Chapter Thirty-Five

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
March 23-26, 1998
"You had enough responsibility to be going on with"
 
It had taken two months, several dozen witches and wizards, and enough spell energy to set the entirety of a medium-sized country on fire, but the Order of the Phoenix's new Headquarters is done.
 
It's a modest enough structure on the outside, nestled out in London suburbia between well-manicured brownstones with over decorated gardens. It would fit right into the Muggle neighborhood Kent and Willow had selected weeks before when construction had begun, only none of their new neighbors can actually see the HQ building.
 
It's not Grimmauld Place, Kent can admit that, and if things go wrong in just the right way the house can be seen by people who don't necessarily know that it's there. However, the chances of that are low and most Order members are just glad to once again have a safe place to retreat to and share information and aren't too hung up on the chances of being found out by the Muggles surrounding them.
 
Theo had moved into the HQ as soon as it was set up, along with a couple other couch-surfing Order members who had the unfortunate luck to have been in England just as everything fell to the Dark and had ended up stuck on the island, unable to return to their home in South America. Kent hadn't minded Theo living with him and Willow, and Jemma had repeatedly pointed out (on the rare occasions she was home) that she always crashes on the couch anyway and thus didn't mind Theo using the guest room, but Theo had insisted on not "taking advantage" of their hospitality.
 
Kent does wonder if his partner regrets that choice, considering his roommates now are Paulo de Souza and Ryuunosuke Abe. Paulo had been a pen pal of Bill Weasley's while the two were in school and while no one is refusing his offer to help he's a bit of a chaotic character. His boyfriend Ryuu is frankly no better, though he's less chaotic and more quirky, but either way it means no one is keeping Paulo in check. Kent can only imagine how hectic the HQ must be on a day-to-day basis, though he himself has been holding back from visiting too obsessively - he wants to give Theo space if the other man needs it.
 
Willow is still living in his room, and they're still not really talking about what exactly their relationship is other than colleagues who kiss and also sometimes do a lot more than that, but she hasn't brought up labelling it since that first morning and Kent hasn't either. He figures if they both survive the war there will be plenty of time to work things out then.
 
They have talked about Theo though, at length and in detail. Willow doesn't trust his former partner, despite Theo having been entirely cooperative with sharing everything he knows about the Snatchers (or the Fugitive Recovery Unit as it's known in the Ministry) leading to the Order staging several successful attacks on the Snatchers before the other group had a chance to change tactics.
 
"How are we so certain he isn't feeding information back to them?" She asks again after the two of them have dinner at the HQ are are back in Kent's flat getting ready for bed. "His information went out of date pretty quickly but we're still giving him access to our newest secrets?"
 
Kent sighs. He gets why Willow is suspicious, knows she isn't the only one questioning his decision to bring Theo into the fold so quickly, but she doesn't know him the way Kent does, so it's been difficult to explain his choice to her - and to most of the Order. He's just lucky Kingsley had backed him up when he'd first told the leaders of the Order about Theo joining, otherwise Kent is pretty sure he'd've been booted from the Order alongside Theo.
 
"Just, can you trust me on this? And if not me, Kingsley?" He says pleadingly, not wanting to get into it tonight. "Theo's a good guy, just came from a bad situation."
 
Willow grimaces. "Right, because that excuses his actions. He still made his own choices Kent."
 
"And some of them involved sabotaging the Snatchers from the inside for as long as he could so you of all people don't really have a leg to stand on here." He snaps, because he's tired and they keep having this same argument and he's getting sick of it.
 
Willow just stares at him quietly for a long moment, and then sighs. "Fine, I'm sorry. I'm just worried is all. I don't want to see anyone else hurt."
 
Kent sighs. She's right, and he'd taken that too far, but she's already getting into bed and pulling the covers tightly around herself which is a good sign at least. If she was really upset she'd go sleep in Drake's room, or on the couch. The fact she's staying with him means he didn't break anything.
 
So he lets it drop and gets into bed as well, though sleep doesn't come easily.
 
