? You have to make him think it was his idea after all." Her mother observes as the food serves itself and the two women begin to eat, Zara passing the occasional bit of chicken to Princess on the chair next to her.
 
"Why do you think I'm telling you all this?" Zara replies cheekily, and her mother sighs.
 
"I think sometimes I raised you too well." She says wryly, and Zara can only laugh.
 
The next day she takes a morning shift so she can spend all day out in the woods, that way the experience is fresh in her mind for tomorrow. She's paired with two witches which is good - the women are almost always more competent than the men.
 
They trudge through the woods and Zara slyly slips her ideas for the Unit into casual conversation, grinning when the other two witches eagerly agree that they would be wonderful additions. They come across a few Fugitives and take down one of them, but the other has a friend that they hadn't seen and they both get away, much to Zara's frustration.
 
"This would happen far less if we had a clear list of who's out here." She observes idly to the woman still with her - the other had taken off to return the Fugitive they'd caught to his proper Azkaban cell.
 
"Oh absolutely." The woman agrees with a groan. "Honestly you should tell all this to Ms. Nakayashi, I think she forgets she's even running this Unit with everything else on her plate."
 
Zara forces herself not to glower at the name-drop. "Maybe someone else should be put in charge then." She suggests idly. "So that they can put all their energy into this and Ms. Nakayashi can put everything into her other projects."
 
The woman hums thoughtfully. "That's a pretty good idea." She admits after a moment, a bit hesitantly. "I don't know how Ms. Nakayashi would like it though."
 
Zara shrugs. "I imagine she would understand, she's a faithful follower of the cause after all. Surely she'll see reason if the leadership were to be placed elsewhere." Frankly she doesn't care what Yurina will think, and frankly hopes the other woman will be pissed off by Zara's rise to power, but Zara knows that good leadership requires obedient followers, and nothing inspires obedience like agreement. She needs this woman to like her.
 
It works - the woman is smiling less tentatively now. "You're right." She agrees after a moment. "Also I think I'm ready to go home, I need to make dinner for my kids."
 
Zara tilts her head in acknowledgement. "Of course, you can get going, I'll do one last sweep and head out myself, my cat is probably lonely."
 
The woman laughs and waves, and Zara wonders if she should have bothered to remember her name but it's a bit late now. So she shrugs, does the sweep, and goes home.
 
The next day she's summoned to Yaxley's office, and she grins as she strides to the door. Yurina hadn't implemented the teams so Zara is finally getting her proper recognition. She's gotten all dressed up for the occasion in her sharpest six-inch stilettos and a figure-hugging black dress that shows off all her best assets hanging underneath her open Ministry robes. She's dressed to kill and ready to take on the world.
 
Yurina is already in the room, looking bored and impatient all at once, and Yaxley is seated primly behind his desk. Them Zara had expected. But there's a third party in the room and she has no clue what he could be there for.
 
The young man - probably older than her, but everyone in the Ministry is for the most part - has a shock of blonde hair on top of a body that looks like it came right out of witch weekly, compete with the chiseled jaw and dark blue eyes. He also looks incredibly bored and Zara already doesn't like him one bit.
 
"Ms. Wong, excellent, you're here." Yaxley drawls. Zara scoffs - she's only two minutes late and the circumstances demanded an entrance, something she couldn't get if she wasn't the last to arrive. "As you know I have been considering redistributing the running of the Fugitive Recovery Unit in light of Ms. Nakayashi's already considerable work load."
 
Yurina rolls her eyes but otherwise keeps quite - clearly she wants this over as much as Zara does.
 
"With that in mind I have decided that the best option for the Unit at this time is to put people more familiar with the field in charge of running the direct operations of the Unit."
 
Zara's smile freezes on her face. That doesn't sound like she's being put in charge of everything. That sounds like bull political talk for-
 
"So while Ms. Nakayashi will still have full veto power over the activities and actions of the Unit, direct control of organizing, training, and dispatching teams will be delegated to Ms. Wong and Mr. Yaxley, the former due to her time working directly with the Unit and the latter due to his excellent standing as a top Hit Wizard. Regular reports of Unit activity will be submitted to Ms. Nakayashi every Friday. Any questions?"
 
Zara has questions alright, as well as quite a few complaints. "How exactly is Mr. Yaxley supposed to be of any use considering he has no knowledge or understanding of the workings of my Unit?" She points out irritably, knowing her mother would be horrified by the phrasing but not giving an arse just then. This is an affront and she'll respond to it as such.
 
"Theodore is a very skilled Hit Wizard, better trained in hunting down criminals than anyone in the Recovery Unit." Yaxley replies dryly, arching an eyebrow. "And you're far too young to be running things alone anyhow."
 