The next morning he wakes up early and decides to make breakfast in bed for Willow as an apology for his comments. He won't get another chance until tonight since he has patrol with Laurel and Hestia Jones and she's going to be working with Kingsley at the HQ sorting through some information a raid a few days earlier had managed to steal from a Deatheater's home. It's possible neither of them will make it all the way back to the flat - Kent has started joining Drake in crashing at the Tremlett's empty home if patrols go later than expected and since the HQ is specifically built to be able to house several people at once Willow will sometimes just sleep there if meetings go long. So breakfast needs to be perfect.
 
Willow ruins the surprise a bit by waking up before he's finished cooking, but when she comes up behind him and leans her head on his shoulder while winding her arms around his waist he figures this isn't bad either.
 
"What's all this then?" She asks, still a bit sleepy but still scanning the food critically. Willow, Kent has learned, doesn't really have a phase in between being asleep an awake, jumping straight from one to the other, so once she's up she has little trouble processing her surroundings. "Did I forget an important date or?"
 
"I feel bad about what I said last night." Kent replies honestly - Willow won't appreciate anything else. "And everyone needs breakfast so." He shrugs and Willow buries her face in the back of his shoulder, where he can feel her smile. All is definitely forgiven, even if he knows Willow would insist there was nothing to forgive. But he also knows she still hasn't really forgiven herself for those early months of the war, and throwing them in her face was dirty and uncalled for and Kent would have felt bad about it for the rest of the day if he didn't do something to make her smile before they both leave for 'work'.
 
"I'm still impressed that you're a decent cook." Willow comments once the food is finished and they're both seated at the kitchen table.
 
"I'm still appalled that you don't drink coffee." He shoots back, and she laughs.
 
"Such a stereotype, that lawyers all need coffee to function. Yours is pretty good though, I'll give you that. But it's still unhealthy bean water."
 
"And you like your 'healthy leaf water'." He teases, and she laughs, and that right there will be something to hold onto to get him through whatever today brings.
 
He goes with Willow to the HQ and leaves her to chat with her sister for a bit, going further into the house to look for Theo, who had been unnervingly quiet at dinner the night before. Kent wants to make sure he's settling in alright.
 
He knocks on the door to what he knows is Theo's room, and a moment later it swings open to reveal sleep-mussed platinum blond hair and a bleary glare.
 
"What do you- Oh." Theo blinks. "Hey Kent, you're here already?"
 
"Late night?" Kent guesses, and Theo groans.
 
"I'm moving to a room not next to the lovebirds." He grumbles. "It's already ten though, I should eat. Thanks for the wakeup."
 
Kent stands in the doorway, feeling dismissed but not wanting to go just yet. For the first few days things with Theo had been amazing, like old times. Kent had chatted about anything and everything and Theo had made his dry quips and Kent felt like a piece of himself he hadn't even known was missing had fit back into place. And then Theo had very abruptly pulled back into himself and Kent was left wondering if it was something he'd done.
 
Willow had told him to give it time, that if Theo really had switched sides then he probably had a lot to process. But Kent has never been the most patient person in the world and he's getting rather fed up with waiting for Theo to come to him.
 
"Soooo, other than the neighbors everything is alright? You're settling in well? You can still have the guest room if you want, Jemma can take Drake's room since he's never home these days." Kent says, feeling like he's rambling, like it's the first day of his and Theo's partnership when he still didn't really have any idea how to act around his school-time quidditch rival. It's weird, feeling like that again now, years after the initial awkwardness had faded into a comfortable companionship.
 
Theo rolls his eyes. "I'm fine Kent. Don't you have a patrol to get to?"
 
"You could come with." Kent offers, impulsively, knowing logically that it's probably an empty offer, that Kingsley or Laurel will nix the idea in a heartbeat, but much as he's grown to trust the other Order members Kent thinks that having Theo by his side out in the field will feel safer despite everything. And maybe the familiarity will break down this sudden wall between them.
 
But Theo is shaking his head. "Can't, I've got chores." He says with something that borders amusement but is a bit too tired to fully commit. "I'll see you around though."
 
And with that Kent is ushered back into the hallway and Theo's door closes firmly behind him. Kent frowns at it for a long moment before reluctantly returning to the meeting room, where he knows Laurel and Willow will have gone after he'd headed upstairs.
 
Kingsley and Hestia are present as well, and they greet Kent politely and cheerfully respectively. He nods to them both, and then Kingsley and Willow head out to leave Laurel to explain the patrol plan.
 
"According to our intel a new section of the woods was just being establish for Snatcher patrols two months ago, but it wasn't until last week that we actually saw people in that area. The three of us are going to take a closer look and see if the people spotted were Snatchers or Fugitives, and if it's the former try to work out their patrol patterns."
 
Kent nods along with Hestia. It's standard faire, and the mission will likely wrap up sometime in early afternoon assuming nothing goes drastically wrong. Maybe he can get in some more time with Theo in the evening.
 
As expected the patrol is generally quiet - they determine that the people spotted were indeed Snatchers and take note of their exit and entry points so they can tell the twins, who will lay traps later in the week, time permitting.
 
Kent knows, as they Apparate back to HQ, that he should be pleased by the successful mission, but if he's honest he's starting to get twitchy again. The Order has fallen into a routine, and even if it's a routine that's doing more to help than the old one was Kent can't help wanting to push things even further. But with the HQ finished he has no idea what 'further' could even mean.
 
"You look ready to jump out of your skin." Laurel comments as they step into the main entrance. Hestia has headed out - she's got a dinner date, apparently, so hadn't apparated back with Kent and Laurel - so it's just the two of them in the cavernous entry. "What's up?"
 
Kent shrugs. "Just want to do more I suppose."
 
Laurel laughs outright at that. "You know I said the same thing to Eric yesterday, and you know what he told me? He said that if we did anymore we'd probably end up killing the Healers from sheer exhaustion."
 
Kent snorts at that, but definitely sees her point. Not all the Order members have left their jobs (yet - Kent is certain it's only a matter of time) and all the Healers are still on call at St. Mungo's. He thinks of Jemma collapsing onto the couch at three in the morning only to drag herself back out to work five hours later - and that's when she gets any sleep at all - and he definitely starts to feel a little bad about wanting to do more.
 
Laurel elbows him lightly. "Hey, I didn't say that to make you feel bad, jeez. Just, you know, remember to think past the immediate. Bad Gryffindor habit, I'm told." She adds with a sparkle in her eye that tells Kent it's definitely her husband who made that remark. "Speaking of school-time nonsense, I wanted to talk to you about Yaxley."
 
Kent doesn't bother holding back a sigh. Laurel may technically be his superior within the Order, but she's only a year older than him and their relationship has always been one of equals, even back on the Quidditch pitch in school.
 
"What about him?" He asks, resigned to yet another lecture about him trusting too quickly and too easily because of his past working relationship with the former Snatcher.
 
But Laurel surprises him. "I believe you. About him. Just wanted you to know that you've got me and Eric in your corner in all this."
 
He stares at her for a moment and he's pretty sure his jaw is hanging open and he looks like an idiot, but he can't help it. Nearly a decade they've known each other - this shouldn't be as shocking as it is. Laurel laughs.
 
"Hey, I remember how much you two hated each other back in school - something had to majorly shift for you to trust him that much. I mean, don't get me wrong I still think you're biased, but if he managed to turn you then there's definitely good in him. We just have to give him a chance to show us as well."
 
Kent hugs her. "Thank you for that." He tells her solemnly as he pulls away.
 
She waves him off. "We're friends Kent. I'll see about talking to Willow as well, I know she's a lot more jittery about this than I am and I can't imagine that's great for your relationship."
 
"She has her reasons." He says firmly, feeling the need to defend his... well, whatever he and Willow are, even from her own older sister.
 
Laurel laughs. "I grew up with her Kent, she always has her reasons. Sometimes she forgets to think about other's reasons though." She pauses, and then continues. "I guess I'll stick around until she and Kingsley are done - wanna toss a Quaffle around in the backyard? I've got practice tomorrow and I haven't been on a broom outside of patrols all week."
 
Kent grins. "I forget that the Quidditch season is still going sometimes." He admits as they make their way towards the back.
 
Laurel smacks him. "For shame! Leona does a great job commentating them, you should tune in to the match on Saturday."
 