And there it was, the real reason she hadn't been given her proper due. People look at her and can't see past her nineteen years regardless of how much more effective she is than people with far more time under their belts.
 
Theodore Yaxley smirks at her from the chair he's still sprawled over. Yaxley. Obviously he's been chosen due to nepotism and is going to be supremely useless. "I'm just in charge of getting you all into shape, you can handle the paperwork. Writing essays isn't something I've had to do recently, so you'll probably be better at that anyway." He drawls.
 
Zara very much wants to punch him, but Corban Yaxley doesn't give her a chance.
 
"Now then we all have work to be doing so that will be all. Ms. Wong you'll show Theodore the Fugitive Recovery Unit's office spaces and bring him up to speed on the workings of the Unit. I look forward to seeing your progress when Ms. Nakayashi submits your first report next Friday."
 
Zara nearly bites her own tongue off in her effort to not snap back. Yaxley is, unfortunately, in charge of the entire department. He could take away her role and give everything to his... son? Nephew? She has no idea how Theodore is actually related to the Department Head. But she'll hold onto the power she's been given and take the rest later. Patience, her mother always says.
 
"Fine, come on." She grunts at Theodore, who rolls off the chair far too smoothly and prowls after her out of the office.
 
They walk in silence the short distance from the office to the Unit's room, Zara continuing to chew viciously on her own tongue the entire way. Once they're inside the room though she lets go.
 
"Let's get one thing straight here Theo," She hisses at her new - ugh - partner, "I'm in charge. I know this Unit inside and out and I know what will make it work. You just sit down and look pretty so your dad in there stays happy."
 
"He's my uncle." Theodore says idly, scanning the room and clearly only half-listening to her.
 
Zara growls and slaps him. That gets his attention.
 
"For 's sake I don't care about your stupid power trip or this Unit. Do what you want and I'll sign at the bottom." He snaps. "Not like I expected a child dressing up in mommy's clothes to know how to play it smart."
 
Zara sees red and her fingers brush her wand under her robes so she can fling a silent stunner at Theo - who blocks it silently and effortlessly. He smirks infuriatingly at her glare.
 
"My uncle wasn't lying that I'm a highly trained Hit Wizard you know. Top of my class. Don't mess with me and I won't mess with you. But give me a reason?" He leans down and lowers his voice threateningly. "I will make sure you're stuck on the bottom rung forever with no power whatsoever. Are we clear?"
 
Zara takes several deep breaths and resists the need to summon a knife to stab him in his stupid smug face.
 
"Clear." She grits out once she's calmed herself enough to keep her voice level. "I'm going to reorganize the teams and divide our hunting grounds into sectors."
 
Theo leans back and it's like a switch has flipped - he's back to the smarmy arsehat she'd seen in the office. "Sounds fine to me kid."
 
Zara growls under her breath but decides to simply ignore him for the time being. He said he'd keep out of her business, and since her business is running the Unit that means he'll keep out of it. And it will give her time to figure out how to get rid of him entirely - or at least ask her mother for advice on the situation.
 
Zara spends the day writing up new plans for the Unit while Theodore Yaxley flirts with every single female that walks into the room and is generally aggressively unhelpful. It's a long, draining day and nowhere close the victory Zara was supposed to have. She does manage to finish her proposals and reluctantly submits them to Yurina - or rather, leaves them on the woman's desk since she'd apparently gone home early for the first time ever.
 
Small wins are still wins, even if they do nothing to make Zara feel better about the situation.
 
Her mother is finishing dinner when Zara gets in, but she's not hungry and says as much to Huiying. Her mother raises an eyebrow knowingly and doesn't comment, simply turning back to the kitchen while Zara scoops up Princess and retreats to her room to cuddle her cat and work out how to fix her new problems.
 
Obviously she'll fix the Snatchers first, but once that's done? Theodore Yaxley has to go.
 
Author's Note: TRIPLE UPDATE WEEKEND! School is closed starting Monday (thanks Coronavirus) so I had to use my remaining library time wisely since I don't get anything done at home ^^''. So I wrote two essays and three chapters in five days xD Next chapter will be up tomorrow at midnight, and the third one will go up on Sunday at midnight (EST as usual)! And then we'll be fully made up for the concussion and be back to our usual schedule next week~
 
Next Week Tomorrow: The last thing they needed was their enemies getting organized
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So I'm thinking I might do a final 'afterwords' chapter to share my thoughts and feelings on writing this story, if that's something people would be interested in? I'm also open to answering any lingering questions people might have there as well!

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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2442 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2442 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2442 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
#9
Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
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Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P