They don't chat much once they're in the air other that yelling insults and trying to bait each other into losing focus. It's relaxing and enjoyable and for a few hours Kent isn't hounded by the constant nagging feeling that he could be doing more. Then he spots Willow standing below them, shielding her eyes from the setting sun and grinning, and reality closes back in.
 
They land and Kent gives Willow a quick kiss before she pushes him away and insists he shower. He laughs and acquiesces, leaving the sisters to talk.
 
He runs into Paulo as he gets out of the shower, and the other man grins and slaps his back like they're old friends instead of near-strangers.
 
"Kent! You are staying for dinner again?" He says with a bright smile.
 
Kent hesitates. "Well we weren't planning on it but-"
 
"Theo talks more when you're around." Ryuunosuke appears from behind his boyfriend, startling Kent and looking far too pleased about it. "Just so you know."
 
"Well, I'll have to ask Willow, obviously." He says tightly, and Ryuu pouts far too dramatically for someone who's supposedly the same age as Kent is.
 
"Ugh her. Fine." He flounces off, ignoring his boyfriend's attempt to give him a pointed look.
 
"What was that about?" Kent asks, fully ready to deck the Japanese man if he just insulted Willow. Paulo just sighs.
 
"Nothing nothing, he's just excitable. Why don't you and I go grab Theo, tell him dinner is ready? I'm sure Willow will be fine with it, you two ate here yesterday so why would today be different?"
 
Because her sister is probably talking to her about Theo right now and I'd like to be able to talk to her about it afterwards, but that's a private conversation we can't exactly have here? Kent thinks, though of course doesn't actually reply. He doesn't know Paulo or Ryuu well enough to explain something that personal (and frankly doesn't think he trusts Ryuu very much). So he just stays quiet and follows after Paulo.
 
They don't end up staying for dinner - Willow sites an early morning at work, reminding everyone in the process that she's one of the people that still has a job, and they excuse themselves from the HQ.
 
"So Laurel talked to me about Theo, which you probably know." Willow says almost as soon as they're home, and this is one of the moments that Kent likes how straight-to-the-point she always is. "And I get it a bit better now, I think. You tend to be biased - and yes so do I, I know," She adds with a smile when he opens his mouth to point out that exactly, "But I'll try to curb my bias a little more with him from now on."
 
Kent just smiles at her. "That's all I ask." He says, and that's that. As they make dinner together that night Kent thinks he should send Laurel something nice as a thank you. And also consult her a lot more when he's having trouble figuring Willow out.
 
Willow is already gone when Kent wakes up the next morning, which isn't uncommon on days she has cases. Kent likely won't see her again until tomorrow or even Friday depending on how long it take the Wizengamot to come up with a verdict. He himself doesn't have anything to do so he decides to lie in for a bit longer - at least until he hears the front door open and close. He knows it can't be Willow, so it must be either Drake or Jemma, neither of whom he's seen much of recently.
 
He stumbles out of bed and pulls on a shirt before padding barefoot down the hall to greet whichever of his elusive roommates it is.
 
Jemma blinks at him blearily from the kitchen, where she's brewing some tea. It takes a moment but she eventually finds her voice. "Good morning Kent. Drake around?"
 
"Not that I'm aware of, though you can check his room." He replies, his own voice still heavy with sleep. "You back for the day?"
 
She hums. "Wednesday. I'm off shift." She says simply. "And I unexpectedly had last night off too, so I might actually be awake for some parts of today." She adds with a smile that's clearly supposed to be wry, but ends up more twisted and numb than anything else.
 
Kent blinks, processing the words, then finally puts together what they mean. "You were here last night too?"
 
"Got in a little before you did, but I didn't hear anything if that's your concern." She says as the kettle starts to whistle. "I knocked out basically a minute after I heard you two Apparate in. Saw Willow this morning though, she left about an hour ago." She raises an eyebrow as she grabs the kettle. "Want one?"
 
He shakes his head. "I'll make some coffee, thanks."
 
She shrugs and pours herself a mug. "Suit yourself." She settles at the table and watches him quietly as he moves around the kitchen to start brewing his coffee. "Things going well with the Order?" She asks after a moment. "You finished the HQ, right?"
 
Kent hums, responding distractedly as he focuses on measuring the beans. "Yeah, couple weeks ago. Kind of bored now if I'm honest."
 
Jemma snorts into her tea. "I do seem to recall this place being an endless hive of activity when I was actually around, so that's not surprising. You're right though, there isn't much going on at this point - most patrols are turning up very little, though I do think the Snatchers are getting more violent since your friend left."
 
Kent grimaces, remembering belatedly what Laurel had said about his feeling restless. "Right, sorry I shouldn't-"
 
"Don't apologize, I get it." Jemma cuts him off with a smile. "I'd suggest finding something else to plan, though. I'd rather not have more work if possible."
 
Kent laughs weakly. "Fair enough. I'll think on it. So you planning to sleep today or?"
 
She shrugs. "Probably? I'm not sure what's going on tonight to be honest - I'm on call but I may not need to go in so. I'm thinking we should drag Drake out of my house and have a game day or something. I could use it."
 
Kent thinks they all could. The day is spent lazily (once they manage to wrangle Drake into submission, that is) and Kent is almost feeling good when Willow slams open the door around eight o'clock, causing Drake to jump and spill their Jenga tower across the coffee table.
 
"Damnit!" He shouts as Jemma laughs and claims her (fifth) victory. Kent is too focused on Willow to really take note though - she looks absolutely furious.
 
"They're dismantling the court system." She growls. "All the defense lawyers on the Wizengamot payroll - the ones who represent people who can't afford to hire private attorneys - were given their two week notice today." She groans and collapses onto the couch. "They're finally doing it. They're going to completely reverse all the human rights the Ministry is supposed to protect."
 
Drake and Jemma are quiet now, watching Willow as intently as Kent is.
 
After a moment, Jemma speaks up. "Well Kent, I think your new goal just dropped itself into your lap, don't you think?"
 
Kent looks at her in confusion, as do the other two, and she sighs.
 
"Obviously we need to get the Deatheaters out of the Ministry, retake control of the government? Kingsley and Theo both worked indirectly with the administration and Willow's seen it too - between them you can likely begin working out where the best places to strike would be." She hesitates, and then adds, "And there are probably people on the inside who would be willing to help out too, they just aren't out in the open with their unhappiness like we are."
 
Kent looks around at the group, and then nods. "I think you're right Jemma. I'll send a Patronus to Kingsley and get a meeting set up for tomorrow. Willow are you-"
 
"Still working. I'll be good for Friday though." She says firmly. "And I'll keep an eye on things tomorrow, see if I can't start reconnaissance a bit early."
 
Jemma does end up going out that evening after a snake Patronus informs her she's needed, but Drake sticks around for once and the house almost feels full for the first time in a while. Kent still has trouble falling asleep though, his mind swirling as it tries to put together a rough outline for their possible Ministry reclamation.
 
He's awoken in the morning by a Lynx patronus sitting on the end of his bed - a response from Kinglsey to the request Kent had sent off the night before.
 
"We'll meet at one in Headquarters." The wild cat informs him before vanishing. Kent yawns and stretches, finding the bed beside him unsurprisingly empty yet again. He takes his time getting dressed, and checks Drake's room on his way to the kitchen only to find it disappointingly empty.
 
Kent makes his coffee and then decides to go to HQ a bit early - it's not like he has anything else to do.
 
He's surprised to find the door answered by one of the Weasley twins (he ascertains that it's George with a quick and hopefully subtle glance at his ear) who beams.
 
"Hey Kent! Welcome to Mi Casa! That's spanish for my house." George says cheerfully, ushering Kent inside and closing the door. "Paulo is teaching us!"
 
Kent raises an eyebrow. "That's nice of him, but if you don't mind my asking, what are you doing here?"
 
"Potterwatch setup!" Lee Jordan shouts from somewhere in the house. He appears a moment later with his hair up in a bun and looking a bit frazzled. "The sticking sound projectors are acting up and I have no idea why. When is Leona getting here again?"
 
Kent blinks. "As in Leona Poole?" He double checks. Despite having known from the start that his sister's old classmate is a member of the Order, he hasn't actually ever seen the young radio reporter at any meetings.
 
"Yup." George confirms, popping the 'p' "She pulled a grand exit from her job a week ago so she's assisting full-time with Potterwatch now, which is great - she's brought a bunch of professional equipment so we should have fewer sound issues."
 
"Assuming we can get the dang stuff to work." Lee grumbles. "But why are you here Kent? I didn't think there were any patrols leaving from here today?"
 
"There aren't." A new voice pipes up, startling Kent (again). Ryuu grins sweetly from the staircase where he's suddenly appeared. "So Kent must be here for a different reason." He sing-songs the last few words and Kent sighs.
 
"I have a meeting with Kingsley later about a possible attack on the Ministry." He says evenly, not wanting to deal with the odd Japanese man longer than he has to. "Figured I'd just hang out here until then since I don't have anything else to do."
 
Ryuu pouts. "Oh poo. Well I'm going to get Theo anyway."
 
Kent just sighs and turns back to George and Lee as Ryuu flounces back up the stairs. "Anything I can help you guys with in the meantime?"
 
Ryuu returns about a half hour later with both Paulo and Theo, the latter of whom looks incredibly put-upon, enough that Kent can't help laughing at the sight.

"Guest room is still open." He says, and Theo rolls his eyes but does smirk slightly all the same.
 
"I hear we've got a meeting with Kingsley later?"
 
Kent nods, easily falling into work mode with his former partner. "We're hoping to stage an attack on the Ministry, take it back from the Deatheaters. We're hoping you'll be able to help us isolate the power structures and the best people to take out to unbalance them"
 
Theo hums. "Probably a good idea. Obviously my uncle needs to go down but Kingsley definitely already knows that. Runcorn and Umbridge as well maybe? I admit I don't know much about the workings outside of the people who worked with the Unit, and Zara isn't really a force to be reckoned with. Just put her against more than one person and she'll be overwhelmed." He speaks of Wong with a clear distaste, but Kent does note the first name use.
 
Theo blinks after thinking a moment longer. "Oh, and there's Yurina Nakayashi too, but she doesn't really do much?"
 
"Wait what? Who?" Ryuu interrupts, and Kent is ready to snap at him until he turns and sees that the other man has gone wide-eyed and pale. "Did you... is she a small Japanese woman who looks like she wants to eat you whenever she smiles?" He asks, his voice, for once, not lilting or mocking. If anything he sounds scared.
 
Theo frowns. "Yeah, that would be her. She mostly just goes around scaring people, but she's pretty harmless as far as I can tell - she doesn't really care about the Ministry so I don't think-"
 
"That's what she wants you to think." Ryuu cuts off, his voice firm and urgent. "Look, I know Nakayashi. Well, know of her, anyway. Every wizard in Japan does - she was the first person in decades to be expelled from Mahoutokoro in decades, and it was for extensive use and practice of Dark Magic. She's infamous for being utterly ruthless, merciless, and cunning." He's shaking slightly, and Paulo quickly slides an arm around his waist to offer some support. Ryuu takes a few breaths, smiles weakly at his boyfriend in thanks, and then continues.
 
"If Yurina Nakayashi doesn't want you to know something then you won't, and I can guarantee if you try to take back the Ministry without neutralizing her first anything you do is going to fail."
 
Kent frowns. "Come on, no one is that good."
 
Ryuu shakes his head. "Maybe not, but she comes close. I can guarantee everything she's doing has a reason behind it - we just can't see her big picture. Not yet. But I'm telling you, get her or give up."
 
Kent glances over at Theo, frowning. This may be a lot harder than he'd originally anticipated.
 
Author's Note: Oh Kent, always wanting to do more xD May have your hands full here though my friend! Next chapter sees the end of March! Then it's one more month before the final battle begins~ We're close to the end game now!
 
Next Time: She loves her boss, but this is a little overblown in her opinion
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So I'm thinking I might do a final 'afterwords' chapter to share my thoughts and feelings on writing this story, if that's something people would be interested in? I'm also open to answering any lingering questions people might have there as well!

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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2441 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2441 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2441 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
#9
Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
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Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P